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      <title>Write an essay summarising and evaluating the key points from both texts.  Use your own words throughout as far as possible, and include your own idead in your answers.   by Kev Kung</title>
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      <pubDate>2023-11-04 06:25:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Gladys :P</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/kltkung/summaryessay/wish/2776131099</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>In the modern society, surveillance cameras are widely use <strong>not </strong>only in public areas but also private areas for security purposes. Based on the texts given, both are giving complimentary reasons on <strong>the benefits of </strong>surveillance cameras.</p><p><br></p><p>Both texts pointed out the importance of the usage of CCTVs. The first text focuses on CCTVs in open areas as the CCTVs is ubiquitously use in public areas to prevent crimes from happening on the street <strong>(No reason to fear them if you are not doing anything wrong)</strong>. While the second text highlighted the advantages of surveillance cameras as they contributed a lot in safety assurance like preventing crimes from happening and at the same time increasing the awareness of the public towards crime.</p><p><br></p><p><s>The idea of both texts strongly agrees with the utilization of CCTVs</s>. In my opinion, the 1st text <strong>stresses on / accentuates</strong> <s>enhances </s>the advantages of CCTVs usage in public / accessible <s>society </s>areas as more and more crimes are arising and with the help of CCTVs, the authorities could catch the criminal red handed more effectively. For text 2, with the help of surveillance camaras, people will have <s>more </s>stronger evidence when it comes to court cases. Moreover, having the CCTVs, prevention, the main target will become achievable in no time.</p><p><br></p><p>In short, the public should be educated on the the advantages of using surveillance cameras in order to decrease the crime rate which is at an alarming rate nowadays and also <strong>to </strong>ensure that everyone could live in a safer society.</p><p><br></p><p><br></p><p><br></p><p><br></p><p><br></p><p><br></p><p>(I tried, hopefully it worked out well. Thank you teacher :P)</p><p><br>In the modern society, surveillance cameras are widely use not only in public areas but also private areas for security purposes. Based on the texts given, both are giving complimentary reasons on the benefits of surveillance cameras.</p><p><br>stresses on / accentuate</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-04 14:08:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>boo ping</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/kltkung/summaryessay/wish/2776133259</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Public surveillance is the new norm for today's society, seeing widespread use anywhere you go. Looking at the texts, both appear to be complimenting each other in terms of their reasoning.</p><p><br/></p><p>Both texts stress out the importance of surveillance cameras. Whilst the first emphasizes on their use cases in public areas, along with the hope of the public supporting it the second text focuses more on the advantages of those cameras in general, as well as spreading awareness of crimes and suppressing it at the same time.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-04 14:12:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Loh En Jou</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/kltkung/summaryessay/wish/2776133731</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Surveillance cameras are often installed in public places. Without a doubt, both text support this notion and give complementary reasons for the importance of surveillance cameras. </p><p><br></p><p>Both texts depict the upsides of surveillance cameras towards the public and also crime detection. The first text highlights that surveillance cameras are clearly observable in public areas. People think that it should be kept running continuously as it is for the benefit of the public safety. The second text discusses about the aim of surveillance cameras is to safeguard the public by demoralizing criminal activity but not to invade people's privacy. It also stresses that alertness of possible crimes or misfortunes can be increased by safety investigations before they occur. </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-04 14:13:10 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Isaac Low</title>
         <author>izlowjk123ii</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/kltkung/summaryessay/wish/2776134315</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Most people are aware that security camera is <strong>(cameras are)</strong> all around us especially in public spaces. Undoubtedly, both texts complement each other to support this notion on the ways safety is provided through this mean.</p><p><br/></p><p>Both of the text expresses that closed-circuit television (CCTV) prevents civilians in <strong>(from)</strong> becoming victims of crime. The first text argues that people are aware that surveillance is inevitable and continuously support it in the name of safety. Likewise, the second text points out that this mode aim to raise awareness of these wrongdoings and defend the public by decreasing those who are brazen enough to commit it. <strong>(deterrence)</strong></p><p><br/></p><p>The arguments offered in the both text are valid and reasonable. I have to say that in the first text, the point raised is true as you rarely ever see people rant about being watched as they understand the benefits it brings. Moreover, a sign which shows that surveillance camera around can cause criminal to be afraid of committing anything illegal which correlates to the points in the second text. Furthermore, experts can use the footage of crime captured to do research to maintain the serenity of our daily life by decreasing acts that violate the law.</p><p><br/></p><p>All things consider<strong>ed</strong>, I believe that the application of this system is truly advantageous although there are slight setbacks. It <strong>is </strong>crucial to provide a safe living space for citizens to live in so that daily activities wont be affected by such atrocities which can halt economic and productive contributions to society. If everyone worked together to make sure that the introduction of this is smooth, we will be able to enjoy the pros that this will bring to us.