https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk en-us 2017-11-09 15:59:19 UTC 2017-11-09 17:41:14 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205372170 The opening sentence tells the reader that "The Lottery" and "The Hunger Games" can be compared through their tales of fiction, even though they are different. 
-Summarizes both the "Hunger Games" and "The Lottery"
-The last sentence is the thesis because it goes into detail about how the stories compare and contrast
-The thesis arguing that both stories encourage unity and promote rebellion against injustice

]]> 2017-11-09 16:48:33 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205372170 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205372603 Thesis: By analyzing the complete opposite behaviors...encourage unity and promote rebellion against injustice. 

The thesis is arguing that "The Lottery" and "The Hunger Games" are different in the sense that community encourages unity and promotes rebellion. 

The opening sentence introduces both works and states they can be compared and differences despite historical contexts. 

The introduction gives details regarding the plot for both works and questions to get the reader thinking. ]]> 2017-11-09 16:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205372603 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205372781 - The opening sentence tells the reader that despite the differing plots of The Hunger Games and "The Lottery", the generally eerie mood in both pieces is comparable.
- The information given in the first paragraph describes the dark, creepy plots in each story.
-  Thesis: After analyzing the way that Collins recognizes familial and community affection in a way that Jackson does not, we can see that these ties provide an opportunity for transformation in a society due their to unity and rebellion against injustice.


]]> 2017-11-09 16:49:21 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205372781 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205377210 Collin's novel and Jackson's short story...that allow for comparison. 

This paragraph discusses the similarities in how the people are chosen for The Hunger Games and The Lottery. The author pulls direct quotes from both pieces about the actually drawing of names and compares them both. ]]> 2017-11-09 16:56:41 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205377210 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205378776 -The topic sentence is the first sentence
-The main point is the similarities between the drawings and the lotteries in both stories
-The textual evidence used supports the main point how the drawings were both negative and deadly things by saying "where the word tribute is pretty much synonymous with corpse". The other two quotes in the paragraph support the similarity that both drawings have been around for a long time. ]]> 2017-11-09 16:59:13 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205378776 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205378919 The mundane and commonplace...these customers year after year. 

This paragraph describes the places in which the drawing of names for the events are taking place. The evidence in this paragraph compares the community attachments to common place(common square). ]]> 2017-11-09 16:59:28 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205378919 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205380301 Topic Sentence: "Collin's novel and Jackson's short story contain many similar elements that allow for comparison."
-Main point of paragraph: The killings in the Hunger Games and "The Lottery" are similar because of their confirmation of the death of townspeople and the belief amongst the community that things have always been this way, and must continue to be this way to promote and maintain order.
- Textual evidence and how it supports the thesis: Uses quotes from the book about how in each novel, people say that the annual drawings are just the way things have always been. This ties to the thesis because it shows the similarities in the two stories before it starts stating the differences.

]]> 2017-11-09 17:01:57 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205380301 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205380820 There are also obvious...each of the drawing ceremonies.

This paragraph compares the people of each societies reactions to the choosing of people. The quotes compare the differences in the two societies by looking at how in "The Lottery," the people are more accepting of who is chosen and don't show as much emotion whereas in "The Hunger Games," Katniss volunteers to take her sister, Prim's, place in the games.]]> 2017-11-09 17:02:53 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205380820 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205381054 Topic Sentence: "The mundane and commonplace nature of these brutal ceremonies is one reason why the villagers and District members continue to participate in these customs year after year."
The paragraph is basically stating the reasons why the community has accepted the horrible traditions that have been occurring for generations in their communities. These reasons are the leaders have convinced them that if they change, society will fall back to the old days were times were "worse." In "The Lottery," Jackson states that it will fall back to "living in caves" and "eating stewed chickweed and acorns."
The textual evidence used are quotes from each story. They support the main point of the paragraph because they talk about the people of the community worrying about the old times and how the horrible traditions prevent them. ]]> 2017-11-09 17:03:14 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205381054 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205382510 -The topic sentence is the first sentence
-the main point of the paragraph is to reveal the main differences between the hunger games and the lottery
-textual evidence that is used is quotes by Jackson and collins that reveal how different the town and families of the names drawn feel towards them being called on
-in hunger games the families and towns empathize and Katniss volunteers herself
-in the lottery the family and town turn on the names that are drawn]]> 2017-11-09 17:05:42 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205382510 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205383245 The communities and families work together...joining together accomplishes two very different objectives

This paragraph discusses the community's feelings towards these ceremony. The reasoning for "The Lottery" is that the communal effort results in continuation of the acts. District 12 in "The Hunger Games" protests the games within their district and show lots of love for Katniss while trying to bring the end to the games as a whole. 

Specifc examples from the texts are used as well as an outside source to support the ideas of "The Lottery"

]]> 2017-11-09 17:06:55 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205383245 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205383499 Body 2: The topic sentence is the second sentence. The main point of this paragraph is describing how both societies are afraid of straying swaying from tradition. Textual evidence is used to explain that in The Hunger Games, people were afraid of what the government might do to them if they strayed away. And in The Lottery, the villagers are worried that straying away will only cause other problems like issues with race and famine. ]]> 2017-11-09 17:07:21 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205383499 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205383690 The actions of Katniss and her neighbors...short story at all. 

