Report text part 1 - Observing Videos_XA4 by paulina rian

Jethro_4

2021-01-06 05:41:19 UTC

The Video is good. it explains why and how animals play dead ( Opossum, fish, reptile, etc.)

Jethro_4

2021-01-06 05:43:24 UTC

The video is interestimg. it explains and report how octopus live and reproduce

Jethro_4

2021-01-06 05:43:33 UTC

THe Second Video (Octopuses) because the video looks more like documentary about octopus. While the first video is more about explain why and how animals play dead.

Alfon_5

alfonsuskurniawan — 2021-01-06 06:50:25 UTC

The first video is telling and explain about many animals about why,when and how the animals use playdead with the example.

Alfon_5

alfonsuskurniawan — 2021-01-06 06:50:44 UTC

The second video is explaining in general about the octopuses,with other octopuses facts that we don’t know.

Alfon_5

alfonsuskurniawan — 2021-01-06 06:50:59 UTC

The second video,because it’s explain more details and general about the octopus.

Nuel_31

2021-01-06 08:09:03 UTC

my first impression about this video is to explain about how animals react when its threatened, so animals do the play dead

Nuel_31

2021-01-06 08:26:28 UTC

the video about the octopus are good and interesting. it tells how intelligent and how dangerous octopus are, how they live and grow ( ink-spraying, shape shifting, and self destructing )

Nuel_31

2021-01-06 08:30:41 UTC

the video of octopus is more into report text, because it have more detail about an animal (describes in general). the first video explains not only one animal.

Ary_8

2021-01-06 10:44:56 UTC

The first video is explaining to us about how the animals play death when they get threathened and for some animal its for deceive prey and also for mating

Ary_8

2021-01-06 10:48:53 UTC

the video is reporting and explain interesting fact about octopus and the interesting fact is divided by several point so it help us to understand the video better

Ary_8

2021-01-06 10:52:00 UTC

i think the second videos is more like report text than the first one because the second is explain the interesting fact more detail and general. while the second video is just explaining to us why the animal play death. my suggestion to make the first video more into report text is to make the video straight to the point, explaining it more details and reduce unnecessary conversation

Aven_10

2021-01-06 11:23:18 UTC

The video tells us about how some animals play dead when they got threatened to survive.

Aven_10

2021-01-06 11:24:33 UTC

The video tells us about general information about octopuses, such as how they live, how they give birth, and what they do when they get attacked

Aven_10

2021-01-06 11:29:21 UTC

The second video is near to a report text. Because it explains using scientific facts and more detail. Meanwhile the first video is more like explanation text. Suggestion to make the first video more into report text is make it more objective.

Vincent_36

2021-01-06 12:44:05 UTC

The first video was showing a unique information about animal tactic to survive from their assailant. It's showing what are the function, the reason, and how it works.

Vincent_36

2021-01-06 12:48:37 UTC

The second video is talked about some octopus general facts. It's talked about the fact of their unique ability that can be seen with eyes and can't be seen with eyes.

Vincent_36

2021-01-06 12:59:22 UTC

I chose the second video that talking about octopus. The video is more focusing on showing one object that is octopus and their general information. It's not talked about why it happen etc, but it's more talked about a general things that could be showing. The last reason is because it's more sound objective. It are uses a specific quantity or data.

Rangga_11

2021-01-06 16:07:53 UTC

The video amazed me because I just learned that animals can play dead. In the video someone explains why and how animals play with their death in order to survive, prey on and mate. The video is very clear and detailed to understand how the animal could play with its death and why the animal did it.

Rangga_11

2021-01-06 16:20:45 UTC

Next, with the second video is about octopus. I think, the video is interasting about the facts of octopus. In this video, it explains how to live an octopus in the sea such as how it forages, how long to live the octopus, protecting itself with its deadly ink, how to reproduce, and especially the intelligence of the octopus.

Rangga_11

2021-01-06 16:27:15 UTC

In my opinion, the second video entitled "octopuses" is more reporting than the first video. So, the first video is report text, not the first video. The first video, entitled "play dead" is an explanation text because in the first video it explains how and why animals play death while for the second video it explains how an animal is in general. And, my suggestion about the both videos is is on the first video should be more detailed and general explain.

Joseph_21

2021-01-07 00:47:53 UTC

The first video explains how certain animals survive by play dead. This text also tell us about Tonic Immobility (TI) in animals and humans.

Joseph_21

2021-01-07 01:26:21 UTC

The second text is explain how octopus live, survive and reproduce. The text also explain parts of the body the octopus and their uses.

Rio_30

petrusherjanto — 2021-01-07 04:01:08 UTC

The video is make me interesting and now I know the animal can survive by play dead.

