I- it was crazy that they would consciously add those things to the advertisements.

E- could have less words on slides

I: Didn't know that the scandal was a huge part of this company

E: Fewer words on some slides & less reading off of the slides

I- It is interesting that they would even think this was okay to post

E- maybe more pictures

I- Balenciaga blamed the production team.

EB- Maybe add some more pictures.

Interesting - Balenciaga was involved in 2 scandals back to back

Even Better - More pictures and visuals

I: how they explained what it was

E: add some pictures

I: they were involved in two separate controversies

E: maybe include more visuals and pictures

I: It was interesting that they tried to sue their own team for something done

E: Spread out evenly in the room don't have two by the computer

I- The scandal was not what I was expecting at all

E- Less words on the slides

I- that a company would post photos with bad things on them

E- Just a few less words on slides

I- The scandal itself is insane

E- Overall really good, maybe less words on slides?

I - I found it interesting that they would post that

E - maybe a few more pictures though.

I- Interesting that this would have gotten approved knowing what it would suggest

E- Maybe a little less reading off of the slides

I-How a company like that would use children

E-Less words on slides

I - I liked the shadow casters slide

E - maybe less reading right off the screen

I- Interesting Shadow choices

E- Maybe add a photo

I: Balenciaga has experienced two controversial scandals.

E: The last few slides got a little wordy and the point wasn't as clear.

I- Interesting that they repeated their mistake in 2023 after the first scandal in 2022

E- Try not to read directly off the slides as much to engage the audience a little more

I- I wasn't aware of the scandal, it was very interesting.

E-More pictures

I- Interesting to hear how Balenciaga responded to the backlash.

E- Maybe more pictures

I- I did not know they owned TikTok

E- maybe more pictures

I-I didn't realize tiktok was banned in India

E- could have talked a little louder

I: I didn't know that India banned Tiktok

E: louder speaking & more pictures

I - I didn't know that India banned TikTok

E - talk slightly louder

I- I thought it was interesting that there were journalists being spied on

E- Talk just a little bit louder

I- I did not know they owed Tik Tok

E- less words

I - India officially banned tiktok

E - .

I - It was interesting to hear that byte Dance owns TikTok.

E - Could have talked a little bit louder and clearer.

I- Didn't know how many companies they owned

E- keep a stable base

I- crazy how TikTok can be a spy app

E- Little more decoration on the slides

I - I didn't realize India and other countries banned TikTok

E - Try to talk louder and more confidently

I: there's censorship in china

E: could've talked a bit louder

I- Didn't know they owned multiple content companies

E- Maybe more pictures/visuals

I- Interesting to learn that the owners of TikTok own other social media websites.

E- Could the font size be a little bigger?

I- Byte Dance has internal company issues.

E- More Byte Dance related pictures

I-I learned a lot I didn't know much about the issue. I didn't know other governments have banned.

E- You will look more confident when you talk louder-but that really wasn't an issue you guys did great.

I: i thought it was interesting how they owned TikTok

E: talk a little louder

I: Didn't know India banned TikTok

E: have pictures that are more related to the slide

I - ByteDance is collecting data from American users.

E - Practice slides to be more confident.

I: I didn't realize that India was TikTok's largest market before it was banned in 2020

E: Slides could have been a little more engaging!

I- I didn't they were collecting data from American uses, interesting.

E- More details on the slides

I - interesting that they not only had 1 scandal but 2

E - more pictures

I - I had never heard of this company

E - add some pictures

I- FTX collapsed in 2022

E- Maybe add some pictures/visuals

I: I didn't know about this FTX company and their bankruptcy

E: fewer words on the screen

I: I've never hear of this company which is weird because it seems like a big deal

E: Have more interesting slides

I- I didn't know much about FTX so this is cool

E- Slides were kind of bland

I-I hadn't heard of this scandal before

E- maybe add a few pictures

I - I really haven't heard much of this scandal before

E - Add some images

I - they collapsed in 2022

E - more pictures

I: founded in 2018, only lasted a couple years

E: add some pictures

I - I did not know about this scandal or company

E - Speak more clearly and confidently

I - They moved the headquarters to the Bahamas.

