7E.01_Writing Exam skill by Vinschool Metropolis

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-22 00:20:04 UTC

- Work individually.
- Write some sentences to describe what happened in the 2 pictures in your own words. Use the given questions as a guide.
- Timing: 6’

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-22 00:20:04 UTC

These questions may help you:
- What is the animal?
- Where was it? What was it doing?
- What could happen next?

Instruction

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-22 00:20:04 UTC

Work in group.
Go to Padlet and go to the google meet link for your group.
Decide your own pairs in the group. Then each person in a pair would give feedback for for your partner by writing YES / NO to complete the feedback form (below).
Timing: 12’

Feedback form

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-22 00:20:04 UTC

From: (your name)

To: (your friend’s name)

IDEAS

An interesting title →

Names for characters →

Having all three pictures →

>= 50 words →

LANGUAGE

Past simple tense →

Linking words about time sequence (first, then, next, later, finally, …) →

Adjectives and Adverbs →

No grammar & spelling errors →

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-22 00:20:04 UTC

Work individually
Go to Padlet.
Choose a set of pictures then write a story based on the given 3 pictures. You must write 50 words or more. Use the writing checklist.
Timing: 15’

No note on padlet = absence
Challenging corner: Write one more story for another set.

Writing check list for part 7

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-22 00:20:04 UTC

Model answer and questions

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-22 00:20:04 UTC

MODEL ANSWER
A sunny day

Mark got up and looked outside. He was happy because it was a sunny day. He decided to play football. He then found his football and hurried outside. Next, he called his friends to ask them to come to his house. Later, his friends arrived, and they played together. They had a wonderful time!

Questions
1/ What is the title of the story?
2/ What is the name of the character?
3/ How many sentences are there? Is it >= 50 words?
4/ Does the story describe all 3 pictures?
5/ What tense is used?
6/ List some linking words (time expressions) that are used.
7/ List some adjectives and adverbs that are used.

Triệu Xuân Bách

bach069620 — 2021-11-22 01:27:56 UTC

- In the picture has elephant.
- it in the town. it is rioting and destroying the city.
- I think the city will become a battlefield.

trường phúc

phuc006956 — 2021-11-22 01:29:17 UTC

- elephant
- where people live. destructive
- the elephant will be sedated and brought back to the zoo

Gia Minh

minh021576 — 2021-11-22 01:29:39 UTC

In 2009, there was an elephant walking to the Thailand Streets. Not a lot of people could go there to see the elephant, but there were many bicycles there. Probably the elephant stepped on those.

Thành Vinh

vinh076710 — 2021-11-22 01:30:46 UTC

There are an elephant

The elephant remove back to the zoo

linh069367 — 2021-11-22 01:32:21 UTC

In the picture is have a big elephant.
Is in Thailand Streets.
The elephant has been removed from its enclosure.

Hải Sơn

2021-11-22 01:32:36 UTC

-There is an elephant in the picture
- That elephant goes and it's stepping on what it's going through
-The elephant it turns the place it goes through is ruins

minh_anh

2021-11-22 01:35:08 UTC

- Elephant
- It in the city, it's kicking everything
- Everything will be destroyed by it or it will be transported back to where it lives

Triệu Xuân Bách

bach069620 — 2021-11-22 02:15:35 UTC

1. A sunny day.
2. Mark.
3. 7 sentences. Is it >= 50 words
4. yes describe all 3 pictures
5. past simple

Bảo Khoa

khoa021132 — 2021-11-22 02:16:33 UTC

1/ A sunny day
2/ Mark
3/ it 52 > 50 words
4/ yes describe all picture
5/ past simple

Thành Vinh

vinh076710 — 2021-11-22 02:16:40 UTC

A sunny day :>
The main character is Mark

3 pics it true ;-;
the story use past simple

Triệu Xuân Bách

bach069620 — 2021-11-22 02:26:31 UTC

An amazing picnic
His name was Jake. In the morning, Jake's family prepared food and supplies for the picnic. They prepared snack, water, sandwichs, pears, bananas, oranges. They palpitating because they going to had a picnic. They went to a garden. In the garden had trees, a small lake, grass. In lunch they ate some food they prepared. They was very happy. After meal everything was so messy,they sat and rested a minute. And Jake and Jake's sister swam in the small lake. They was so fun.

Bảo Khoa

khoa021132 — 2021-11-22 02:27:10 UTC

In picture 1: Tom's family is preparing for a picnic
In photo 2: Tom's family decided to eat by the lake under the tree
Picture 3: Tom's parents are sitting on the beach, Tom and Jane are swimming in the lake

Gia Minh

minh021576 — 2021-11-22 02:27:16 UTC

Minh_Anh

2021-11-22 02:30:01 UTC

Hải Sơn

2021-11-22 02:30:33 UTC

Nguyễn Kiều linh

linh069367 — 2021-11-22 02:31:00 UTC

NgoCNHI

nhi077682 — 2021-11-22 02:31:08 UTC

Nguyễn KiềuLinh

linh069367 — 2021-11-22 02:32:43 UTC

Is a sunny day
Mark
Yes describe all picture
past simple

Thanh Vinh

vinh076710 — 2021-11-22 02:34:11 UTC

Tuấn Thành

2021-11-22 15:04:12 UTC

- elephants 
- in Africa

Hải Sơn

son072137 — 2021-11-23 08:19:32 UTC

One day Jonh and Mark were hanging out and walking on the road and they saw £30. They were so happy :>. They grabbed the 30 pounds and ran to the icecream shop. They ordered two large vanilla icecreams or chocolate icereams. They ate their icecreams and continued with their day.