Rio_30

petrusherjanto — 2021-01-07 04:03:44 UTC

The second video is very good because it provides general knowledge and report about how octopus to live and reproduce

Rio_30

petrusherjanto — 2021-01-07 04:06:02 UTC

The second video is near to be a report text because inside of the video they use scientific facts. Also inside the video give general and detailed explanation. While the first video just explain how the animal play dead.

Andis_15

2021-01-07 08:34:08 UTC

The first video is tell us about how, when, and why animal use play dead.

Andis_15

2021-01-07 08:38:41 UTC

The second video is tell us about octopus in general, like how octopus live, parts of the body from octopuses, and some facts about the octopus.

Andis_15

2021-01-07 08:45:01 UTC

The second video because the video only talk about octopus. At the first video not only talk about one animal but many animals. The second video also explain details about the octopus.

Reno_6

2021-01-07 09:23:29 UTC

This video is interesring because the narrator and the animation is good.This video tell us about an animal survival tactic that is called play dead.This video explain about when,how and why animal use play dead.

Reno_6

2021-01-07 09:30:58 UTC

This second video i think is very interesting because it have a beautiful octopuses video.This video is provides a general information about octopuses like how it reproduce,the octopuses intelligence,and others.

Reno_6

2021-01-07 09:36:43 UTC

I think the second video (Octopuses) is near to be a report text.The information in the second video i think more general than the first video.I think the second video is also more objective than the first video.The first video also have some unnecessary conversation that's make it can not to be a report text.

Joseph_21

2021-01-07 13:09:51 UTC

The second text more near to a report text because the second text is full explain about octopus from start video until the end but in the first text tell more about how many animals survive from their predators.

Isel_23

2021-01-09 11:43:08 UTC

The first video explains about how to animal can survive using a tactic called play dead

Isel_23

2021-01-09 11:50:24 UTC

The second video is interesting. The second video is tell us about general information from octopuses, like octopuses knowledge, how octopuses survive using their ink and reproduce.

Isel_23

2021-01-09 11:56:16 UTC

The second video is near to a report text because the second video only explain about octopus. The second video also tell about general information from octopus. The first video not to be report text because there is unnecessary conversation

Yoseph_37

2021-01-10 02:48:38 UTC

The video contains about when, why,and how some animals play dead in dangerous situation in order to survive and trick their predators.

Yoseph _37

2021-01-10 02:51:30 UTC

The second video contains about general information of octopus such as how they escape from their predators and their camouflage ability.

Yoseph _37

2021-01-10 03:04:38 UTC

The second video is near to the report text because it is give us general information in advance and give detailed information based on scientific data. While the first video is near of the explanation text simply because it is explain how and why something happend.

Bastian_34

2021-01-10 06:54:16 UTC

The first video tells us about why and how animals play dead as a survival strategy.

Erik_25

2021-01-10 06:55:35 UTC

The video 1 is explaining why animals play dead, and how animals do the play dead.

Bastian_34

2021-01-10 06:56:32 UTC

The second video tells us the general information of the octopus such as how they live, reproduce, survive and etc.

Erik_25

2021-01-10 07:03:58 UTC

The video 2 is explaining about octopus in general, such as the characteristic of their body, behaviour, and so on.

Erik_25

2021-01-10 07:06:27 UTC

The video 2 is near to a report text, because its explain the octopus in general and not using subjective opinion. Suggestions to make video 1 more into report text are avoid the subjective opinion, and describing the play dead in general not in a specific animal.

Sabda / 29

pandebanyu — 2021-01-10 11:46:00 UTC

This video is talking about about playing dead in animals such amphibians, mammals, and anything else. The details in this video is spoken subjectively with some scientist research. The script in this video is flowly spoken without any points.

Satrio / 33

2021-01-10 11:50:49 UTC

The "Play Dead" video is telling about the abilities of several animals called Tonic Immobility. This video explain several types of Tonic immobility from several animals.

Sabda / 29

pandebanyu — 2021-01-10 12:02:57 UTC

This video is talking about octopus in general description divided by many points about how they survive, reproduce, live, they characteristic, and more.

Sabda / 29

pandebanyu — 2021-01-10 12:10:23 UTC

The second one, because it is talking about one object, octopus in general. The script is also divided in several points, about how they live, survive, reproduce, etc. The first video is talking about palying dead in several animals not only one specific animal.

Bryan_24

2021-01-10 12:36:04 UTC

The first video is so interesting, because the video explains why and how animal do play dead and the animation is so good to.

Bryan_24

2021-01-10 12:38:50 UTC

The second video tell me general information about octopus, like how they live, how they protect by enemy attack, and the explanation is pretty good.

