Do you already use any of these styles?

Are there any styles which could be useful for your literature review notes? 

1. How many headings / subheadings are there? 

2. Do you think the student has included too few / a good number /  too many headings and subheadings?

3. Are any of the headings or subheadings similar to topics you brainstormed in Activity 1?

1. There are too many headings (six). Which two could be removed?

2. In the remaining four sections, which subheadings could be removed?

To help you answer these questions, consider the following:

• Avoid a long, general information section (background information should be included in the main Research Proposal Introduction instead).

• Don’t include sections that are too descriptive and / or that only cite one source.

• Make sure headings / subheadings are relevant to the two selected variables / selected ideas from the research focus.

1. Are there up-to-date sources under each heading/ subheading?

2. Is there a variety of sources under each heading/subheading?

3. Does any heading/subheading rely too much on one source?

4. Is there enough information to write a section based on each heading and at least one paragraph based on each subheading?

5.Is there a mix of statistics, examples, quotes and paraphrases included under each heading and subheading?

The Effectiveness of CCTV and Factors Affecting Effectiveness of CCTV are brought together.

Get rid of the Perception of Government, because it's not obvious what it does, and the point of view