Help Me! A Year 13 Essay Writing Guide by Graham Panton https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp Made with good vibes en-us 2016-12-11 11:38:19 UTC 2026-01-07 22:00:34 UTC hello@padlet.com Pre-transmission (radio and tv) Pre-exhibition (film) Pre-publication (print/press) https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308106 Emilia

]]> 2016-12-13 09:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308106 Embed discussion about media theories (including media effects) https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308140 Rosie ]]> 2016-12-13 09:59:47 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308140 Use opinion rather than facts when describing a case study https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308248 David]]> 2016-12-13 10:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308248 Too much like a list and needs to be more explicit in referring to examples https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308281 David]]> 2016-12-13 10:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308281 Develop the argument with lots of opinion and passion. Keep the actual question at your core and do not be afraid to step towards the rhetorical style of question if you feel the argument could be ended with it. https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308456 Katherine]]> 2016-12-13 10:01:53 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308456 Simply more terminology needed in main section https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308626 David]]> 2016-12-13 10:02:41 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308626 More case studies directly linked to regulatory bodies https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308645 Rosie ]]> 2016-12-13 10:02:51 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308645 When you have chosen two regulatory bodies. Must overbalance the discussion with contemporary issues (between 2013-2017) https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308740  Hannah

]]> 2016-12-13 10:03:21 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308740 Focus more on the question and how the examples can help you answer them https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308751 Katherine]]> 2016-12-13 10:03:26 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308751 Use of case studies boull002 https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308788 Luke
You must have more contemporary examples than historical]]> 2016-12-13 10:03:43 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308788 more use of contemporary examples https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308817 Emilia]]> 2016-12-13 10:03:52 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143308817 More Terminology needed, more theories will help develop this https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309004 Hannah]]> 2016-12-13 10:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309004 Ensure you include some theory I.e. Media effects theory, as you do this your terminology will develop boull002 https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309214 Luke]]> 2016-12-13 10:06:12 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309214 Look more at the ability to explain and argue. And write more. https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309243 Hannah

]]> 2016-12-13 10:06:20 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309243 The EAA is limited, and you must keep looking back at the question to make sure that the discussion is relevant and that you are giving lots of great opinion and argument. https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309276 Grace]]> 2016-12-13 10:06:36 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309276 Develop how you use terminology https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309316 Katherine]]> 2016-12-13 10:06:48 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309316 Develop your use of terminology https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309494 Grace]]> 2016-12-13 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309494 Enhance argument to make it as strong as possible https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309529 Rosie ]]> 2016-12-13 10:08:01 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309529 Use more contemporary examples and use at least 2 regulatory bodies https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309568 Grace]]> 2016-12-13 10:08:12 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309568 You need to maintain consistency throughout the entire discussion https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309672 Emilia]]> 2016-12-13 10:08:55 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309672 Seona https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309758 You should focus on the dates, details and depth of your case studies so there is a higher quantity of contemporary examples.]]> 2016-12-13 10:09:28 UTC https://padlet.com/gpanton1/CMRhelp/wish/143309758