eTwinning Project "A Collection of Short Stories in English" by Samira Lokvancic-Hajric

Hello,

2023-03-03 09:07:27 UTC

My idea was we write the story about a view friends they was on a holiday trip to the Ostsee and they have beautiful moments and much fun.

When you had any ideas let me know.

Hello

2023-03-03 09:28:31 UTC

I‘m Amira. The zoom call didn't really work yesterday, but when it worked again, I already started discussing with berat how we would like to build the beginning of the story and have already written it on the worksheets because the deadline is about to expire. You can read it and suggest changes or other ideas on how to do it differently, for example. But I hope you guys like it. 😊

2023-03-03 13:09:13 UTC

I'm Barış and I think we should start discussing how to build the whole story.
I've already written a story by myself because none of you would say anything so please participate from now on so we can do something together.

havvasevval08 — 2023-03-03 14:19:13 UTC

hi guys, we can discuss about our story here.

2023-03-03 14:34:30 UTC

Hi I’m Justin,

I like the idea of adventure, earth, nature. Do you all agree with that? If so, we should start writing an introduction together.

Plannig our story

2023-03-03 15:09:02 UTC

Hello.

I'm Manuel and I want to ask you what of our principal ideas are we going to use. I hope you answer me soon.

Bye. :)

2023-03-03 15:13:21 UTC

hi everyone i'm Azra and i think we can use the word "disabilites" for our story, but that's just an idea so i would like to hear your ideas too :)

2023-03-03 16:24:01 UTC

I'm Neval and I think we can show the problems in a animal's (especially cats) pov. So if we can add something different in our story (Like pov) it will even more beatiful.

2023-03-03 16:46:27 UTC

Hi guys, I'm Yağmur. I think our story should include family problems and school bullying. I also like Azra's idea. When I combined our ideas, I got a good result. In short, it could be about a child who is bullied because of his disability. I'm also curious about your thoughts.

2023-03-03 17:06:51 UTC

Hi guys! I think we should include the love of animals in our story.

Hello i am Devin!

2023-03-03 17:18:21 UTC

The zoom call sadly didnt really work for me yesterday, i hope i can meet you all closer here now :)

Guys i'm Zeynep we couldn't talk on zoom yesterday but we can do this project

2023-03-03 17:50:59 UTC

(Sent by Zeynep) We have documents to fill out please let's communicate with each other about this

2023-03-03 17:53:26 UTC

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-03 17:58:27 UTC

Guys we couldn't talk on zoom yesterday but we can do this project

We have documents to fill out please let's communicate with each other about this

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-03 17:58:40 UTC

2023-03-04 10:45:48 UTC

Hi guys i’m Nuda. As i said before, the word we should use in our project is “culture”. I want to use this word because we are here together thanks to the culture brought us together. By using word “culture” we can do our project better by inspiring our own lifes. Anyways, I would like to hear your thoughts too. I can’t wait to hear your feedbacks.

2023-03-04 10:55:56 UTC

Hi guys ! I'm Yağmur İclal and i agree to yağmur's idea . I hope we can do a great job together !

2023-03-04 11:04:18 UTC

Shems NFKAL
Hi friends! the story in my mind is like this:
There was a small town where the people were uneducated. People living in this town earn their living from nature. One day, the headman of this town fell ill with a fatal disease. He said he will give a large monetary reward to the person who cures him. all the people were thinking about how to heal him. The town's scientist and magician developed methods for this disease. some people believed that the magician can heal the sick, while the rest believed in the scientist's methods. The headman believed that the magician could heal him and summoned the magician to his palace. The magician cast a spell on the headman, but the headman could not recover. Then he called the scientist. The scientist prepared a mixture with the plants he collected from nature and presented it to the headman. A few days later, the headman recovered. and awarded the scientist his reward. so people understood that science was superior. after that people started to distrust the magician. The magician was very angry at this and began to developed methods to kill the scientist. When the magician saw the scientist, he said that he had found potion of immortality. The scientist laughed at this and said, "Can you give me some?". the magician gave him some in exchange for some money. it wasn't actually the potion of immortality the magician made. it was a poison. The scientist said he would try it today. When he got home, he examined the potion and learned that it was a poison. Then he went to the magician and said, "I made a potion of immortality too". The magician knew that science was more effective than magic, so he paid for the potion and bought it. but this potion is the same potion that the magician made, so its poison. The magician drank the poison and died. and science has won once again.

what do you think about the story??