This paragraph compares the sense of community found in the members of the society in "The Hunger Games," to the not so bonded community in "The Lottery." The author uses quotes from Collins to demonstrate the love and admiration that Katniss's community and family give to her as she prepares to be taken away for the games.]]> 2017-11-09 17:07:38 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205383690 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205385830 Topic Sentence: "There are also obvious differences that exist between the two pieces of literature. However, the most critical difference lies in the reactions of the families and communities at each of the drawing ceremonies."
The main point of this paragraph is to describe the difference of reaction between the two stories. In "The Lottery," the families are all jovial before the drawing. However, as one, they turn on the Mrs. Hutchinson (the victim) after she is the one who draws the marked paper. However, in "The Hunger Games", after someone is picked, Katniss Everdeen volunteers to go instead in order to save her sister. Similarly to "The Lottery," in The Hunger Games the families come together after the drawing takes place. However, this time they come together to show their disapproval of the tradition rather than to kill the person who was chosen. 
Again, the textual evidence were quotes from the primary source. These quotes support the main point because they show the differences between the two stories. The quotes from the Lottery include quotes that are stating to "be a good sport" and how villager joked about someone showing up late. However, the quotes form Hunger Games state how the crowd stood silent in a way that states that they don't agree with what is happening. ]]> 2017-11-09 17:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205385830 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205385840 -The topic sentence is the first sentence in the paragraph. 
-The main point of the paragraph is to show how the communities in the two stories unite together, but in different ways. In "The Lottery", they are uniting to participate in the violent tradition, but in "The Hunger Games", the community is working together to protest the Hunger Games and support Katniss.
-There is only one quote in this paragraph. It supports the main point by saying how the population in "The Lottery" is so selfish and unthinking that they do not see that what they are doing is wrong. ]]> 2017-11-09 17:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205385840 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205386447 The differences in the nature...rebellion in both stories. 

The sixth paragraph compares the differences who actually mandates the systems. In "The Lottery," the people of the community are the ones who perform the act to kill the member that is chosen, while in "The Hunger Games," there is a "higher power" that controls how the games are run. The author uses evidence from both works to compare how the participants of The Hunger Games are "powerless against the reaping," and the members of the society in "The Lottery" get a choice to stop their actions.]]> 2017-11-09 17:11:52 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205386447 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205386656 Topic Sentence: "As illustrated in these circumstances, the communities and families work together in the scenes from both pieces; however, this joining together accomplishes two very different objectives."
- Main point of the paragraph: By looking at the different time periods of the pieces' publishings, we can see the different political commentary of the two stories. "The Lottery" rejects the paganism of a controlled society that picks and chooses the value of human life.  The Hunger Games is more about the potential of the power of a people's rebellion.
-Textual evidence: Used quotations that demonstrate the different messages represented in each story.]]> 2017-11-09 17:12:14 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205386656 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205387217 Gives an overall summary of similarities and differences of the two works.

The summary repeats some of the points made throughout the essay and also adds new evidence in the conclusion but brings the paper together in a cohesive way.

]]> 2017-11-09 17:13:06 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205387217 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205387516 Body 5: The topic sentence is the first sentence. This paragraph explains how Collins allows the characters to show emotion and affection towards their loved ones and that The Lottery doesn't show this. The quotes describe the affection shown toward one another in The Hunger Games and make it easier to see how The Lottery doesn't show these same traits. ]]> 2017-11-09 17:13:38 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205387516 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205388559 -topic sentence is the first sentence
-the main point is showing the differences in how the lottery/reaping system is set up within each story 
-the textual evidence is quotes from Jackson that reveal that some cities in the lottery system have quit it, but in hunger games they cannot do that
-in collins quote she reveals that Panem is powerless against the reaping which is why they continue to hold it. 
-it emphasizes how both the lottery system in "The Lottery" and reaping system in "Hunger Games" are very different from each other affect the people of their town]]> 2017-11-09 17:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205388559 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205390434 -The conclusion contains information about how there are strong bonds within families in "The Hunger Games" and not so much in "The Lottery".  It also states a similarity within both stories-- that both characters are killed by the people closest to them.
-The conclusion does not just repeat. The last few sentences add information that was never mentioned throughout the whole essay, which seem out of place to me.]]> 2017-11-09 17:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205390434 laurenroseclark0 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205392194

]]> 2017-11-09 17:21:12 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205392194 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205393506 Topic Sentence: "The actions of Katniss and her neighbors show that Collins brings in an element of personal affection amongst families and community members that is not portrayed in Jackson's short story at all."
Main Point: To illustrate the unity amongst community members in The Hunger Games compared to the lack of unity amongst community members in "The Lottery". There is more love for others in The Hunger Games.
Textual evidence: Gives the example of the people in The Hunger Games symbolically saluting Katniss and grabbing hands with each other.

]]> 2017-11-09 17:23:24 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205393506 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205399303 Topic Sentence: "The differences in the nature of who controls and enforces the lotteries in the short story and the novel as well as in communal sentiment contribute to the possibility of rebellion in both stories." 
-Main point of paragraph: Those who enforce the killings in "The Lottery" are members of the community. ]]> 2017-11-09 17:33:18 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205399303 https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205400001 The conclusion is mostly reiterating the similarities and differences of the two stories, however, it also expands on them. The conclusion emphasizes the bond of family in Hunger Games and the lack of in The Lottery. The conclusion repeats these aspects of the stories. However, the story also introduces the new fact of Gales hunger for taking down the Capitol. ]]> 2017-11-09 17:34:35 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenroseclark0/s333s4lzg6wk/wish/205400001