https://padlet.com/23mboone/s1mhwq5cbm6u Hello and welcome to my feedback padlet hope you enjoy my pieces and remember to comment positively :) en-us 2018-02-01 13:36:39 UTC 2018-03-28 12:33:45 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Moderncam.png 23achuy https://padlet.com/23mboone/s1mhwq5cbm6u/wish/236892293 Star- I really liked how you included a lot of facts and statistics about Hollywood movies. It was especially nice how you had math related facts in your introduction. That would be very interesting to readers reading your essay. It's very important information and would make readers want to read more of your essay.
Star-  Another thing I really liked about your piece was the descriptive word choice.  It made your essay very strong. You didn't say the same words or the similar thoughts over and over again. It caught  my attention and I noticed how annoyed people are that Hollywood is not putting the actors that fit the position best in movies.
Wish- Next time , just extend your warrants in the first paragraph a little more. Just so people can understand more and know more about your thoughts about the article and the video. ]]> 2018-03-01 13:48:58 UTC https://padlet.com/23mboone/s1mhwq5cbm6u/wish/236892293 https://padlet.com/23mboone/s1mhwq5cbm6u/wish/237404637 I really liked your vignette. It had great detail and your really showed and not told. I also really liked the solid word choice you used throughout the story it really better helped me picture what was going on in your vignette as well. One thing you could look to do in the future would be to maybe expalin a little more in the moment of what was happening in the big "climax" of your story. But overall really nice job!
-Danielle Most]]> 2018-03-02 14:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/23mboone/s1mhwq5cbm6u/wish/237404637 23jberry https://padlet.com/23mboone/s1mhwq5cbm6u/wish/237426178 On thing I really like about your pieces is your hook. I love the way you used a quote to start followed by facts. It got me really hook and I wanted to see where you were going with race in Hollywood. I also enjoyed the part when  you talked about Black Panther and Moana. I wish you put more about how Hollywood is getting better because in the beginning you talked about black panther. -jenai




]]> 2018-03-02 15:06:23 UTC https://padlet.com/23mboone/s1mhwq5cbm6u/wish/237426178 23jencarnacion https://padlet.com/23mboone/s1mhwq5cbm6u/wish/246859312 Hi Morgan! I thought your article was very creative, it grabbed me in with the hook and kept me "on my feet" I felt that you were article was very clever making the super heroes bad. One thing you could work on is your grammar because at some points I was confused]]> 2018-03-28 12:31:23 UTC https://padlet.com/23mboone/s1mhwq5cbm6u/wish/246859312