Ruveyda43 — 2023-03-04 12:25:08 UTC

Hello my dear friends, I am Rüveyda NFKAL. If we're going to use magic, travel, mirrors in the story, I have an idea.

A group of friends go to a museum and pass through a mirror in the museum to a polluted planet. They have to complete some missions to get back to Earth. And as Finn thinks 2010 or 2012 is a great choice for the time, I also think London is a great choice of place, as Juan thinks.

Can you share your ideas as we have limited time?

NATURE

2023-03-04 17:27:05 UTC

we can write a story about not polluting nature

Hello everyone, my name is Mehmet, what do you think the place, time and subject of the story can be?

2023-03-04 18:29:02 UTC

2023-03-05 10:34:22 UTC

Guys, we have to start, our time is limited. (Yağmur)

Hi everyone, my name is Belén and I'm from Spain. Do you have something planned for the story?

2023-03-05 11:56:38 UTC

We have to start writing the plot

2023-03-05 12:41:46 UTC

Hi again:

I'm Manuel. What do you want to write about? I think that we can use the town whose inhabitants don't care about nature and then add more ideas. Tell me your opinion and leave your ideas in the comments, please.

Have a nice day. 👋🏻

Hello

2023-03-05 17:01:25 UTC

Im Yamina, i would like to write the beginning of the story and my idea is that we write about Bad Romance. Do you have an other idea what kind of Short Story we can write??

2023-03-05 17:06:56 UTC

Hello everyone i am Carla , as I said on the platform , I would like to work on the words friendship , nature and emotions . With those words plus the one you add , I´M sure we´ll get a great story!!!

2023-03-05 19:18:10 UTC

Hello my dear partners, I am Damla. İ know we haven't discussed any ideas yet, but I believe we can do a great job starting from Ruveyda's idea.

2023-03-05 19:19:20 UTC

Hi everyone my name is Zehra , last time we couldn’t talk on zoom. About topic if you guys okey with Maria’s idea then we should start the discussing how we going to do and also which platform are we going to use ?

(Zehra.Ebal) In my opinion Let's continue here in the Padlet page

2023-03-05 19:29:01 UTC

2023-03-05 19:45:02 UTC

hello ım Mustafa. I think we should decide on the topic and write the story now. I still think we can cover the themes of time travelling and loneliness. Ive already written a short story because no one has written anything. So you have to express your opinion.

hi! I'm Fatmanur. What are we writing our story about? In my own opinion, other than nature and friendship, natural disasters can be earthquakes, tsunamis, and similar things. It may be about helping a country that has been hit by an earthquake. what do you think??

2023-03-05 20:19:44 UTC

2023-03-05 22:35:20 UTC

Helloy my name is Marc, i was thinking about to write short story about a 2 teenager who fell in love at young age (16-17 years) i think its a good idea to do it. tell me about your idea

What do you think of my introduction, shall we take this?

2023-03-06 09:40:36 UTC

Hi, I'm Justin

James is sitting in his bedroom and is watching an adventure film. He likes adventures so he decides to start his own adventure. So he wats to travel the world and is looking vor adventures and exploring nature along the way.

Opinion of Story

2023-03-06 17:14:17 UTC

Hello, I'm Angel. The idea for the story that Manuel proposes i think is a very good idea. I propose an idea, as Manuel has said, that it be in a town that does not take care of nature and that the main character is the only one who wants to change all of his town so that they take care of nature. this is my idea
Bye !

