What do we notice? (per 5) by Monica Craggs https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd 1) record your quotation (w/ paragraph) 2) explain the impact en-us 2021-02-25 16:30:20 UTC 2026-01-07 06:29:42 UTC hello@padlet.com "It was to give a voice to those who were not heard; to add a rung to the ladder of opportunity; to make real the dream of our founding" (7). monicacraggs https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1241910440 President Obama relies on a series of semi-colons to connect shorter phrases that all start with "to..." and when he does this, it emphasized the impact that Senator Kennedy had throughout his life. When the audience here "to give a voice," "to add a rung," and "to make real," the changes that Senator Kennedy pushed for stand out as his legacy.]]> 2021-02-25 16:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1241910440 "Ted Kennedy became more alive to the plight and suffering of others— the sick child who could not see a doctor; the young soldier sent to battle without armor; the citizen denied her rights because of what she looks like or who she loves or where she comes from" (p7). https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243054235 In paragraphs 1-4 Obama described Kennedy's early life, and the hardships that came with it. There is a shift in tone towards paragraph 6 and 7 where Obama uses those hardships to describe Kennedy's motivates. President Obama added Kennedy's accomplishments to his explanation with dashes, semicolons and conjunctions. This allowed audience members to understand how Kennedy's personal life affected his career. ]]> 2021-02-25 20:04:10 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243054235 "And it would have been easy for Teddy to let himself become bitter and hardened; to surrender to self-pity and regret; to retreat from public life and live out his years in peaceful quiet. No one would have blamed him for that. But that was not Ted Kennedy" (5-6). https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243054725 By stating that any common man might give up and wallow in the suffering that happened in Kennedy's life, Obama emphasizes how extraordinary Kennedy's resolve was, as he was able to overcome an obstacle that many others would stop and never pass. Obama's comparison within the text works to strengthen Kennedy's character to the audience. ]]> 2021-02-25 20:04:17 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243054725 "He was a product of an age when the joy and nobility of politics prevented differences of party and philosophy from becoming barriers to cooperation and mutual respect—a time when adversaries still saw each other as patriots. " vm449 https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243054919 President Obama connects the fact that in Kennedy's time both political parties saw each other as patriots every though they were adversaries, which ties into the whole idea of patriotism anyways, he uses the - to connect the sentence to shorten it and make it more comprehensible. Basically he summarizes what he says.]]> 2021-02-25 20:04:20 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243054919 He lost two siblings by the age of sixteen. He saw two more taken violently from the country that loved them.** He said goodbye to his beloved sister, Eunice, in the final days of his own life. He narrowly survived a plane crash, watched two children struggle with cancer, buried three nephews, and experienced personal failings and setbacks in the most public way possible. https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243066555 Obama uses the repetition of the word he to hook in his audience on who's struggled he's relaying to, only to close quickly with a list of them to fully gather their attention.]]> 2021-02-25 20:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243066555 "Ted Kennedy’s life’s work was not to champion those with wealth or power or special connections. It was to give a voice to those who were not heard; to add a rung to the ladder of opportunity; to make real the dream of our founding." https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243072816 He was able to accomplish multiple things that are still influential today and important or as Obama explains it]]> 2021-02-25 20:08:37 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243072816 "This spirit of resilience and good humor would see Ted Kennedy through more pain and tragedy than most of us will ever know. He lost two siblings by the age of sixteen. He saw two more taken violently from the country that loved them.** He said goodbye to his beloved sister, Eunice, in the final days of his own life." https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243133330 In this paragraph Obama is telling the audience about many things Kennedy has faced throughout his life hardships that made him a strong individual. ]]> 2021-02-25 20:23:55 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243133330 " He was given the gift of time that his brothers were not, and he used that gift to touch as many lives and right as many wrongs as the years would allow." (7) jn411 https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243177424 President Obama give a sense of hopefulness to the audience to ensure Sen. Kennedy completed many accomplishments.]]