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      <title>Beta Wed lesson 19  by Lau Ling</title>
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      <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:30:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Rou Xuan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Subject: I Helped Karen Find Her Purse</p><p><br/></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p><br/></p><p>I want to share with you how I helped my friend Karen find her lost purse. Last Friday evening, she told me she had lost it. I quickly went to help her. While we were walking past the canteen, we heard an announcement. Someone had found a purse.We rushed to the school garden and found her purse there. Karen was very happy and thankful. I felt very glad that I could help her. It was a good thing to do.Please write back soon! Bye for now.</p><p><br/></p><p>Your cousin,</p><p>Rou Xuan </p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I want to share with you how I helped my friend Karen find her lost purse. Last Friday evening, she told me she had lost it. I quickly went to help her. While we were walking past the canteen, we heard an announcement. Someone had found a purse. <strong>We rushed to the school garden and found her purse there.</strong> Karen was very happy and thankful <strong>to me. I felt very glad that I had done a good deed.</strong> <strong>Please write back soon! Bye for now.</strong> </p><p><strong>Your cousin,</strong></p><p><strong>Rou Xuan </strong></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:43:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zhen Hong corrected</title>
         <author>nickylim22</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/s107n4l45owywqk6/wish/3486677025</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veann,</p><p><br/></p><p>  I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend to find her purse! Last Friday, I passed by toilet and heard Karen crying. She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the garden. I am glad to be able to help her. That's all for now. Please write back soon.</p><p><br/></p><p>Warm Regards,</p><p>Zhen Hong</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend find her purse! Last Friday, I passed by<strong> the toilet</strong> and heard Karen crying. She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the garden. I am glad that I was able to help her. That’s all for now. Please write back soon.</p><p>Warm regards,<br>Zhen Hong</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:43:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>tang pei ern corrected</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/s107n4l45owywqk6/wish/3486679868</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>To: <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="mailto:karen@gmail.com">veann@gmail.com</a> </p><p>Subject: Find Karen's lost purse</p><p><br/></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell about how I helped Karen to find her lost purse.</p><p>Last Friday during the recess, I  passed by the toilet and heard Karen crying.She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school compound.</p><p>After searching high and low, we finallly found her purse in the school garden. I'm glad to be able.</p><p>That's all. Bye and take care.</p><p>Warm regards,</p><p>Pei Ern</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped Karen find her lost purse.</p><p>Last Friday during recess, I passed by the toilet and heard Karen crying. She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school compound.</p><p>After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the school garden. I'm glad to <strong>be able to help her.</strong></p><p>That's all. Bye and take care.</p><p>Warm regards,<br>Pei Ern</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:46:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jessmin corrected</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/s107n4l45owywqk6/wish/3486680528</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I help Karen to find her purse. Last Friday, I walked past by the canteen and heard Karen crying. She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school. After searching high and low, we finally find her purse in the garden. I felt very glad that I could help her. It was a good thing to do. Bye for now!</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>Your cousin,</p><p>Jessmin</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how<strong> I helped </strong>Karen find her purse. Last Friday, I walked past the canteen and heard Karen crying. She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school. After searching high and low, we finally<strong> found </strong>her purse in the garden. <strong>I felt very glad that I could lend a helping hand to her.</strong> Bye for now!</p><p>Your cousin,<br>Jessmin</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:47:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Joe mun corrected </title>
         <author>joemun2020</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/s107n4l45owywqk6/wish/3486682175</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can’ t wait to tell you about how I helped Yuki !Last Friday during the break I passed by Yuki and heard  Karen crying. She was sad so a I decided to help her sesrch around the school. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the garden. I am over the moon to be able to help her. Please write back soon. Looking forward to your reply. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can’t wait to tell you about how I helped Yuki <strong>to find her lost purse! </strong>Last Friday during the break, I passed by Yuki and heard <strong>Karen bitterly.</strong> She was sad, so <strong>I </strong> decided to help her <strong>search</strong> around the school. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the garden. I am over the moon to be able to help her.</p><p>Please write back soon. Looking forward to your reply.</p><p><br></p><p><strong>Regards ,</strong></p><p>Joe Mun</p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:49:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Loh kah Him corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to share you about how I helped my friend, Veann to find her purse.