2023-03-06 18:10:14 UTC

Hello, my name is Antonio, I'm sorry for not having written before but I had problems with the account. I had thought about using the topic adventure, earth and space and perhaps talking about some friends having to go to space to save the planet or something like that, what do you think?

2023-03-06 18:48:39 UTC

So apparently we are assigned for specific parts of the story. I've done my part using some of your ideas so I would be grateful if you gave me your opinion for the begging part of our story
-Barış EBAL

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-06 19:36:08 UTC

Guys we have to start....

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-06 19:37:03 UTC

We should write a story before the deadline

guys i wrote a beginning if you like it we can improve it

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-06 19:53:37 UTC

9wqs8xsd8j — 2023-03-07 13:54:37 UTC

Hi, I am Ezgi. I think about topics again and what about a secret mirror behind a fake wall that leads to mirror world in different time.
Please share your opinions soon!

2023-03-07 15:49:34 UTC

Hi guys, my name is Elena, I'm from Écija, Sevilla. My school is Nicolás Copérnico.

The words I would like to use are "Disabilities, adventure and bullying"

2023-03-07 15:52:49 UTC

Elena:

Me and my partner Carla we have to write the beginning. We are going to start, if there is something you can tell us about it and we will make a decision together to change it or not.

2023-03-07 16:01:47 UTC

Elena:

We have decided to choose the words friendship, nature, adventure, journey, cultures and emotions, if you do not agree let us know, thanks.

2023-03-07 16:24:24 UTC

Elena:

The selection of the characters and other date have been chosen by us, write us if you do not agree.

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-07 17:27:24 UTC

you are right but nobody does anything

What I wrote in the file on the Drive is just an idea, let me know your idea, let's continue accordingly

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-07 17:28:28 UTC

Do you agree with the idea I put to you the other day?

mariiiiajoseee — 2023-03-07 18:21:46 UTC

Elif

2023-03-07 18:55:25 UTC

Hi, guys! I am Elif. This is my opinion about our story;
4 friends lived together in a town far from the city. This friends find a sick animal in their place in the forest. They take ıt to the vet together. When they learn that the animal is sick from a radioactive substance , they start to search around and they see dead herb. That is an interesting status. They see a secret base in forest and there are guys there. The men there are bad and their plan, takeing over the world. Friends block them.

Hello

2023-03-07 21:41:01 UTC

My name is ammar and unfortunately the online meeting didn't work out for me, but if there is another one that might work, i would be happy if i could communicate with my group

Outline

2023-03-08 08:36:11 UTC

Good morning.

Due to the fact that you are not answering our questions, we are going to write the story's outline. Check it and give us your opinions about it and if you don't like something, tell us.

Thank you and good bye. Ángel and Manuel.

Hello, my dear partner I'm Álvaro from Spain. I gues that the 4 topic that we can select are technology, time travelling, magic and adventure.

2023-03-08 08:47:10 UTC

The history should take place in the present and they travell to the pass to dicover where is the treasure. And the protagonist can be a student and there group of friends.

2023-03-08 10:07:36 UTC

Hi! I’m Antonio Muñoz
I think we should start the story with the themes that we have already propose. In my opinion, I think Justin’s introduction is very good.

Mehmet said that the subject of the story could be friendship. Maria also said friendship and she said it could be a story set in paris, my idea is science fiction and aliens we can combine it all

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-08 16:46:08 UTC

Story

2023-03-08 16:46:16 UTC

My teammate and I have already written the brainstorm of our part based on the story you’ve told here.

Let me know what you think about it and of course, feel free to express any change you’d like to do in it.

Hi!

2023-03-08 17:13:14 UTC

I'm Ainara. Unfortunately, it didn't work the video call. However, I want to tell you about some of the ideas that I have in mind about the story. The story could begin with a couple of friends in Argentina having an argument of something that caused an environment issue, so they have the chance of going back to the past to resolve that issue. Please let me know your opinions about my idea.

jromerobriceno — 2023-03-08 18:18:44 UTC

Hello group, we are going with just enough time, we must agree on what story to make. I defend my idea since I think it is an adventure that includes all our nationalities, but I would like to see more ideas from you. I await your response, greetings from Écija.