</p><p><br>(d</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-04 14:14:24 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Janice</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/kltkung/summaryessay/wish/2776134458</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>The presence of surveillance cameras are ubiquitous to be seen everywhere we go. Both texts support and give complementary reasons on the purpose of surveillance camera.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-04 14:14:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Gift</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/kltkung/summaryessay/wish/2776135389</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>CCTV cameras have a significant role in contemporary security and can be found in almost every public location. Although there is still controversy on this matter, these two texts represent complementary, optimistic viewpoints. </p><p><br/></p><p>Both texts present reasons for supporting for the maintaining widespread surveillance. The first text suggests that the visibility of cameras acts as a deterrent, warning offenders that their acts will be filmed. The presence of CCTV cameras is comforting rather than threatening to law-abiding citizens. Moreover, the second text claims that cameras primarily serve to discourage crime by producing evidence for prosecution and alerting authorities to suspicious situations, enabling proactive approach to prevent criminal activity. </p><p><br/></p><p>The arguments made in both texts are interesting. In my opinion, the most significant component of preventing crime is the strength of security analytics, as mentioned in text two. This capability enables law enforcement to predict and prevent crimes, shifting the focus from relying solely on post-incident punishment to proactive prevention. Furthermore, photographic and video evidence can be used to analyse and create a statistical overview of various types of crimes, leading to the development of effective preventative strategies. Although, the argument presented in the first text is that the mere existence of CCTV cameras can deter potential terrorists from taking action. However, I believe this is effective for only a minority. A cautious and premeditated wrongdoer can potentially avoid being captured on camera.</p><p><br/></p><p>In conclusion,  I strongly agree that some parts require thorough examination by the public, particularly in the case of security analytics. I also think that the sense of protection they offer justifies a trade-off in terms of a certain level of personal privacy.</p><p><br/></p><p>(275 words)</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-04 14:16:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sze Yi</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/kltkung/summaryessay/wish/2776135534</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Recently, surveillance camera has become an integral part of our daily lives, whether in public places or private areas. As we can see, both texts seems to be complementary to each other on the purpose of surveillance cameras.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-04 14:16:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>aldric</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/kltkung/summaryessay/wish/2776135641</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Surveillance these days oversee every nook and cranny, as they are installed at every corner. Base on the texts, it is assumed that they are complementary of each other.</p><p><br/></p><p>Both text highlighted the benefits of having surveillance however the first text emphasizes having cameras around a public space. Whereas in the second text, it stresses the benefit of having cameras installed generally, acting as a deterrent of crimes by preventing it entirely by using mass data.</p><p><br/></p><p>Both texts provided logical and strong arguments. In the first text, it mentioned the sense of security it gives to the public...[ aight 5 mins break for myself :3 ]</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>I have always been a fan of "prevention is better than cure", however, some events are bound to happen, like night follows day. With that said, </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-04 14:17:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Suggested Answer</title>
         <author>kltkung</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/kltkung/summaryessay/wish/2777466835</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>If you walk through any public space in any city, chances are that you will spot at least one surveillance camera.  The issue is controversial; however, these two texts provide complimentary positive views.</p><p><br></p><p>Both texts offer reasons why we should not only tolerate but also welcome these cameras.  The first text maintains that because everyone can see the cameras, they know that any misdeeds they commit will be recorded on film.  It also adds that this is comforting rather than threatening for most law-abiding citizens.  The second text maintains that cameras are there to prevent crime and they accomplish this by providing evidence that can lead to prosecution, as well as flagging up suspicious situations so that police officers can act before a crime is even committed.</p><p><br></p><p>While the points in both texts are valid, I feel that the power of security analytics mentioned in text 2 is the most significant factor in crime prevention.  This is because it can predict and give law enforcement a chance to prevent crimes rather than just punishing the perpetrators.  However, while most people agree that cameras discourage planned crimes like vandalism and theft, as suggested in text 1, critics have raised the point that cameras have little effect on crimes that are committed on impulse.  What is more, the prediction of crimes come with a catch: who sets the parameters of what is suspicious, and what happens if someone gets it wrong?</p><p><br></p><p>Though I believe there are clearly factors that need close public scrutiny when it comes to surveillance cameras especially regarding security analytics, I would agree that the sense of protection they they offer is would agree that the sense of protection they offer is well worth some sacrifice of privacy in public places.</p><p>   </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-06 06:10:10 UTC</pubDate>
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