</p><p><br/></p><p>Last Friday, during the recess time. I pass by a toilet and heard Karen crying. She was feeling down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school compound.</p><p><br/></p><p>After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the school garden. I am over the moon to be able to help her.</p><p><br/></p><p>That's all for now. Please reply soon. Bye!</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Kah Him</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to share <strong>with </strong>you about how I helped my friend, Karen to find her purse.</p><p>Last Friday, <strong>during recess, I</strong> passed by a toilet and heard Karen crying. She was feeling down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school compound.</p><p>After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the school garden. I am over the moon to be able to help her.</p><p>That's all for now. Please reply soon. Bye!</p><p>Regards,<br>Kah Him</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:50:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tan Powell corrected</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/s107n4l45owywqk6/wish/3486683303</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>To: <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="mailto:karen@gmail.com">veann@gmail.com</a></p><p>Subject: Lost and found</p><p><br></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p><br></p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped Karen to found her purse! Last Friday recess, I passed by toilet and heard Karen crying as loud as thunder. She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school compound. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the garden. I am over the moon to be able to help her. That's all. Bye for now.</p><p><br></p><p>Your Cousin,</p><p>Powell </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped Karen to<strong> find </strong>her purse!<br>Last Friday,<strong> during recess</strong>, I passed by the toilet and heard Karen crying as loudly as thunder.<br>She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school compound.<br>After searching high and low<strong> for thirty minutes, </strong>we finally found her purse in the garden.<br>I am over the moon to be able to help her.<br>That's all. Bye for now.</p><p><br></p><p>Your Cousin,</p><p>Powell </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:50:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Esther corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veaan,</p><p>    I can't wait to tell you about how I help my friend Karen. Last Friday I passed by toilet and heard Karen crying . She was down in the dumps so I decided to help her search around the school to found his purse. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in garden. I am over the moon. I am glad to be able to help her. Please write back soon. Bye for now!</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Esther</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend Karen <strong>find her lost purse.</strong>  Last Friday, I passed by the toilet and heard Karen crying<strong> loudly.</strong> She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school to find her purse.</p><p>After searching high and low<strong> for thirty minutes, </strong>we finally found her purse in the garden. I am over the moon. I am glad to be able to help her.</p><p>Please write back soon. Bye for now!</p><p>Regards,<br>Esther</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:50:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Law Qin Er  corrected</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/s107n4l45owywqk6/wish/3486684381</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veann, </p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped Karen to find her lost purse. Last Friday during recess, I passed by the canteen and heard Karen crying. She was down so I decided to help her and search around the school to find her purse. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the bushes. I am glad to be able to help her.</p><p>That's all for now. Please write back soon.</p><p>Your friend,</p><p>Law Qin Er</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped Karen find her lost purse. Last Friday, <strong>during recess,</strong> I passed by the canteen and heard Karen crying. She was <strong>down in the dumps, </strong>so I decided to help her search around the school. After searching high and low <strong>for thirty minutes,</strong> we finally found her purse in the bushes. I am glad to be able to help her.</p><p>That's all for now. Please write back soon.</p><p>Your friend,<br>Law Qin Er</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:51:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Yihan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how i helped my friend to find her purse. Last Friday, I passed by the canteen and heard Karen crying. She was down in the dumps, so i decided to help her search around the school compound. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse at the garden. Im glad i helped her find her purse. Please write back soon! Bye for now.</p><p><br/></p><p>Warm regards,</p><p>Yihan</p><p>Corrected</p><p><strong>Dear Veann,</strong></p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend find her purse. Last Friday, <strong>during recess</strong> I passed by the canteen and heard Karen crying <strong>bitterly </strong>. She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school compound. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the garden. I'm glad I helped her find her purse. Please write back soon! Bye for now.</p><p>Warm regards,<br>Yihan</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:52:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aden Lai Jun Di corrected</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/s107n4l45owywqk6/wish/3486685063</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend to find her lost purse.</p><p>Last Friday, I passed by the toilet and heard Karen crying She was down in the dumps so I decided to help her search around the school.</p><p>After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the school's garden. I am over the moon to be able to help her find her purse.</p><p>That's all for now. Please write back soon.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend<strong> find </strong>her lost purse.