Juan Diego.

What title can we give to the story?

mariiiiajoseee — 2023-03-08 18:25:03 UTC

Names of two other characters besides Nathan and Chloe?

mariiiiajoseee — 2023-03-08 18:27:40 UTC

Make a summary of what you more or less want to happen in the story please, I have to start writing the first part.

mariiiiajoseee — 2023-03-08 18:30:02 UTC

friends start the beginning part of the story will cover the topics we have chosen. Maria and Natalia will write a story but before that we have to define the character, the place and the topic together

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-08 19:09:35 UTC

we chose the place and a few characters. But we still have characters to choose, please give your opinion

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-08 19:20:37 UTC

2023-03-09 11:33:59 UTC

Hello, my name is Maria, what topic are we going to choose?

Hi im Iwan,

2023-03-09 14:19:36 UTC

I can't login to etwinning but I can tell you what are my imagination about the story line. But at first I need to tell the topic's about the Story. Friendship,Magic, family, revenge and the most important thing is adventure. If no one of us has an idea I, can tell you my idea. The story starts in England with a guy named Jorge, and his mother gets sick for no reason. His friend named Heinz knew everything about that. A long time ago an vampire infect an old man, and after 90 years the kid of the old men(Jorge's mother) get sick of that infection. The only way to save Jorge's mother is to defeat the guy who infect the old man 90 years ago. In story Jorge's friends want to help him to safe his mother with their abilities. Every main character have different abilities. So what do you think about that idea do we can continue that?

Hello, my name is Barış, I think the story may be theft, for example, someone steals something and runs away, it may be the process of being caught.

2023-03-09 15:34:30 UTC

Hi I am Andres, my partner Gen kun and I are going to write the begining of the history, so you have to write the others parts. Please tell us the part you have chosen.

2023-03-09 16:17:05 UTC

2023-03-09 16:33:51 UTC

Hi dear friends. I will write the outline. We chose our place I think. But what your ideas about when the story takes place,whatthe main and other chracters are,what the main problem is etc

2023-03-09 16:34:13 UTC

I agree with Maria. I think the story can take place in Paris,Christmas. I can write these ones

2023-03-09 16:35:42 UTC

Hi ! You are so helpful I'm open to creative ideas for the project .

My partner Andrés and I have chosen the words :

2023-03-09 17:14:25 UTC

-Key
-Magic

2023-03-09 17:48:04 UTC

Hi guys, I'm Ceyda. My idea was to write our story on nature at first, but I just changed my mind, if you join, let's write our story about trust in friendship, it will be easier for us because it is a feeling we know. What do you think?

Hi, I have written some of our stuff on the plan that the teachers gave us, please someone get in there and fill in what is missing.

mariiiiajoseee — 2023-03-09 19:20:13 UTC

What problem we can develop in the story?

mariiiiajoseee — 2023-03-09 19:21:40 UTC

Hello again, guys. I'm José Carlos. Ainara and I think we are going to start the outline because the deadline is today. For Ammar and Luca please start doing the beginning as fast as you can. And let us know if you agree with our ideas.

2023-03-10 07:56:14 UTC

Hi, I'm Álvaro

2023-03-10 08:05:28 UTC

Manuel and I have completed the outline in the worksheets because the deadline is today. Have a look and it and give us your opinion.
We are also planning the begining of the story, so that you how to continue with it.
We are sure that our story will be realy cool.

HI

2023-03-10 08:09:05 UTC

Hello, we are Inés and Marié, we have completed the worksheet with the problem and the solution. Greetings.

2023-03-10 11:08:07 UTC

Hi, we are Nazaret and Natalia from Spain. We are a little bit confused because at first we said a topic and we agreed about it. Why are we looking for topics again?
We think that the frist topic was quite good.

Asking for your opinion

2023-03-10 11:08:08 UTC

Hi, I'm Manuel.

What do you think about the outline that we have written? Give us your opinion, please.