E - More engageable slides for the readers

I : Never heard of this company

E: A few pictures to really capture peoples attention

I- The collapsed within few year after launched is just showing how their values were off.

E-More Pictures

I- I have never heard of this company.

E- Photos were helpful as the slides went on.

I- I haven't heard of this company or scandal

E- Try adding some visuals/ pictures to add depth to your visual presentation

I- I didn't realized they collapsed somewhat recently

E- more pictures

I- It seems kind of similar to Enron

E- less reading off slides

I- Thay they could take away that much money from people

E- A few less words

I- Interesting how he was pretend to be a philanthropist when he was really a gambler.

E- The slides could be a little more clean. i.e. centering and using the same font.

I- The founder was 26 years old when he founded the company

E- less words on the slides

I: they were sentenced to 25 years in prison and ordered to pay $11 billion

E: could've had more visuals

I - Sam was sentenced to 25 years in prison for multiple counts of fraud.

E - Use more pictures and not just a black-and-white slideshow.

I: A quick very quick rise and fall of such a large organization.

E: The slides could have been more engaging!

interesting- thats a lot of money to repay!

even better-

I - I did not know this was going on in multiple countries and over the course of numerous years

E - The slides were bland and could use more organization

I - sweatshops

E - less words on slides

I: I didn't know people as young as 10 worked there

E: Less bullet points/ words

I- That they used child labor

E- A few less words

I- I didn't realize they got caught multiple times

E- a little bigger font on the slides

I- I didn't know that there were that many sweatshops

E- Try to limit how much you have on your slides

I- Nike was caught using sweatshops.

E- Less words on some slides

I - I didn't know they had 10 year olds working

E - add some color to the slides

I- Didn't know about this situation

E- talked a little fast

I- Interesting to see this side of Nike.

E- I feel the pictures could have been a little better resolution.

I- Didn't know about this controversy

E- Maybe less words

I: Nike prioritized profit over the well-being of its employees

E: less words on slides

I- I didn't know how widespread the child labor and sweat shops were

E- slides could be less wordy

I - Factory workers and employees were both at stake.

E - Talk a little bit slower.

I Similar concept with Shein company.

E maybe shorten bullets

I- Child Labor

E- Talk to us instead of the board

I - I liked the information presented

E - Ethical dilemma slide a little wordy

I - Sweatshops and child labor was being used in China and other countries.

E - Slow down and try to explain each point more in detail.

i- kids as young as 10 working in factories is crazy

e- bigger font (?)

I: I didn't realize to what great length of poor conditions these workers were put in.

E: Slow down slightly

I: happened in a lot of countries not just one

E: little less words

I- I did not know how low their wages were

E- could rely on notecards less

I- less than 2 dollars an hour is horrible

E- Maybe less words

I- didn't know the specific "stats" about working hours, chemicals, etc.

E- slides looked nice but some got a little wordy

I- that they are able to make clothes like that and not get caught in the country they work for.

E- Few less words

I: That the workers worked 75 hours a week which is crazy

E: Don't put to many words on the presentation

I - Each shein worker is getting paid about $1 per hour.

E - Slides were done well but had lots of works and sometimes felt clustered.

I: launches a lot of new pieces a day

E: less wordy

I - I found it interesting how similar it was to Nike's

E - less words

I - they get paid $1.50 an hour

E - less words on slides

I- I thought it was interesting that the clothing contains led

E- slides were very well presented but maybe a little wordy

I - I liked the "what" on the first slide

E - Good Job!

I- The wage being $1.58

E- less words on slide

I: low wages around $1.58

E: less words on slides

I - Employees are working 75 hours a week.

E - Try to made slides less wordy.

I- I was not aware of the amount of product produce per day

E- N/A

I - I did not know how extreme this issue is and all of the underlying factors it has

E - Try not to look at the ceiling, walls, or ground while speaking

I- Each worker is getting paid less than 2 dollars an hour.

