https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly en-us 2016-11-15 12:28:43 UTC 2016-11-15 15:52:44 UTC hello@padlet.com kernsli https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137681480 Score: 2
Missing an opening, Rubric Specific Comment, Rubric Specific Comment....]]> 2016-11-15 12:32:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137681480 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137709885 NOTE! You can only score up to 1 to 4! Score - 2
 Your Response - Misspelled words, wrong use of punctuations

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Excellent work and excellent punctuation. Strong opening and closing. may contain a few, if any, errors but meaning is great. Has 5 paragraphs.]]> 2016-11-15 13:49:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137709887 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137710680 score: 0.5
The student response demonstrates no comprehensions of ideas by ]]> 2016-11-15 13:51:24 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137710680 923287 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137711014 Score/Rate:2/4
Explanation/Comments:I gave him a 2 because it was not enough evidence and also not a strong opening and closing.]]> 2016-11-15 13:52:06 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137711014 920610 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137711144 3/4 Strong opening and closing compositional risks effective]]> 2016-11-15 13:52:24 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137711144 927110 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137711155 4/4

This essay had a lot to offer. This story had an abundance of textual evidence in multiple areas in paragraphs. he/she also included a lot of compositional risk like figurative language.]]> 2016-11-15 13:52:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137711155 321627 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137711275 score: 0
The student  Only had one textual support , he/she  did make scene , he/she did not indent , and there missing an opening  run on sentence]]> 2016-11-15 13:52:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137711275 920718 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137711845 Score/Rate: 2

Your Response - Misspelled words, wrong use of punctuation's, bad grammar, no attention grabber, sometimes run on.  \end/ ]]> 2016-11-15 13:53:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137711845 221410 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137712084 Rubric Score: 2/4
Explanation/Comments: It's one big run on sentence with no attention grabber or sentence starters and has little punctuation. ]]> 2016-11-15 13:54:30 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137712084 928473 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137712174 MAY LACK OPENING and/or closing no evidence ]]> 2016-11-15 13:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137712174 121119 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137712259 score- 2/4
Need to remember spacing]]> 2016-11-15 13:54:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137712259 920610 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137712907 lots of run on sentences ]]> 2016-11-15 13:56:32 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137712907 920718 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137713277 Score - 2
Your response - Misspelled words, wrong use of punctuations, bad grammar, no attention grabber, sometimes run on sentence. - end - 
    __Ready to Enter Essay score!__]]> 2016-11-15 13:57:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137713277 321627 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137713485 Score 2
I gave this student an 2 because he/she did not indent, he/she did not spelled some words wrong, and no textual support]]> 2016-11-15 13:57:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137713485 221410 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137714070 Rubric Score: 2.5/4
Explanation/Comments: It has multiple paragraphs and is well explained but has no attention grabber or sentence starters and is just a big run on sentence.]]> 2016-11-15 13:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137714070 321627 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137714932 Score 2
 I gave this student an 2 because he/she  did not indent , he/she had run on sentences, they did not provide textual support]]> 2016-11-15 14:01:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137714932 923287 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137720021 Rubric Score:3/4
Explanation/Comments:I gave them a 3 because not a strong opening and closing but he was on task.]]> 2016-11-15 14:11:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137720021 920718 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137720172 Your score - 2
Your Response - Misspelled words, irresponsible grammar, some run on sentences -end-

__Ready to score!__]]> 2016-11-15 14:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137720172 321627 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137720466 score 2

 he/she did not indent punctuation was not done, the student did not have textual support]]> 2016-11-15 14:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137720466 927449 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137720916 NOTE! You can only score from 1 to 4! Score: 2/4
has no textual evidence. no indent. bad punctuation. ]]> 2016-11-15 14:13:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137720916 321627 https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137722657 score 3
He/she did not have textual support ]]> 2016-11-15 14:16:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/s6rp6mugklly/wish/137722657