Have a nice weekend.

2023-03-10 11:09:32 UTC

We love your new ideas but it would be easier to do what we first thought about.

Hi, I am Natalia.I haven't been able to talk before as I've been having trouble connecting.

ncalacopete — 2023-03-10 11:11:40 UTC

Hello my dear partners, I am PabloCr7 and i think it would be great to use Ruveyda´s idea in order to start our story.

2023-03-10 11:17:28 UTC

The Stories

jromerobriceno — 2023-03-10 11:21:47 UTC

Hello group. As no consensus has been reached here and today is the deadline for the outline of the story, we have decided to start with the story of the Lost Chalice.

Thanks Neval for made the beggining for the history but, we had been assigned a week ago to write the beginning of the story, so if it's okay with you, we'll use your basic text and change it to our liking.

2023-03-10 11:22:14 UTC

2023-03-10 11:24:29 UTC

Hi, I'm Antonio Manuel, I guess that justin's introduction is already good. Nevertheless, we should start writting the story in order that Antonio and I can start writting the middle part of the story.

jromerobriceno — 2023-03-10 11:43:26 UTC

The Outline of the story is complete. I ask please that the comrades who have to do the beginning of the story do it as soon as possible following the argument that we have offered in the outline.

Juan Diego.

Beginning of the story

2023-03-10 23:19:08 UTC

My partner Gema and I (Martina) have decided to modify the beginning of the story, but keeping in mind the main ideas about corruption, portals, powers,... Tomorrow we will finish it without fail, we hope you like it and that you tell us if you do not agree with something.

2023-03-10 23:19:33 UTC

Hello everyone, we are the Spanish students Gema and Martina. We have reorganized a bit the main ideas on which the story will be based, trying to base ourselves on the ones that already existed but giving it a little twist. Please have a look of it and please give us your opinion.

Maria, Thank you for writing the intro part of the story, but you have determined the whole subject and you have written it up to the title.You can't just decide the title and subject of the story. we will do this together

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-11 08:04:46 UTC

We also agreed that the story would be science fiction and friendship.

nuropro2006 — 2023-03-11 08:07:20 UTC

2023-03-11 10:58:09 UTC

Hi everyone , I'm Ánxela and I think the story is going to be really good. I have already wrote my part but if one of you wants to change something or you want to give me some ideas it would be awesome because I'm not very good at this although my part was supervised by my teacher and I think it's ok.
Let me know your opinion!!!

middle part belong to me but the beginning that maria wrote didn't match my minds...

nur46mrs — 2023-03-12 14:24:39 UTC

nur46mrs — 2023-03-12 14:28:03 UTC

to be honest i had in mind to put all of our ideas together and create a good story

carla

2023-03-12 16:33:35 UTC

Hello, I'm Carla, if I really like your idea, I hope that little by little we build a great story as a team !!

Carla

2023-03-12 16:35:44 UTC

All that's missing is the final part to be able to start with the story, we're doing great 😊

The beginning

2023-03-12 17:59:46 UTC

Hi to everyone. I'm Manuel.

I'd like to tell you that Ángel and I have finished writing the story's beginning. Do you like it? If you want to change something, tell us.

Bye and have a nice day. :)

2023-03-12 19:34:45 UTC

helloo my name is hacer nice to meet you the story may be about theft and this thief steals their things secretly from her friends her friends who realize this can stop talking to her

2023-03-12 20:25:02 UTC

I'm Berat. I have an idea about pets. Piggy can communicate with other animals in the forest, Kiwi can produce poisonous saliva with its tongue and repel attacks and Luigi can call water. What shoul they do when they meet evil? If they are going to fight, I think we should cast a spell on evil as well. I think we can give something about shadows.

Hello group, its me again Iwan. We need now to agree witch story we are choosing.

2023-03-13 08:52:19 UTC

Kübra Ebal

2023-03-13 15:27:51 UTC

Hi Pablo and Angela, you still haven't written the beginning so I can't write the middle, I will be happy if we can determine the subject...

