8-1 Mindmap H -- Constructive Criticism by Megan Wilkinson

mwilkinson2 — 2016-09-15 15:27:43 UTC

jejoiner — 2016-09-15 16:34:39 UTC

Some of the points are over lapping which makes it hard to read

I like that you included lots of information but next time spread out the boxes.

jtaylor61 — 2016-09-15 16:37:05 UTC

cruiz8 — 2016-09-15 16:53:22 UTC

The boxes are over lapping, you should fix that

Scattered

ndawson1 — 2016-09-15 16:53:31 UTC

Boxes over lapping each other, and boxes aren't organized

rvilla1 — 2016-09-15 16:54:54 UTC

You had a lot of information but you need to space out your boxes, so that we can see it.

JuliannJones — 2016-09-15 16:55:50 UTC

You have a lot of information, but you should have spread it out more. It was hard for me to read it, some of the boxes overlapped, and there was too many words in the boxes so it made the words small.

Love it

ndawson1 — 2016-09-15 16:57:40 UTC

You need to move the boxes around so we can read all of them

cray3 — 2016-09-15 16:58:53 UTC

I like the information you put but like others have mentioned you need to spread it out more. I can't see some of the words because it's small.

amartinez46 — 2016-09-15 19:08:59 UTC

Need too move the boxes because some are over each other.

disidro — 2016-09-15 19:12:12 UTC

stsosie — 2016-09-15 19:14:20 UTC

Yall got it all wrong! THIS IS UNBELIVABLE HOW COULD YOU SEND THIS TO MS WILKINSON WITH SOME OF THE BOXES OVERLAPPING I CANT BELIVE THAT YOU DID THIS!!!!

dmartinez5 — 2016-09-15 19:14:26 UTC

not spread out enough

dserna — 2016-09-15 19:27:30 UTC

If these boxes were more spread out this would be well organized this is hard to read but what i did read was good, lots of info :P

pehawkins — 2016-09-15 21:31:48 UTC

needs to be spead out more

you need to space out the mind map cant read when the boxes overlap

dnewcomb1 — 2016-09-15 21:32:55 UTC

asingh9 — 2016-09-15 21:57:29 UTC

If the boxes weren't over lapping it would be pretty good. It has lots of information and it can be read easily, well the things i can read.

jvalladolid — 2016-09-15 22:23:41 UTC

i dont like how the boxes are all close together please try and fix that next time

<-- This made me laugh. Very good comment.

rbamburg — 2016-09-15 22:57:44 UTC

Your overlapping make it seem almost as if you purposely connected mental hospitals to Education. Thank goodness for the different colors. Another mistake that you made was that you didn't mention Shaker communities which are just as important as utopian communities.

rbamburg — 2016-09-15 22:58:16 UTC

nisidro — 2016-09-16 01:42:07 UTC

the boxes are overlapping , so its not possible to be read

You guys should of spread it out more because they are over lapping but i do like the info on it. :)

amartinez46 — 2016-09-16 02:28:52 UTC

wrowan2 — 2016-09-16 03:22:21 UTC

You should spread the boxes out. But the info doesn't need improvement.

sdelfin — 2016-09-16 04:00:37 UTC

Even though you can't read some of your boxes you add lots of information. if you would have spread it out a little more it would have been better.

Good information but everything is crowded so you could have put in a little more work on presentation

aluna7 — 2016-09-16 04:34:58 UTC

lugutierrez — 2016-09-16 04:49:11 UTC

you need to spread out the boxes

rvilla1 — 2016-09-16 04:52:48 UTC

You guys have good information but it is hard to read because some of them are overlapping. so just fix that next time and it would look great.

eriesen — 2016-09-16 04:54:10 UTC

Overlapping boxes.

dnoland2 — 2016-09-16 05:38:20 UTC

Really good mind map. The only thing i can say is you could've formatted it so it's easy for others to read. <3

jruiz6 — 2016-09-16 05:45:55 UTC

this has good information but the mind map is messy

skandler — 2016-09-16 17:14:01 UTC

To much information is each little box