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Unit 1

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-03 06:38:56 UTC

Make notes about traditional musical instruments
Complete a mind map. Write about greetings in different cultures. Plan a story for young
children.

Unit 2

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-03 06:38:56 UTC

Write about improving health.

1. Descriptive writing

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-03 06:38:56 UTC

Imagine you are watching a dhow race. What can you see? What can you hear?
Describe what you think about it.

2.

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-03 06:38:56 UTC

Write a description of this traditional instrument from
Europe. What is it made of? How do you play it?

Example 3 (you were asked to complete this)

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-03 06:38:56 UTC

Look at this picture of Al Khazneh in Petra, Jordan. Research the points below, then write a paragraph. Add more information if you can.
• Who built it?
• When it was built?
• What it was built from?
• Who visits it today?

4. Camel racing

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-03 06:38:56 UTC

You are a TV or radio commentator. You
have been asked to write a commentary for
a big racing event. Describe the events as
they happen. Use a storyboard to help you
plan your text. Include:
• The name of the event.
• When it takes place.
• The number of people there.
• The names of the competitors.
• How the race progresses.
• The finish.

5.

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-03 06:38:56 UTC

How would you write an introduction?

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The Dos and don'ts

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1. Paraphrase the statement - write it in your OWN WORDS (step 1)
2 Add an interesting fact to hook the reader
3. Add your thesis statement
The following essay will describe / explain/

NEVER
add new information
don't give advice (unless it is an opinion essay)

Noor Jasem

2021-10-03 07:39:43 UTC

4.
Today there is a camel racing event in Dubai, taken by five Camel riders. This event is very important which shows a traditional event in UAE. The race should begin now!
Please re-do as instructed

Amna khalid

aakk25100 — 2021-10-03 07:40:38 UTC

2:
The harp is a stringed musical instrument with separate strings that run at an angle to the soundboard and are plucked with the fingers, harps had spread across Europe by the Middle Ages and harps were found all over the Americas
Please paraphrase the entire introduction

The harp is a stringed instrument with separate strings running diagonally to the soundboard, harps became popular in Europe during the Middle Ages harps can be found all over America
Good

Alya Hassan

2021-10-03 07:42:37 UTC

Shorten your sentences, avoid using the words 'and ' too many times

marzooqijojoali — 2021-10-03 07:46:24 UTC

Jawaher Ali
2 -
The Harp is a musical instrument and it relies on strings . Its made of wood. Strings are made of wire, played with the soft sides or tips of your thumb and first three fingers .
This is very well written

Ghaya essa

2021-10-03 07:47:23 UTC

The harp is a stringed musical instrument that has a number of individual strings running at an angle to its soundboard the strings are pulled with the fingers .

Please paraphrase

Alya Hassan

2021-10-03 07:49:02 UTC

This is much better

Mazna Omran

maznaoalb — 2021-10-03 07:49:40 UTC

1.
Watching large 60-foot sailboats race terribly,

Please can you add more information

Maryam Abdulla 4:

2021-10-03 07:52:26 UTC

There is an exciting camel racs today in Abu Dhabi at 4 pm. There will be so many riders in the event, this race is important and exciting race.

Shahad ali

2021-10-03 07:52:30 UTC

The camel race is traditionally in UAE. the race was on the site Entrance No. E37, Dubai - Al Ain Road, more than 200 people attended. They train camels and then they race a group of camels.

Maryam Juma [3]

2021-10-03 07:53:14 UTC

Sara Waleed

2021-10-03 07:55:46 UTC

The dhow show- Al Gaffal Race takes place in spring in Dubai. The Emirati families really likes this show, it’s one of the huge shows they like .The celebration is also supported by Sheikh Hamadan Bin Rashid Al Maktoum.
Very good

Taiba Ahmed

2021-10-03 07:55:57 UTC

Al khazenah is one of the most elaborate temples in petra a city of the Nabatean Kingdom inhabited by the Arabs in ancient times, it was built in the second half of the reign of King Aretas 18-40 AD

