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      <description>Here are some mistakes in a particular piece of academic writing. Please try a rewrite of each mistake and post it in the comments section, Then create a new post, choose the one you think is the best from your peers&#39; rewrites, and explain why you think it&#39;s better.</description>
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      <pubDate>2023-11-16 00:38:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>2.Passive sentences+weak verb</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><em>"The whole process of finding fuzzy-matched word pairs and computing their similarity is demonstrated in detail. More importantly, the performance of BLEU is significantly improved by integrating fuzzy matching."</em></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-16 00:41:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>1. Too long sentences </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>"To accelerate the development of Chinese language processing technology, under a grant from 863 Program, Institute of Computing Technology of Chinese Academy of Sciences took part in building Corpora Resources of 863 Program together with Institute of Automation Chinese Academy of Sciences, Tsinghua University, Peking University, Beijing HanWang Technology Corporation, Anhui USTC iFLYTEK Corporation, Graduate School of the Chinese Academy of Sciences and Institute of Linguistics of Chinese Academy of Social Sciences."</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-16 00:44:52 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>3.Loose structure + Informal language + lack of strength</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><em>"In this step, we want to induce an alignment between words and predicates. The alignment can give a roughly mapping between words and the predicates that express their meanings, so it would be a useful constraint for rule extraction and reduce the searching space."</em></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-16 00:51:47 UTC</pubDate>
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