Bryan_24

2021-01-10 12:41:18 UTC

The second video,because the second video is explain about general and detailed information about actopus based on real data, and the first video is not detailed about one animal playing dead but gift information about much animal which playing dead.

Satrio / 33

2021-01-10 12:58:36 UTC

The second video explain one object which is octopus. In this video, octopus is identified into several poins, like anatomy, lifetime, reproduce, octopus' abilities, etc.

Satrio / 33

2021-01-10 13:04:51 UTC

I think the second video because octopus which is the main topic is described in detail. In this video, octopus is described. In this video, the information based on real data. Example and illustrations are given so we as the viewer can be more clearly to understand it.

Louis_17

2021-01-11 04:59:00 UTC

The first video make me feel more curious about play dead or scientists call it tonic immobility. some animals have TI, for example opossum, fish, and any other else. scientists use TI for educational purpose or do a surgery.

Louis / 17

2021-01-11 05:12:55 UTC

I like how they explain about octopuses. it already clarify for me. they explain it very neat. I can easily understand each point for example about the brain, blood, ink and any other else.

Louis / 17

2021-01-11 05:24:07 UTC

In my opinion, the second video is really close to a report text rather than the first video because the second video explain one common animal but more specific and based on data research. My suggestions for the first video is give us extra minute to explain a specific animal who really expert at play dead.

Rafael _ 32

2021-01-11 06:06:18 UTC

The first video make me know about what is play dead or TI or tonic immobility and who can play dead and the type of TI or tonic immobility and why animals do play dead

Rafael _ 32

2021-01-11 06:14:29 UTC

The video is good because they explain about octopuses with general information like how they protect them from predators ,what they behaviour and other else

Rafael _ 32

2021-01-11 06:50:28 UTC

I think second video is more into report text because video two is explain with general topic and specific information and with the research first because the information is based on real data

Dimas_3

2021-01-11 12:47:56 UTC

The Video is good, and the video also make me know about what is play dead or TI (Tonic Immobility) and also the video is interesting

Dimas_3

2021-01-11 12:50:13 UTC

I like how they explain about the octopuses. In this video, the octopus is can be identified into several poins, like anatomy, lifetime, reproduce, octopus' abilities.

Dimas_3

2021-01-11 12:54:01 UTC

I think in the second Video is more into report text, because in the video two, it explain about general topic and specific information and with the investigation first and the information was on real data / fact

Axel_9

2021-01-12 06:56:28 UTC

The first video is good. The video is about how animals play dead and produce an unpleasent smell to protect themself from predator. That ability scientist called it TI or Tonic Immobility. For spider TI used for mating.

Axel_9

2021-01-12 07:03:52 UTC

The video is very good. The video tells us about how fascinating an octopus is. The video is explaining the viewers of the anatomy of octopus, the lifetime of octopuse, how they reproduce, and octupuses abilities.

Axel_9

2021-01-12 07:09:55 UTC

The second video is closer to a report text. It's because the video is explaining about octopus in depht with specific information like the anatomy of octopus and why the anatomy is special.

Lius_22

2021-01-12 08:52:00 UTC

The video is good. It is about why animals do the play dead such as fish, chicken, etc. Also, how the animals do the play dead or TI (Tonic immobility).

Lius_22

2021-01-12 09:00:16 UTC

The video is amazing. It's about octopus with general information and some information that we might don't know about octopus.

Lius_22

2021-01-12 09:06:18 UTC

In my opinion, this second video is close to the report text. Because the second video tells about an octopus in general and specifically like an octopus in general, it can also imitate the texture's thing for its skin. while the first video tells about animals do the play dead but not just one animal.

Hans_19

2021-01-12 11:07:13 UTC

The first video is good. the video is giving an axplanation of how the animals protect them self for predators by playing dead

Hans_19

2021-01-12 11:56:20 UTC

The second video is interesting. It's tell about a general information about octopuses like abillity, reproduce dan how they protect them self, this which maybe i don't know what it is and what it does.

Abbas_01

abbasnattalegawa — 2021-01-12 11:57:56 UTC

The first video talks about the reasons why some Animals, such as Sharks, Chicken, Possum, and other animals Play dead as a survival tactic. And also this Video explains what is Thanatosis, play dead, or TI ( Tonic Immobility ).

Abbas_01

abbasnattalegawa — 2021-01-12 12:01:53 UTC

The second video talks about Octopuses life, body system, some of Octopus's abilities. And the video talk about Octopuses with General information.

Hans_19

2021-01-12 12:09:30 UTC

The second video is closer than the first video, because the video is explain more specific than the first video. Like describing the octopuses abillty and the body sistem with clearly, and tha first video is just telling what is playing dead, why they prented to be dead, and how they do it, but not specific.