I have been asking for several days which would be the title, to make me a summary of your ideas and nobody tells me anything, so my partner and I decided to do it our way, since on the 10th we had to have it done and you had not done anything.

mariiiiajoseee — 2023-03-14 16:54:34 UTC

I don't know what you mean by science fiction that's why I've asked you several times to give me a summary of what you want the story to be about.

mariiiiajoseee — 2023-03-14 16:56:07 UTC

And what you have deleted you can do it yourselves because I did it only because I had a deadline for that day without having answers.

mariiiiajoseee — 2023-03-14 16:57:04 UTC

If you don't want my partner and I to write whatever we want, cheer up and tell us your ideas because you telling me friendship and science fiction is of no use to me.

mariiiiajoseee — 2023-03-14 16:58:27 UTC

thank you for asking my opinion. i wrote this story last week but i deleted because I wanted to write together.

nur46mrs — 2023-03-14 19:51:59 UTC

the story i wrote;
There are three close friends and one day they lose the city they live in as a result of an uncertain explosion, and only these three friends remain. They realize that the explosion is a bomb sent to Earth by aliens, and in this explosion they realize that the aliens have landed on Earth and they want to destroy the whole world.

for a long time three boys thought first part of the story: about how they could have a perfect summer they looked for a long time for considerations their names are tom, ben, jonas they are all in the 10th grade and want to enjoy the last summer together before real life begins. so the three guys set out to find solutions they would like to go on a trip ideally to a lake and since they live in Germany there are only two options: north or baltic sea .they collected advantages and disadvantages and decided on the baltic sea and immediately booked a holiday home with three beds, one bathroom and a beautiful view. Finally the time has come the holidays are.beautiful view. Finally the time has come the holidays are coming up and the boys are looking forward to their adventure they were looking for train connections to go to the Baltic Sea and they found what they were looking for after a few days it all started everyone was super excited the journey lasted 4 hours everyone was playing on their cell phones or slept when they arrived they couldn't believe their eyes it was as beautiful there as they had never seen it before.

2023-03-14 20:11:59 UTC

First part of the story

jfernandezferrero1 — 2023-03-15 18:41:29 UTC

In the city of London there lived some Oxford students, who were quite curious. It was a normal day, and it seemed quite boring, the boys were gathered at school and were talking about going to the abandoned museum that was two kilometers from their school. When leaving class, the boys went to the museum as they had spoken before, when they entered there everything seemed dark, one of the boys turned on a flashlight and shined it towards a door, an office of the former director of the museum Josh Walter, upon entering his office, they saw a curtain to the left of a closet, when they uncovered the curtain they found a mirror, which seemed normal. Suddenly the mirror turned on and attracted the boys as if it were a magnet, and took them to another world. When they got there they ran into the guardian of this world. After talking with the guardian for a while, the boys realized that they had been chosen to save this world from the pollution that consumed them. From here begins a long story.

Hello guys. I am Juani and y think you are a good persons 🙂.

jfernandezferrero1 — 2023-03-15 18:44:37 UTC

nur46mrs — 2023-03-15 22:48:34 UTC

Friends, I wrote the story part that belong to me (middle part) I hope you like it. I liked the beginning part and thank you for your understanding.

Hello friends!!

2023-03-16 08:03:03 UTC

I just read the story and I really liked it. Good work team!!!

2023-03-16 09:45:08 UTC

I writed the end and i used the friends that they want to help Marc and Mary and the friends were going to Mary‘s parents and argue with them that Marc really love Mary‘s and he never would hurt her or something else, tell me what you think about it. (Marc)

Hello there.

2023-03-16 09:52:09 UTC

Heyy, currently Kiara and I (Devin) are currently writing the 2 to 3 sentences about the ending. Your beginning looks very good :)
Tho it is a little hard to do it without a middle part. Sad the other/-s didnt do a middle part.

