https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs We were very fortunate to have two visitors on Wednesday - Cole Parzych, Editor-in-Chief, and Dominick Lioto, Review Editor, from the Oswegonian. We practiced our commenting skills using compliments, asking questions or making connections to this experience. en-us 2018-01-19 03:40:39 UTC 2018-01-19 21:09:10 UTC hello@padlet.com zieglerad https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222852448 Thank you for coming to our school. What I learned was that when you put a sound for your beginning you do not put quotation marks. Also another thing I learned is when I put a comma in my writing it goes before the word but not after it. I really appreciate that you came. So, thank you for coming and editing our work.]]> 2018-01-19 16:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222852448 scivettig https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222852576  Thank you for coming to 5th grade and editing our work. 
What I learned was how to do a flow. I also learned that if you are good at writing when you are younger it can get you to a really good job. ]]> 2018-01-19 16:37:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222852576 willsonsa https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222852965 Thank you guys so much for coming in and letting us look at the newspapers you brought in.
A question I have is what were you doing after the newspapers?
(I wasn't in the room.)]]> 2018-01-19 16:38:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222852965 nederveldn https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853089 Thank you for coming to are school!  Thank you for teaching me my endings for word! Thank you for also telling me to add more things to my appreciation list! I think you teaching me this will help me improve my writing. 

]]> 2018-01-19 16:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853089 smithsoph https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853189 2018-01-19 16:39:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853189 padroave https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853228 2018-01-19 16:39:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853228 frantzwil https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853277 2018-01-19 16:39:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853277 cullent1 https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853571 Thank for helping us with this project and i have a question. How you make the news papers?]]> 2018-01-19 16:40:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853571 mwelwajos https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853669 Thank you for helping us with the 3 C's. Me and my friend learnt that your job is actually really interesting and cool.I have one question. Do you guys have other interesting things that you guys do at Oswego College]]> 2018-01-19 16:40:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853669 wiselilya https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853842 I had fun reading all the news papers that you guys passed around. I liked the movie one. From, Lily]]> 2018-01-19 16:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853842 thompsonjn https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853997 Dear Cole and Dom, 
  Thank you so much for teaching me about run on sentences. You  taught me where to put a period. I also liked that you showed everyone what you do. Also I liked how you passed out the newspaper. Thank You So Much!]]> 2018-01-19 16:40:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222853997 clonantho https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222854375 Dear Cole and Dom, thank you for helping me with my punctuation and when to put a comma and when to put a period. Also you told me that sometimes sentences are to long and I have to cut the sentence.  ]]> 2018-01-19 16:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222854375 homichael https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222854519 Thank you for teaching me and giving me advice about what to change and edit. I learned about not to uppercase the words if they are not the first word in the sentence and a person, place, or thing!]]> 2018-01-19 16:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222854519 murielpta https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222856440   Thank you for telling me to have a better hook, it was awesome having you hear!]]> 2018-01-19 16:45:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222856440 torrencec https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222856706 2018-01-19 16:46:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222856706 washingtong https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222856764 dear Cole & Dom,
Thank you for coming to our school and helping us edit our work. I am so glad that you came because you really helped all of us have better writing, you also gave us some good advice on how to be a better writer. Thanks again for coming to help us and soon maybe you can come back.]]> 2018-01-19 16:46:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222856764 marzullod https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222856992 2018-01-19 16:46:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222856992 huckabeel https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222859636 Thank you, Cole and Dom for teaching us the 3 C's and I love looking at the news papers, my favorite part was the section of the movies, they were awesome

]]> 2018-01-19 16:52:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222859636 washingtong https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222860309 TO: COLE
FROM: GIANNA
TO: DOM
FROM: GIANNA]]> 2018-01-19 16:54:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222860309 pascarellagg https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222860694 Thank you for coming in and bringing newspapers for us to look at. Thank you for telling us all the work that goes into it and about revising many times.

]]> 2018-01-19 16:55:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222860694 marzullod https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222861292 Thank you for coming.I learned that every time I should not say for an exsample I half to say somthing diffrint.]]> 2018-01-19 16:56:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222861292 smithorio https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222873731 Thank you for comeing to our school  I loved. Wrighting before but now I love it even more  Ive wrote some funny stuff before .Like my turkey story his name is serosly turkey and he turned into a snowman and ill still keep wrighting ]]> 2018-01-19 17:28:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222873731 nicholsona1 https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222873856      Thanks for coming, and thank you Dom for helping me with my punctuation! Also is it hard to fire people? I like how you explained how there are deadlines, because me and my classmates have trouble with them.