> 2021-02-25 20:35:22 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243177424 "Ted Kennedy’s life’s work was not to champion those with wealth or power or special connections. It was to give a voice to those who were not heard; to add a rung to the ladder of opportunity; to make real the dream of our founding." fa871 https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243203681 Obama further explains why Kennedy got into his line of work; to help those who don't have a voice. By speaking about his accomplishments and motives, Obama is able to strengthen his eulogy. ]]> 2021-02-25 20:42:31 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243203681 "He lost two siblings by the age of sixteen. He saw two more taken violently from the country that loved them.** He said goodbye to his beloved sister, Eunice, in the final days of his own life. He narrowly survived a plane crash, watched two children struggle with cancer, buried three nephews, and experienced personal failings and setbacks in the most public way possible." (P4) https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243402347 Obama explains the hardships that Ted Kennedy faced, but after everything he has been through he never went into hiding or stepped away from the light. Instead he kept his head up and continued to help others. For Obama to speak about his hardships can show the audience the kind of person he was and that his is a person to honor. ]]> 2021-02-25 21:43:26 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243402347 "The restless dreamer who became its rock. He was the sunny, joyful child, who bore the brunt of his brothers’ teasing, but learned quickly how to brush it off" (P3). https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243542406 Obama is highlighting Ted Kennedy's characteristics to give the audience an insight on the type of person he was. His tone throughout the speech was serious as he's grieving a loss, but switches to brightening the mood that compliments the feeling of happiness when he shared a little story about Ted Kennedy ]]> 2021-02-25 22:40:21 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243542406 "We can still hear his voice bellowing through the Senate chamber, face reddened, fist pounding the podium, a veritable force of nature, in support of health care or workers’ rights or civil rights" (8). https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243705637 President Obama explains how much Kennedy fought to protect the people of this nation. ]]> 2021-02-26 00:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243705637 "Through his own suffering, Ted Kennedy became more alive to the plight and suffering of others— the sick child who could not see a doctor; the young soldier sent to battle without armor; the citizen denied her rights because of what she looks like or who she loves or where she comes from. The landmark laws that he championed—the Civil Rights Act,..."(P7). hs630 https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243845747 Obama explains how Kenndy dealt with his own hardships but, became more aware of those who were suffering in this country and implemented many acts to grant rights to his citizens. He uses semi colons and dashes between "suffering of others— the sick child who could not see a doctor;" to describe Kennedy's hardships and suffering of others.]]> 2021-02-26 01:35:55 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243845747 ¨He lost two siblings by the age of sixteen. He saw two more taken violently from the country that loved them.** He said goodbye to his beloved sister, Eunice, in the final days of his own life. He narrowly survived a plane crash, watched two children struggle with cancer, buried three nephews, and experienced personal failings and setbacks in the most public way possible¨ (P4) https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243953334 Obama explains to the audience all the challenges and hardships that he faced. He uses the repetition of the word ¨he¨ to show the hardships that he had faced such as losing some of the people that he had loved. By repeating the word ¨he¨ is emphasizes to the audience that Kennedy had gone through so many struggles in his life and he is strong for that. Kennedy used those struggles as motivation to keep moving forward and continue working hard. Knowing how the struggle feels like, he can understand Americans that may be going through a tough time right now and help them.]]> 2021-02-26 02:44:48 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1243953334 "This spirit of resilience and good humor would see Ted Kennedy through more pain and tragedy than most of us will ever know. He lost two siblings by the age of sixteen. He saw two more taken violently from the country that loved them" (4). https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244046385 Obama deescalates his speech by explaining the challenges that he had endured. He talks about how even though Kennedy's life had obstacles, he was still able to get back up and face the world. Death was a continuous theme that would occur as Kennedy's life went on, but it wasn't something that stopped him at the end. ]]> 2021-02-26 03:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244046385 "He lost two siblings by the age of sixteen. He saw two more taken violently from the country that loved them.