https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z Leave me some feed back on my writing pieces! en-us 2022-01-31 14:13:22 UTC 2022-04-11 13:25:43 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2023512649 i like how you chose your data especially the first one ]]> 2022-02-01 15:02:19 UTC https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2023512649 https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2023525787 I like how you made the counterargument and the reasons that you gave ]]> 2022-02-01 15:07:36 UTC https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2023525787 https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2023533004 there are some paragraph errors]]> 2022-02-01 15:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2023533004 27jacevedo https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2023555863 I really loved your essay! One thing i liked about it was the conclusion. The sum up sentence at the end convinces the reader to do something about this problem about stinky smelly garbage food with no flavor. Another thing i love is the counter argument. You included the other opinion on this topic, but made a great argument against it! The only wish i have for this essay is that you would fix your paragraphs. Make sure to pay attention to P.A.T.S!! Other than that, your essay is very good and very persuasive. Great job Michelle ]]> 2022-02-01 15:19:26 UTC https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2023555863 https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2088546410 I liked how you came up with the idea the heat o wave because normally in the morning to lunch the food gets cold and nobody wants a cold lunch so i like that idea]]> 2022-03-10 15:14:49 UTC https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2088546410 27arajadhyx https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2088811991 I really liked the neatness and the aesthetic including the structure and the overall neatness of your prestintaion and i do think that’s plays a big role with some one liking you presentation 

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One wish is that i wish it had more depth at times it felt a little bland ]]> 2022-03-10 17:25:28 UTC https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2088811991 27kchen https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2139149948 1 star: I like the defining details in your article such as the parenthetical phrase in your first paragraph.

1 wish: I wish you could shorten the length of the paragraphs]]> 2022-04-11 13:24:14 UTC https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2139149948 27sdhanantwari https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2139152548 For your informative article, I really liked the topic you have chosen. People do know some basics about space but in your article, it goes really in-depth with it. I like it! One wish I had was your layout was a little bit weird. I felt like it was all over the place but overall, a really great article! ]]> 2022-04-11 13:25:43 UTC https://padlet.com/27mwashington/sbxe7f8ro9kdez3z/wish/2139152548