Please write about another topic

Alya Abdulla

2021-10-03 07:57:15 UTC

The dhow sailing races are without a doubt the most spectacular and graceful. In keeping with tradition, all dhows gather at the starting line and on the starter's flare, hoist their sails almost instantaneously to illuminate the coastline in a blaze of white.
Please re-do in your own words

Alya Abdulla

2021-10-03 07:58:25 UTC

Moza Jasim

2021-10-03 08:10:49 UTC

In this essay I will describe camel racing. Camel racing is a popular sport in Western Asia especially in the Middle East. This event is important especially In UAE tradition. It happens in all seven emirates. As a matter of fact camel racing happens every year.
Well done

Shahad marwan

2021-10-03 08:26:49 UTC

4:
Today there will be a camel race in Abu Dhabi
Large number of people will be there
as will be ten camels to rise
It will start at 5pm and finish at 6pm
This race is from one of the UAE traditional things so it’s important

Maryam Abdulla (3)

2021-10-03 08:27:45 UTC

Al Khazneh is in Petra Jonder it was built in history of 5th century, King Aretas IV who built the Al Khazneh, it was built for mausoleum and crypt, the visitrs of Petra are more then 1 million people.

4 mayam s

2021-10-03 08:33:09 UTC

There is a camel racing event in UAE , Dubai , taken
Place by five camel riders . The camel events is very important which shows A traditional event in UAE .

There are grammar and spelling errors

Unit 1

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-07 05:47:24 UTC

Conjunctions

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Adjectives

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Present Perfect Continuous

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Unit 2

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-07 05:52:33 UTC

First conditionals

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sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-07 07:19:43 UTC

Countable and uncountable nouns

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amna

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-10 07:25:26 UTC

Exercise is known to help people burn calories and fat.
Sport helps one lose weight. The following essay will describe how exercise/keeping fit/sport can be enjoyed/fun/enjoyable.

Jawaher Ali

marzooqijojoali — 2021-10-10 07:28:47 UTC

Yes, because exercise helps to change the mood

Try and not just answer the question, write an interesting fact

Body paragraphs

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-10 07:37:19 UTC

What is your favourite musical instrument/ genre of music
when did you start listening to it
how does music make you feel

Amna khalid

aakk25100 — 2021-10-10 07:39:06 UTC

Piano is known for music lovers so that they could play and hear their favorite type of music. The following essay will describe how playing the piano is entertaining.

The piano is a global instrument, it gives the player a great sense of music theory, music theory makes up most of the world of music. Firstly, To practice being a pianist you have to have a sheet music to practice with. The sheet music helps you play the piano within a certain set structure. Secondly, Pianists don’t use music sheets although they memorize music because it helps them play with better musical expressions.

Alya Hassan

2021-10-10 07:43:17 UTC

Music can be enjoyable and soothing specifically soul music. the violin is a very hard instrument to play but is very beautiful to hear and works very well with soul music. This essay will discuss what soul music is and how the violin works with soul music.

Soul music is a type of music that originated from the African American community in 1950s and early 1960s and is one of the most popular genre of music for dancing and listening in the United States. it also reflects the identity and the importance of the African-American culture.

Shamsa

2021-10-10 07:46:39 UTC

The guitar is my favourite musical instrument there are five main types of the guitars, the classic guitar makes me feel happy and comfortable , The following essay will discuss the types of classic guitar .

Jawaher Ali

marzooqijojoali — 2021-10-10 07:48:23 UTC

The following essay will discuss about my favorite music. My favorite type of music changes according to my mood, but I like the type of soft music, and one of my favorite singers is Rashed Al-Majed.

Sara Waleed

2021-10-10 07:52:22 UTC

The following essay will be about my favourite music. Music is a beautiful old art. The Guitar is my favorite musical instrument. I really enjoy hearing music played on the guitar.Hearing music gives me some positive energy and I like to hear old classic music .

Fatima shurafa

2013013308 — 2021-10-10 07:55:58 UTC

I love a piano that makes me feel relaxed and completely relaxed. I like to let Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart play. He is the most famous pianist.