   From Adison.]]> 2018-01-19 17:28:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222873856 ryankalie https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222874118 Thank you for coming in and helping us edit our writing! I really liked your presentation. I also really liked that you  helped me make my original writing into something even better. Also, thank you for letting me see  your work, too. I loved having you at our school. Thank you for all the suggestions and the editing. Thank you!!! 
            Sincerely,
Kalie R.]]> 2018-01-19 17:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222874118 schianoma https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222874151 Hi Cole and Dom! I just wanted to thank you guys for coming and helping us and telling us all about your jobs! I especially want to thank Cole for helping me and reading through my writing! I changed my work at the spot where I had a run on sentence! If you don't remember me by my name, my word was believe. Thank you for your suggestions! Thanks again and I hope you have a great and happy life with your awesome jobs and your awesome self's!]]> 2018-01-19 17:29:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222874151 harriscam https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222874913 Thank you for teaching us about what you do .it was interesting.]]> 2018-01-19 17:30:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222874913 campbellm12 https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875261 I have 2 questions. First, do you make comic books? If yes, how long does it usually take? What is your favorite superhero? My favorite superhero is IRON MAN.Thank you for coming. Can't wait to see you again.]]> 2018-01-19 17:31:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875261 khabrian https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875419 Dear Cole and Dom,
Thank you for going in our classroom and telling us about your job as a writer, it is awesome that I actually met you guys! thank you for showing us the news papers and ]]> 2018-01-19 17:32:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875419 galluptre https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875437          Thank you for coming into our classroom and helping us with our work for example you helped me with trying to write down funny stuff my friends say but instead of carrying a book I just write it down when I get home if I can remember it. Also you helped me remember not to capitalize the first letter of my word's if the word's are in the middle of the sentence.
Thank You, Trenton]]> 2018-01-19 17:32:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875437 bechardgi https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875557 Thank you vary much for coming in. I have learned alot about your jobs. I really liked how you explained what you guys do. I did not know that you volunteer to do your jobs. I also did not that you had to give your news to about ten diffrent editors. I really liked how you guys brought in the news papers. Thank you again and I really enjoed your time with us. :)]]> 2018-01-19 17:32:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875557 voalexand https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875605 Thank you for spending time with us for the day. I learned a lot more how to edit my own work or someone work.  Pls come and visit us again. ]]> 2018-01-19 17:32:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875605 beckwithd https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875625 Thank you for telling how the  system works in the news paper team in college.]]> 2018-01-19 17:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875625 osmanovicd https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875710     Thank you for coming to our classroom. I learned a lot that I didn't know before. One really cool thing I learned is you get your writing edited by at least ten people. Another fun thing I learned was that there's different people that write about different topics. For example, I learned that Cole writes about sports and Dom writes about movies and more. One thing I heard was you guys volunteer to do this job. Thank you!!

]]> 2018-01-19 17:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875710 gonzalezai1 https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875713 Thank you for telling me to always use puntuation in my senteces and my paragraphs. Also, thank you for coming into our classroom, I really enjoyed it and I hope that you enjoyed it as well.]]> 2018-01-19 17:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875713 luebkejen https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875736 I absolutely LOVED your presentation and your suggestions have helped me a lot. Thank you so much! Although, I would not, personally chose to do the job you do, but I still find it interesting. I enjoyed your can-do attitudes! you were too nice, I mean, you gave up you're own time to be here with us!! o inspiring! This was to GREAT to put into words! 





]]> 2018-01-19 17:33:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875736 leverehea https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875789 Thank you for helping us, and  thank you for  coming to our classroom and for showing and  telling us how to improve  with our  writing. Thank you soooooo much for helping us. When you told the class that there is a dead line I was amazed.]]> 2018-01-19 17:33:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875789 kuzmadeni https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875855 Thank you for taking a part of your day to come into our classroom and help us with our writing. It was very very helpful and I know how to improve in my writing from now on. THANK YOU!!!!!!]]> 2018-01-19 17:33:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222875855 parkepik https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222876053 Thank you for coming to our school.  It sounds like it was a good presentation. I'm sorry I missed it.


]]> 2018-01-19 17:33:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222876053 moreirast https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222876075 Thank you for coming into our classroom, and telling us about your experiences with your writing. I liked when you showed us about ab]]> 2018-01-19 17:33:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222876075 noronamir https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222876154 2018-01-19 17:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222876154 khabrian https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222878541 Dear Cole and Dom,

Thank you for coming to NPE to talk to us about your jobs! It was also super cool that you were showing us about your writers journal that was pretty cool because you told us what you do with it like write about something to put in the news paper, also thank you for showing us some news papers! most of all, THANK YOU FOR COMING!!!

]]> 2018-01-19 17:40:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222878541 voalexand https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222878636
Thank you for spending time with us for the day. I learned a lot more how to edit my own work or someone work.  Pls come and visit us again. ]]> 2018-01-19 17:40:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222878636 rickermad https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222879977 you guys were very insperashion to me because i want to be a better wrtter]]> 2018-01-19 17:44:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222879977 ckires https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222951663 2018-01-19 20:52:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ckires/3Cs/wish/222951663