Dear greetings

Hi guys I have a suggestion for the main antagonist in our wich could have the name John and could be like a old friend of michele. John wants to destroy the human race and attemted to do it in 1700 but michele prevented it, John was about to die but in his last moment he made a deal with like a devil how would fullfil his wish but in exchange for his body. And offer the centuries he collected magic power to fullfil the wish of john wich would happen in twenty years.

2023-03-16 10:01:13 UTC

I know its a lot but what do you think?

Ánxela

2023-03-16 11:08:50 UTC

Hi everyone! I already started to write my part of the history and I have a lot of ideas!
The problem is that I have so many that i have to write the story and resume it because I think that is going to pass the 400 words .
I writed a little so if you want to see how is it going go ahead!
I think our story is going to be so great.
Also , I don't really remember who wrote the first part but I only have to say that is AWESOME . Congratulations guys!

Guys let's we decide to our story's title

nur46mrs — 2023-03-16 16:44:09 UTC

2023-03-16 17:30:31 UTC

Hi team! I'm Sofía and I just did my part of the story map this morning. Sorry for the delay. I hope that you like it, but I am open to all the different ideas you can have. Also, I hope that my part of the story could be ready in these next flew days.
Bye!!

2023-03-16 17:55:07 UTC

Did you write the first part?

keremguney08 — 2023-03-16 18:02:10 UTC

If you haven't written the first part of the story, how will you do it?

End

Ruveyda43 — 2023-03-16 20:19:14 UTC

After Ashley, Joseph and Franklin die, Rafi and Mathew blame themselves because they wanted to go to that museum, they pulled that curtain over the mirror. now they had come to the end, they had set out as five but they were returning home as only two. No, it couldn't have ended so easily. Owen wood, the ruler of that planet that could not pass through environmental pollution, offered them two options, either one of them would die and the other would return to earth, or they would both stay on that polluted planet and try to live. Owen wood couldn't actually say that he wanted to save this planet from environmental pollution. Rafi and Mathew considered these two options and thought of the words that Stefany had said when they first came to this planet. what stefany said was, "everyone on this planet is trying to get rid of environmental pollution, even Owen wood is doing it, but now he is old and his power is not enough for anything. You were chosen to save this planet, only you can save this planet, the projects in your world are very great. Help us to implement those projects as well. " They both smiled when that thought came to mind. To Owen Wood, "If we save this planet you rule from environmental pollution, will you send us to our own world?" they asked. Owen Wood nodded his head, meaning it would. Afterwards, they told Owen Wood and everyone living on that planet about their projects to prevent environmental pollution in their world. Shortly after the projects started to be implemented, the planet that did not pass through that environmental pollution has now become a planet without a single pollution. Owen wood, Rafi and Mathew returned to their own world with the magic mirror. When they returned, they were surprised by what they saw because Ashley, Joseph and Franklin were they stood before them alive. The three of them told how they were still alive. when they died on the polluted planet, they actually came back to earth. They've been waiting for Rafi and Mathew to come back ever since they got back. Afterwards, they returned home and the next time they went on an adventure, they would make sure that everyone really wanted to go on the adventure.