Abbas_01

abbasnattalegawa — 2021-01-12 12:19:47 UTC

In my opinion, the second video is almost the same as a report text. Because the second video explains more generally than the first video. The first video is more like an explanation text because talks about why and How Animals Play dead or TI ( Tonic Immobility )

Gesang_12

2021-01-12 12:42:03 UTC

The first video talks about why and how animals do the play dead for some reasons. For example, some animals do the play dead as a survival tactics from the predators. They also have many ways of doing play dead.

Gesang_12

2021-01-12 12:56:54 UTC

The second video talks about some interesting octopus facts. This video also reports on the general characteristics of octopus, like their life span, body systems, deadly ink, and many more.

Gesang_12

2021-01-12 13:04:31 UTC

The second video is nearer to a report text then the first video, because the second video contains general description and scientific facts of octopus. While the first video is an explanation text because it contains about why and how animals do the play dead.

Edward_14

2021-01-12 13:07:39 UTC

The Video was very usefull and very informative. It told us about some animals tricks to avoid their predator (Tricked), with their ability that called TI (Tonic Immobility).

Edward_14

2021-01-12 13:10:11 UTC

The Video was also very informative. It told us some facts about Octopus that we may not know.

Michael_26

2021-01-12 13:10:41 UTC

I think the first video, play dead is very interesting. The first video tells us about how living organisms protect themselves from predators. They call it IT or Immobility tonic when they try to appear dead in front of their predators. Not only to protect themselves, but also to be used for mating by some animals.

Edward_14

2021-01-12 13:11:28 UTC

The video that is closer to a report text is the second video, about Octopus. Because the way they told us / the information was more general than the first video. Also the second video rarely using some sepcial terms (That isn the indication).

Michael_26

2021-01-12 13:21:31 UTC

The second video is also very interesting, because it tells about some facts that I don't know, such as their anatomy, their abilities and how they reproduce.

Michael_26

2021-01-12 13:25:13 UTC

I think the second video is closer to a report text. To make the first video more of a report text, they didn't need to explain in detail, the report text only needed general information.

Arnold_7

arnold123 — 2021-01-12 14:21:06 UTC

This video is good. The video explain tactic animal from predators, how animal play dead and what the reason animal play dead.

Seto_28

2021-01-12 14:23:16 UTC

The video 1 Explaining how or why the animal plays died, to protect itself from predators or other reasons, all explained there in detail. The animation is also good makes me easy to understand it.

Seto_28

2021-01-12 14:30:46 UTC

The video 2 is explains 1 object more specifically, namely about the octopus. How about its blood, anatomy, reproduction, and various uniqueness and details about octopus. Also included is clear video documentation that is clearly visible.

Arnold_7

arnold123 — 2021-01-12 14:31:19 UTC

The second video is very good and informative. This video explain some fact about octopus, like abilities octopus, body systems, octopus reproduce and octopus life.

Seto_28

2021-01-12 14:45:03 UTC

Video 2, because it is more detailed and specific because it depicts 1 object into a more structured and complete object, and video 1 is incomplete because it explains 1 type of animal ability to many other animals who have it and do not focus on one object even though it describes the same ability.

Arnold_7

arnold123 — 2021-01-12 14:46:42 UTC

In my opinion, the second video is closer to the report text. Because the second video explain about the octopus with the specific information while the first video just explain how and why animal play dead.

Marley_18

2021-01-12 14:59:18 UTC

The video 1 explaining about the animal play died to protect from the predator or when felt threatened .

Marley_18

2021-01-12 15:01:46 UTC

The video 2 explains specifics about octopus, From Abilities until body systems.

Marley_18

2021-01-12 15:06:06 UTC

I think the second video is near to a report text because the second video is more specifics about the object.

Bastian/34

2021-01-13 00:06:29 UTC

The octopus video is the closest to a report text because it informs the general information of the octopus, while the play dead video is more of a explanatory text which is more to explaining then reporting.

Aji_35

2021-01-13 04:53:50 UTC

The video 1 Explain how the animal plays died, to protect animal from predators or other reasons, all explained there in detail.

aji_35

2021-01-13 04:55:38 UTC

The video tells us about general information about octopuses. how they live, and what they do when they get attacked from other animal

Aji _35

2021-01-13 04:57:19 UTC

I think the second video is near to a report text because the second video is explain for general and more specifics about the octopus.

Radit_20

2021-01-19 14:16:24 UTC

That video tell how the animal plays died. The animals was in the video like chiken, fish, etc.

Radit_20

2021-01-19 15:30:28 UTC

The video tell us abot report or general description of octopuses. This video also tel us abut reproduction, anatomy, and anything else about octopus.

Radit_20

2021-01-19 16:03:07 UTC

I think video 2 is the report text, because video 2 is about general description not like the first one is more spesific.