https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0 When you are done, open your journals and start writing! en-us 2018-10-11 01:56:05 UTC 2018-10-11 01:56:10 UTC hello@padlet.com araj0750 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531521 Elementary memory]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531521 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531537 Memorable family vacaton]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531537 bbra6920 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531557 Family Vacation ]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531557 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531569 Family vacation]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531569 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531579 Be the Expert]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531579 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531589 New family member.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531589 gdua9400 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531603 QUICK WRITE : Weekend Stories]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531603 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531615 Family vacation


]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531615 mjoh1180 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531629 one thing i remeber in elementary school.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531629 mflo7940 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531644 About 5th grade]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531644 dmur8470 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531660 The time I had to change]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531660 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531670 An embarrassing moment]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531670 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531682 snow day]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531682 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531692 family vacation

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531692 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531706 life changing

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531706 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531719 Something I would fight for.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531719 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531733 Something i would fight for.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531733 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531746 Birthday Party]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531746 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531757 Memorable Family vacation]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531757 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531772 Using synonyms can make writing more interesting because it uses words that make you sound more professional.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531772 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531784 Using synonyms could make your writing interesting by replacing the words like sad,happy or sad.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531784 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531792 Synonyms make the writing more interesting because good bad sad are all dead words]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531792 gdua9400 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531797 so synonyms are used in a story  needs to express  more detail with "happy" you express not much emosion but with a word like "exstatic" that expresses emosion in mor detail and thats why you use  SYNONYMS]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531797 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531805 Because using the same words over and over again makes the story boring to read, and using different words make it stand out and sound like you are a professional.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531805 mjoh1180 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531807 Using synonyms makes words better and interesting when reading or writing.

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531807 mflo7940 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531811 It makes people enjoy your writting]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531811 dmur8470 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531814 Synonyms helps the other reader understand the word.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531814 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531817 Using synonyms makes words better and interesting when reading or writing.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531817 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531822 it makes the writting more enthusiastic]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531822 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531826 if you want to say good try and say it more interesting.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531826 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531829 Using synonyms makes my writing interesting by giving details and making you sound more professional]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531829 araj0750 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531832 Synonyms lets the reader understand better of the word.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531832 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531836 If your wanting to say happy but don't want it to sound boring, so you can use synonyms to make it sound more excellent. ]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531836 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531838 using synonyms makes writing more intresting because instead of happy you can have joyful!!!!!]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531838 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531841 Synonyms can make the story sound better instead of just the same word over and over again.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531841 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531844 Using synonyms makes the boring words interesting ]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531844 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531853 Three interesting facts I learned today in editing and revising is that you could sound out the words,you need to remove repeated words,and to remove sentences that are "off topic." ]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531853 gdua9400 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531859 1 is that you can do an infante amount of rewrites until you think its ready

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531859 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531868  1. Editing is a way to fix your sentences while revising helps you spice it up
2. Editing helps you with spelling
3. Revising helps you make more interesting stories and sentences]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531868 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531876 1. Editing finds misspelled words and corrects them,  but revising adds and removes words.  
2. Editing checks for good grammar, and revising substitutes words that don't make sense or are used constantly.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531876 mflo7940 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531887 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531887 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531892 You can add appropriate end marks]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531892 mjoh1180 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531903 i learned revising is looking over your story for mistakes and editing is fixing your mistakes you make]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531903 bbra6920 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531911 You can add words to make writing interesting 
Capitalization is key 
Spelling helps your writing ]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531911 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531920 Something i learned about editing is you use CUPS to check your writing.For revising i learned that you can replace words with others and make it better]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531920 dmur8470 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531935 1. Editing and revising makes your story more legible to read after checking it.
2. It makes your story not boring.
3. Helps make it more interesting.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531935 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531948 1. i learned that you have to re-read 
2.and you have to fix your mistakes 
3.and you have a published journal]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531948 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531967 when you revis you have to do it more than once]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531967 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531984 we have alot of rough drafts
we end up with a really good story
we learn more]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531984 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531998 1. Revising is adding things that make your story sound more descriptive
2. Revising is also removing things that don't fit there or don't make sense.
3. Editing can help your story sound better and make it look better.

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291531998 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291532012 i learned revising is not just revising is not just reading over agian it takes lots of trys and is hard work ]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291532012 araj0750 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291532050 I learned that when revising you can add more words to a sentence.
I also learned that you can remove words. Finally i learned that you can substitute words for another word. ]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291532050 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291532063 Editing and revising help make your story much better and interesting.Revising helps you not spell things wrong when you write a book. Editing can help you make sure your writing makes sense.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291532063 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291532072 1- Revising is re-reading over and over
2- It can take many times to write a perfect story
3- Editing can help your story sound better.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291532072 https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291532084 1. In editing you have to do usage
2. You can remove words from your story
3. You can add words to your story]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/scbs1nkmh6y0/wish/291532084