Maxx M. Google Sites Peer Feedback 2020 - 2021 by Maxwell Monderoy https://padlet.com/27mmonderoy/s9ca46zz03kp9zp5 Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 19:00:09 UTC 2025-10-03 22:40:25 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png Aidan https://padlet.com/27mmonderoy/s9ca46zz03kp9zp5/wish/1513625442 i like how in your bridge you connected it to the hook and showed why no community is a problem
I like how you connected your thesis statement to all of the points and ideas that were mentioned in your essay.
Make sure to watch your punctuation, capitalism, and spelling errors.


]]> 2021-05-11 14:43:01 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmonderoy/s9ca46zz03kp9zp5/wish/1513625442 Jake 27jogg1 https://padlet.com/27mmonderoy/s9ca46zz03kp9zp5/wish/1513864177 I like that you are super sincere with you introduction because you transition so smoothly.
The Body paragraphs are excellent because you explain them with so much confidence.
There are many grammar errors, misused uppercases, and double spaces please fix them.]]> 2021-05-11 15:29:10 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmonderoy/s9ca46zz03kp9zp5/wish/1513864177 Cayden 27cbenoit https://padlet.com/27mmonderoy/s9ca46zz03kp9zp5/wish/1614796810 I like how in the story instead of saying the whole entire thing that happened was real you said it was just a dream. Not only that but you made it so that dream was enough to stop the kid from not having impolite manners. I also like how you  came up with a really good idea. I think it was cool to have manner monsters as what will happen to you if you don't have manners. The thing I thing you could’ve done better is to not have a part that repeats in the story. It was a bit confusing when I was reading.]]> 2021-06-18 18:26:09 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmonderoy/s9ca46zz03kp9zp5/wish/1614796810