** He said goodbye to his beloved sister, Eunice, in the final days of his own life. He narrowly survived a plane crash, watched two children struggle with cancer, buried three nephews, and experienced personal failings and setbacks in the most public way possible" (P4). va276 https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244057610 Obama pointed out how Kennedy went through many obstacles throughout his life. Obama tries to show his audience how Kennedy continued to move forward after dealing with so many loses. Overall, he wanted to show how much of a strong individual he really is. ]]> 2021-02-26 03:59:08 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244057610 "And it would have been easy for Teddy to let himself become bitter and hardened; to surrender to self-pity and regret; to retreat from public life and live out his years in peaceful quiet" (5). https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244106544 Here Obama is demonstrating how Ted Kennedy lost a lot of people close to him as well as things he had to sacrifice to achieve the things he wanted. By adding semicolons, there is a bigger importance on this sentence, because it makes the reader pause more and pay more attention to what it's saying. Kennedy suffered a lot in his journey, but he didn't allow all of that suffering to bring him down, and so he thrived in the end.]]> 2021-02-26 04:37:42 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244106544 "Ted Kennedy became more alive to the plight and suffering of others— the sick child who could not see a doctor; the young soldier sent to battle without armor; the citizen denied her rights because of what she looks like or who she loves or where she comes from" (7). kc531 https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244155809 Obama tends to use a lot of semi colons, which is demonstrated in this quotation as Obama used semi colons in order to connect phrases that begin with "the..." Obama continues to start with the phrase "the.." when stating the different people that Kennedy has made an impact on; therefore, Obama was really able to emphasize that Kennedy made an impact on many peoples life who were in difficult situations. Also, this repetition that occurs really stands out as it emphasizes the true impact Kennedy had. ]]> 2021-02-26 05:28:10 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244155809 “Through his own suffering, Ted Kennedy became more alive to the plight and suffering of others— the sick child who could not see a doctor; the young soldier sent to battle without armor; the citizen denied her rights because of what she looks like or who she loves or where she comes from. The landmark laws that he championed—the Civil Rights Act, the Americans with Disabilities Act, immigration reform, children’s health care, the Family and Medical Leave Act—all have a running thread.” (P7) ac876 https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244156133 This paragraph was mostly about Ted Kennedy's own suffering and how he became more aware about the suffering from others as well. ]]> 2021-02-26 05:28:32 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244156133 "He lost two siblings by the age of sixteen. He saw two more taken violently from the country that loved them.** He said goodbye to his beloved sister, Eunice, in the final days of his own life. He narrowly survived a plane crash, watched two children struggle with cancer, buried three nephews, and experienced personal failings and setbacks in the most public way possible." (P4) tt343 https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244308467 Obama lists several hardships in Ted Kennedy's life that had to do with his siblings. With the inclusions of his siblings, Obama tries to convey how hard these events were for Ted and how he persevered. The events also connect the audience with Ted as anyone who has similar experiences to the ones Ted has can sympathize and understand the pain and sadness Ted might have gone through. ]]> 2021-02-26 07:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244308467 Father. Brother. Husband. Uncle Teddy, or as he was often known to his younger nieces and nephews, “The Grand Fromage,” or “The Big Cheese.” I, like so many others in the city where he worked for nearly half a century, knew him as a colleague, a mentor, and above all, a friend. https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244311675 In this paragrp]]> 2021-02-26 07:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244311675 Father. Brother. Husband. Uncle Teddy, or as he was often known to his younger nieces and nephews, “The Grand Fromage,” or “The Big Cheese.” I, like so many others in the city where he worked for nearly half a century, knew him as a colleague, a mentor, and above all, a friend. jc073 https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244313340 In this paragraph Obama is using the nicknames of Kennedy in quotations to show the audience a little more of Kennedy. 
Jasper Cabacungan]]> 2021-02-26 07:42:07 UTC https://padlet.com/monicacraggs/s8hm1xigrs4yyhhd/wish/1244313340