9wqs8xsd8j — 2023-03-17 14:20:13 UTC

Hi, i wrote the middle part. You can take a look and share ur ideas

Middle

2023-03-17 16:30:29 UTC

After receiving information from the man they had just met, they went to a place where no one could hear them to make a logical plan. But no one was talking, and Matthew suddenly began to speak "How do you get out of here? We are not ready for such a responsibility like this ,we are just a group of kids." Ashley said "You're right, but do we have any other choice? That man said that only we could do it. We have no other choice".“We must find the man at the top of this world,” Rafi said quietly. Joseph and Franklin still hadn't spoken But Joseph looked at them and said, "Maybe the man we just talked to knows something."Ashley looked at them and said what do you mean? “How did he know we were coming here?” Franklin said, "maybe somebody sent him here". Matthew said "maybe we could use that mirror and come back". Everyone looked at each other and started walking till they find the mirror again.But no matter how hard they tried, nothing happened.Just as Joseph is sitting on the ground and breathing, they decide to find the ruler of this world. Their adventures were starting to get interesting because this world really needed saving.The dire situation of this world was really starting to worry them when a few men came across them and started running to them. Ashley yells to run and they try to escape but they are caught by the men. When they were brought to a place by the men, they immediately recognized the man standing in front of them."“I'm Owen Wood,” the man opposite said. Just as he was about to start speaking again, Joseph interrupted and shouted "Send us back to our own world."The man quietly waited for the children to finish talking and said roughly the same thing the man had said when they came into this world.Just as Franklin was about to start talking, Owen said, "I'll send you to your world on one condition."Just then, Ashley thought of Stefany and Monica they warned them about Owen's wish. And she shouted we'll save this world. Owen looked at her and then began to explain "so I could explain what you should do." After the description is finished Owen sent them to other parts of the world and asked them to solve the problems there. Everyone left and did their part, but everything did not go as they wanted.

hi guys sorry for not being able to finish in time I have been trying to install it for 2 days I still couldn't upload the text

2023-03-17 19:52:45 UTC

2023-03-17 21:33:22 UTC

(Berat Ebal) I wrote the middle part of the story about the characters encounting "evil" at the end of the beginning and the end of the fight in the last part.

going to write the end now

2023-03-17 21:40:03 UTC

let me know what you'd think of the end i am going to write. let me know if i should improve it somehow!

greetings Devin

My opinion

2023-03-19 11:26:39 UTC

Hello. I'm Manuel.

The continuation that you wrote is amazing. I really like it. Do you think that Rodri could be removed of the story? I think so because he doesn't particicipate in the hole "novel". We have to decide the story's name, what are your ideas for it?

Have a nice day and congratulations for ending the story. We did a great job. :)

middle

2023-03-19 16:32:58 UTC

hi i am elifesra.ebal for the middle part i thought like this He fulfilled his wish with the magic powers he offered, John did not die by standing above everyone else and continued for centuries with his magic powers. No matter how much Michele wanted to block John, she couldn't defeat John.

Rodri?

2023-03-20 16:33:48 UTC

Hi, I'm Manuel.

Who is Rodri? I know that he was planned to appear, but we haven't talked about him in the whole story. Maybe we could remove him. What do you think about that?

Have a nice day. :)

2023-03-21 08:02:50 UTC

hello, i corrected the beginning of the story and i apologize, best regards leon

Ánxela

2023-03-21 12:36:51 UTC

Hi guys!
I just want to let you know that I finished my part of the story .
There is one thing about it and it's that I wrote 477 words instead of 400 .
I hope you guys don't mind but ,if there is some problem let me know.
Have a nice day!!!!!

What is vampire name?

2023-03-22 07:30:58 UTC

Hello

2023-03-22 07:32:28 UTC

What is vampire name?

Ariadna Rienda

2023-03-22 09:56:58 UTC

Hello, I don't know why it won't let me write now. Can you put my name where it says students please? I am Ariadna

I don't know who wrote the end, but can the person who wrote the end fill in the story map's end part ?

nur46mrs — 2023-03-24 20:28:19 UTC

Title missing

laura_eteacher — 2023-03-26 18:45:54 UTC

Dear students,
This is Laura, the Spanish teacher who has proofread your lovely story. :D
I have included a provisional title ("The Time Machine"), as you had not written any.
Please, tell me if you agree with it or if you'd rather use a different one.
Thanks in advance!
Laura

Need to check content

laura_eteacher — 2023-03-26 18:49:00 UTC

Dear students,
This is Laura, the Spanish teacher who is proofreading your story.
I'm having some trouble understanding the plot, especially when coming to the end. Can you go back to the Drive document, check my corrections and help me?
Thanks in advance! :)
Laura

Recording our story

2023-04-24 14:20:39 UTC

Hi again. How are you doing?

Our story is one of three winners. It means that we have to record ourselves telling the story. What part do you want to read?

Have a nice day. Bye. 👋🏻

History

2023-04-27 20:31:28 UTC

This is the second part of the beginning