E- Some missing punctuations.

I- I didn't know they produced that much waste

E- Cut down on the amount of words in your visual, some slides felt like they had too much information on them

I: It was amazing to me that they launch 2,000 to 10,000 new pieces to its site each day.

E: A couple slides just got a little lengthy so you could try to just limit that in the future - but great job!!

I- Crazy that they made up $9 billon in accounting

E- Could make more eye contact with audience

I - It reminded me of Enron

E - less words on slide

I- Faced a stock decline

E- Try not to read directly off the board

I - they went bankrupt

E - try not to look at the screen and less words on slides

I- that they were falsifying their revenues

E- try to face your audience

I - I did not know about this scandal

E - Less words on the slides and less reading off of the slides

I- I haven't heard about Worldcom or this scandal

E- Try not to rely on reading off the slides as much

I- Losing billions of dollars

E- Lots of words on slides

I- Very similar to Enron

E-less words on slides

I- I did not know world com existed

E- slides are very wordy and less reading from the slides

I: oversupply delcine their stocks

E: less wordy

i- that they went bankruptcy

e- maybe fewer words

I: in control of over half of America"s telecommunications

E: slides may be a bit wordy

I: Lied about their financial statements to make them look better

E: A lot of words on the slides maybe use a little less

I - Interesting how they falsified financial reports much like Enron did.

E - Try not to read directly off the slides.

I- didn't know what world com was

E- read off of slides less

I - "largest scandal in US history"

E - Lots of words on the slides

I: I had never heard of Worldcom, but they used to be one of the largest telecommunications companies.

E: Practice your speech more just to build your credibility as speakers. This will allow you to not read off the slides as much.

I- Interesting they made money because they lied about their stock numbers

E- acknowledge your other group members by looking at them.

I- Interesting that it was an accounting scandal.

E- Maybe a bit too many words on the slides.

I: Liked how you gave examples with each shadow you said

E: less reading off of slides/ less words on slides

I- I didn't know about this controversy

E- could read off sildes less

I - interesting about the sexual harassment

E - less reading off screen

I- that they were false advertising that they were ethical

E- reading off the slides a little less

I - I didn't know Starbucks got goods from Kenya

E - maybe include real images even though I liked the ones you had

I-wasn't aware of this

E-keeping stable

I- In Guatemala the child labor was something I didn't know

E-less words on some slides

I - Key stakeholders are coffee farmers and laborers, starbucks employees, customers, and investors.

E - Talk a little but slower

I- that starbucks has bad labor conditions

E- could have a few less words

I: I never heard about Starbucks using child labor

E: Don't just read off the slides

I- They are not 100% ethical

E- I think the font could have been a little bigger

I: reports of child labor and illegal trafficking

E: less reading directly off of the slides

I - I was completely unaware of the use of child labor and the backlash they were facing

E - You guys definitely knew your info, try to be less fidgety and more confident

I-did not know starbucks was getting sued

E-talk a little slower at some parts

I: lied about their products

E: add some pictures

I Interesting how new the situation is

E I can't think of anything!

I- Starbucks lies to their consumers

E- Talk a little slower

I - they advertised that they were 100% ethical

E - include real images

I - Starbucks has falsely advertised that their coffee is 100% ethically sourced beans.

E - If I had to give one maybe explain the ethical issue in more detail.

i- i didn't know that they didn't ethically source some of their supplies

e- I'm not sure, you did so well

I: I didn't know the farms were located in those places such as Brazil

E: N/A

I - I found it interesting that someone leaked an email

E - less words on slides

I - they posted fake positive reviews

E - less words on slides

I-didn't know about this brand

E-talk a little louder

I: posted fake reviewes

E: get a little louder

I-they had to post fake reviews

E- maybe slightly less words

I - I was not aware of this scandal and how big of a deal fake reviews could be.

E - Less words on slides and less reliant on notecards

Interesting - They were forced to write fake reviews about the products

Even Better - More eye contact

I- Makes me wonder if other companies post fake reviews on their products.

