Writing moderation Year 5 by https://padlet.com/forcefulhorseliterature/s178oviryjsowuj4 Post your response to the discussion topic by clicking the plus button below. en-us 2025-05-07 07:03:46 UTC 2025-05-07 15:37:09 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4ac.png https://padlet.com/forcefulhorseliterature/s178oviryjsowuj4/wish/3440149841 Consistency in punctuation

]]> 2025-05-07 15:18:09 UTC https://padlet.com/forcefulhorseliterature/s178oviryjsowuj4/wish/3440149841 https://padlet.com/forcefulhorseliterature/s178oviryjsowuj4/wish/3440151011 Punctuation and spelling there, some lack of flair - work on carefully chosen vocabulary to enhance mood.


Ensure more opportunities for using higher level punctuation.



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]]> 2025-05-07 15:20:27 UTC https://padlet.com/forcefulhorseliterature/s178oviryjsowuj4/wish/3440153387 https://padlet.com/forcefulhorseliterature/s178oviryjsowuj4/wish/3440156197 Having the self permission to move away from the model text

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Checking tense


Vocabulary was good

Sentence structure is accurate

Punctuation mainly accurate

]]> 2025-05-07 15:25:28 UTC https://padlet.com/forcefulhorseliterature/s178oviryjsowuj4/wish/3440159666 https://padlet.com/forcefulhorseliterature/s178oviryjsowuj4/wish/3440166505 All 3 schools differ on how we decide / level whether the work is working towards or working below.


It would be good to have some guidance from the trust the difference between working towards and working below.

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Punctuation, spelling and lots of errors even though it is evident they can use the punctuation correctly.

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Checking tense

Inconsistent use of punctuation

Word choice - don't always make sense

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