My fierce padlet by LOUY FRANKIE

scene 1

2025-08-20 02:22:14 UTC

MS(slow zoom): the mother hands her child a bag of Doritos (3 seconds)

Scene 1

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 02:29:26 UTC

SFX: bus door opening sound

Lines:

Mother : "Try to make friend"(Sudden entry BGM)

BGM: Noble, elegant and warm music

Scene 2

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 02:33:35 UTC

BGM: Background music connecting the first act

SFX 01: Children playing noise

SFX 02: Open snack sound (Cut to Act III)

scene 2

2025-08-20 02:35:01 UTC

MS/CU: the scene transitions through each of the passengers on boards as they crowd around the kid trying to get a share of the snack (10 seconds)

scene 3

2025-08-20 02:36:44 UTC

CU: shot of hands sticking forward to to receive the Doritos followed by a close up of the drivers face (5 seconds)

scene 4

2025-08-20 02:42:15 UTC

LS: shot of the crowd of passengers looking towards the front of the bus in fear. (1 second)

scene 5

2025-08-20 02:42:49 UTC

CU: shot of the empty drivers seat (1 second)

scene 6

2025-08-20 02:43:07 UTC

LS: shot of the bus driving down the road out of control as the video cuts to an end. (3 seconds)

Scene 3

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 02:45:46 UTC

BGM: Background music connecting the first act

SFX: The sound of taking out snacks from the snack bag

Scene 4

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 02:47:42 UTC

BGM: Background music connecting the first act

Scene 5

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 02:49:25 UTC

BGM: Background music connecting the first act

Lines:

Boy:"Do you want a Doritos?"

Scene 6

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 02:50:40 UTC

BGM: Background music connecting the first act

scene 7

2025-08-20 02:51:33 UTC

MS: a recap of scene 1 but this time of the boy getting off the bus and angrily handing the Doritos back his mom covered in bandages (2 seconds)

Scene 7

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 02:54:01 UTC

BGM: Background music connecting the first act

Lines:

Boy's friend: "Hey everyone XXX was taking out Doritos!"(Connect to Act VIII)

Scene 8

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 02:54:29 UTC

BGM: Background music connecting the first act

Lines:

Boy's friend: "Hey everyone XXX was taking out Doritos!"(Connect from Act VII)

Scene 9

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 02:57:00 UTC

BGM: Background music connecting the first act

SFX: kiss sound

Lines:

couple (Girl): "Doritos?!"

Scene 10

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 02:59:12 UTC

Boy's two friends:"Doritos!"

Scene 11

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 03:00:24 UTC

Scene 12

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 03:02:09 UTC

BGM :

Scene 13

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 03:04:06 UTC

BGM Stop

SFX: The sound of a bus moving forward

Scene 14

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 03:05:03 UTC

BGM Stop

SFX 1: The sound of a bus moving forward

SFX 2: Bus driver kids screaming

Scene 15

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 03:05:46 UTC

SFX: Car crash

Scene 16

frankielouy1111 — 2025-08-20 03:06:56 UTC

Lines:

Boy: "you make friend!"

Feedback

2025-08-22 02:43:15 UTC

1) Add specific details like length of your SFX of BGM (e.g. 10 seconds, Fade in and fades out towards the end, etc.)

2) Use acronyms when you're already comfortable with the tech jargons.