Meznah Rashid

2021-10-10 07:59:17 UTC

Yes it can, many people think that exercising so bored and hard and some of them think that all of the exercises are fun ,however it depends on the personal proneness and desire and the needed .

People hates exercising cause it’s so hard , tiring and it needs many power that what they are thinking about and even they think it’s wasting time ,it just about the chosen and the needed like if you don’t have any sport motivate or sport proneness you’ll can’t do it ,not enough to feel that you want only be fit you need some motivate or excite .

People who like sport and love exercising and they do it daily or weekly it not depends even on the time you do it ,it just you should feel fun and happy when you’re doing it ,and you know that is helps you to make our body healthy and good ,those people knows that exercising are fun and exciting so they feel that .

So if you try to love or like something and get used to it you’ll have fun when you're doing it .

Shahad ali

2021-10-10 08:01:06 UTC

The piano is dedicated to playing music, there are many who can play and there are people who play to relax or have fun.
The following essay will explain the classical piano.

Fatima shurafa

2013013308 — 2021-10-10 08:01:12 UTC

Becouse the exercise let me fell so good and not to fell bord

Hind Khalid

2021-10-10 08:01:34 UTC

The arabic oud is my favourite musical instrument ,the oud has only five strings. with a small musical box and a long neck . I don’t know how to play it, but I like to listening to the singers when they play . It’s makes me feel happy.

Maryam Juma

2021-10-10 08:03:02 UTC

The following essay will be about my favorite instrument music. Music is a type of art that uses sounds to express feelings and expressions. I have so many favorite instruments like the piano and the violin, but the kalimba is the one I play the most. It's a musical instrument with a wooden soundboard and metal keys.

Fajer ahmed

fajeralhmmadi2 — 2021-10-10 08:06:28 UTC

Drum is my favorite musical instrument. there are meny kinds of drums. My best drum is the bongo drum because it makes me happy and excited.

Shamam Mohammed

2021-10-10 08:17:56 UTC

Yes, exercises have many fun ways, such as listening to songs or sitting in a natural place. It is also good for tightening the body and highlighting the bone.

Maryam faisal

2021-10-10 08:19:38 UTC

The following essay is about my favorite type of music. To begin with, music is known for being extremely enjoyable. I don't know how to play music, but I enjoy listening to vintage music from the 90s. I started listening to classic songs when I was 14 years old. When I listen to this type of music, I feel good and my brain begins to relax.

Shahad marwan

2021-10-10 08:19:40 UTC

Music can change people’s mood and give them positive energy. My favourite musical instruments is the classic music , I have enjoyable time while I’m listening to music, the following essay will describe tips of music.

adjectives - comparatives and superlatives

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-10 14:06:00 UTC

https://create.kahoot.it/share/comparatives-and-superlatives/6892afa3-44b1-421f-af2d-a2837b9be706

First conditionals

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-10 14:18:45 UTC

https://create.kahoot.it/share/zero-and-first-conditionals/035acaa5-54f1-4e68-b1ec-4636fc3eda62

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-10 14:22:49 UTC

present perfect continuous

sharlene_moodley — 2021-10-10 14:25:35 UTC

https://create.kahoot.it/share/present-perfect-continuous/ead13c0a-250b-4885-a07a-fe43a46d80f8

Shahad marwan

2021-10-13 03:42:53 UTC

Exercise can change people’s mood and give them positive energy.
As it helps our body to stay healthy .

Alya Abdulla

2021-10-13 03:45:04 UTC

Sure, exercise can be fun because when you play tennis or any other exercises with your friends you will have much fun, and you can also lose weight during the exercise, I like doing exercise i have too much fun when i do it.

Fatima shurafa

2013013308 — 2021-10-13 03:48:43 UTC

There is camel racing in Dubai camel racing club The event was followed by a celebration that included camel races and fireworks 
It will start at 11 am

Ghala Hamdan

2021-10-22 06:37:24 UTC

The following essay will be about my favorite music. Music is a beautiful thing that adds atmosphere and melodies to our lives. My type of music depends on my mood and the place, I don’t have a specific taste, I like to hear everything. My favorite singer is The Weekend and I like English, classic songs more than other songs.