E- Maybe there could be fewer words on the slides.

I Interesting the email exposed them

E less words on slides just for views because you weren't reading off slides.

I - ethical issues

E - maybe a little bit louder, but overall good job

I- Fake reviews posted on their products

E-Talk a little bit louder

I- Haven't heard of this brand or scandal

E- A little more volume, you have good content be confident with it

I- Sunday Riley being a high brand skincare line

E- Can speak a little louder

I: Its interesting that they would write fake reviews

E: Don't put so many words on the presentation

I: I thought it was very interesting that they did fake reviews. I wonder how many other companies do this and we don't realize.

E: More eye contact & practice more so you seem more confident in your topic

I: I found it interesting that Sephora was unaware of these fake reviews

E: fewer words and a little louder volume

I- the employees were forced to write the fake reviews

E- less wordy slides

I - Sunday Riley intentionally deceived their customers to boost profits.

E - Try to talk louder and more confident.

i- a leaked email lead to this entire case

e- fewer words on slides

I- that they posted fake reviews

E- could have less words

I- Never heard of this company

E- A couple of pictures

I: I didn't know the NOx trap was enhanced with fuel - or EPA importance

E: Fewer words on slides

I - 11 million cars is crazy

E - could use some pictures/visuals, less words/reading off screen

I-didn't know they produced so many cars that were impacted

E-pictures

I- that the system can be so sophisticated that they cannot get caught

E- could use less words on the slides

I- included a video

E- less wordy slides

I- 11 millions cars were impacted

E- less words on slides

I - Crazy that Volkswagen intentionally lied about more than 11 million cars.

E - Check the punctuation on slides.

I- they were very creative with how they got around it

E- The information on the slides was very good but you could look up a little more

I- 11 million cars were impacted

E- Could the slides be formatted more similarly

I- didn't know they made that many cars in a year

E- slideshow could be a little more organized

I - 11 million cars were impacted

E - less words on slides

I- 11 million cars were impacted

E- Less words on some slides

I- The Nox trap is interesting

E- a little less words

I - The fact that this impacted 11 million cars is insane

E - Slides could have been a little more organized and less wordy

i- that they've made the largest number of cars

e- try to not just read off of the slides

I: I thought it was interesting they lied about emissions to better their product

E: could have had more infor

Interesting - Volkswagen had 11 million cars impacted because of this issue.

Even Better - Talked louder and more confident

I: The video shared that 40x the tested number of emissions was actually being released in the air.

E: Less words!

I interesting how they prioritized their own gains and were selfish

E I liked the video maybe acknowledge some of the main points in it or what it will tell us before hand

I: 11 million cars were impacted by this scandal

E: could've elaborated a bit more

I- They made their employees crate millions of unauthorized bank accounts

E- A few less words

I-didn't know that employees were expected to meet unrealistic standards

E-slides are a little wordy

I - created millions of unauthorized bank accounts

E - less words on slides

I: didn't know they set a certain pin and that's called pinning

E: Fewer words on slides, more pictures, less reading off of slides

I - Wells Faro employees created millions of unauthorized bank accounts without customer consent

E - Lots of words on the slides

I - They made millions of fake accounts

E - Less reading off of the slides

I - didn't know about the technique "pinning"

E - less words on slides/reading off slides

I- I heard a lot of this scandal but didn't know the details, it was interesting to know about pining and the scandal.

E-have pictures

I- Created millions of unauthorized bank accounts

E- Fewer words on some slides

I- the CEO is banned from working at any bank ever again

E- slides could have fewer words

I- I didn't know they made that many unauthorized accounts

E- A little less info on the slides

I: Interesting how much fraudulent activity occurred

E: The slides could have been more eye catching

I - I didn't know Wells Fargo was involved in this ethical scandal.

E - Add images to slides.

I- that a bank would have people do that for them

E- could use less words

I interesting choice of shadows

E make the slides a little more appealing

I: Created unauthorized accounts to make quotes

E: more interesting slides

I: customers were charged fees for accounts that they never authorized

E: could've added more pictures