</p><p>Last Friday, I passed by the toilet and heard Karen crying <strong>biterly.</strong> She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school.</p><p>After searching high and low<strong> for thirty minutes, </strong> we finally found her purse in the school garden. I am over the moon to be able to help her.</p><p>That's all for now. Please write back soon.</p><p><strong>Regards, </strong></p><p><strong>Aden</strong></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:52:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tze xuan  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear  veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped .</p><p>Last Friday,the school bell ring at the sudden.I walk as fast that I can,when I walked passed by classroom.I heard Karen crying.she was down in the dumps,I go and asked she and I knew her purse was lost.</p><p>So I decided to help her,we search around ,</p><p>The Lady luck was on our side,we found her purse in the garden.I'm glad to be able.</p><p>That is all.bye and take care.</p><p>Warm regards,</p><p>Tze Xuan </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped Karen.</p><p>Last Friday, the school bell rang <strong>suddenly</strong>. I walked<strong> as fast as I could</strong>. When I walked past a classroom, I heard Karen crying. She was down in the dumps. I <strong>went and asked her</strong>, and she told me her purse was lost.</p><p>So I decided to help her. We searched around <strong>the school compound.</strong></p><p><strong>Lady Luck was on our side.</strong> We found her purse in the garden. I'm glad I was able to help.</p><p>That's all. Bye and take care.</p><p>Warm regards,<br>Tze Xuan</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:52:16 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Yan Ann corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veann, </p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend! Last Friday recess, I passed by the canteen and heard Karen crying. She was down in the dumps so I decided to help her search around the table. After searching high and low, we finally found on the ground. I am glad to be able to help her. That's all for now, Please write back soon. </p><p>Regards, </p><p>Yan Ann</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend! Last Friday <strong>during recess,</strong> I passed by the canteen and heard Karen crying <strong>as loud as thunder. I approached her and knew that she lost her purse.</strong>She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the canteen area.</p><p>After searching high and low, we finally found it on the ground. I am glad to be able to help her.</p><p>That's all for now. Please write back soon.</p><p>Regards,<br>Yan Ann</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:52:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hong Ze corrected</title>
         <author>m14339563</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I want to share with you how I helped my friend Karen find her lost purse. Last Friday evening, she told me she had lost it. I quickly went to help her. After searching high and low we finally found her purse in the scholl garden. Karen was delighted and thankful. I felt very glad that I could help her. It was a good thing to do. Please write back soon! Bye for now.</p><p>Your Cousin, </p><p>Chin Hong Ze</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I want to share with you how I helped my friend Karen find her lost purse. Last Friday evening, she told me she had lost it. <strong>Without hesitation, I  immediately helped her seach around the school compound</strong>. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the school garden. Karen was delighted and thankful. I felt very glad that I could help her.  Please write back soon! Bye for now.</p><p>Your Cousin,<br>Chin Hong Ze</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:53:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Giselle Cham corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear veann,</p><p>   I can’t wait to tell you about how I helped my friend to find her lost purse! Last friday I  passed by toilet and heard karen crying.She was down in the dumps,so I decided to help her search around the school.After       searching high and low, we finally found her  purse in canteen.I am glad. That’s all for now.Please write back soon.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Giselle</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can’t wait to tell you about how I helped my friend,<strong> Karen</strong>  find her lost purse!<br>Last Friday, I passed by the toilet and heard <strong>Karen </strong>crying <strong>loudly.</strong>She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school.After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the canteen.<br><strong>I am glad that I have done a good deed.</strong>That’s all for now. Please write back soon.</p><p>Regards,<br>Giselle</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:53:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tan Yun Xuan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Vean,</p><p><br/></p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend Karen to find her lost purse! Last Friday, I passed by the canteen and heard Karen crying. She was feeling blue so I decided to help her search around the school compound. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the classroom. I'm glad to be able to help her. That's all for now. Please write back soon. Bye!</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Yun Xuan</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear <strong>Veann,</strong></p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend Karen <strong> find</strong> her lost purse!<br>Last Friday, I passed by the canteen and heard Karen crying. She was feeling blue<strong> as she lost her purse.</strong>  <strong>Being a good Samritan, </strong> I decided to help her search around the school compound.<br>After searching high and low <strong>for one hour, </strong>we finally found her purse in the classroom.<br>I'm glad <strong>to be able to help her.</strong>That's all for now. Please write back soon. Bye!</p><p>Regards,<br>Yun Xuan</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:54:11 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Luscious corrected</title>
         <author>onglucious</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veann,</p><p><br/></p><p>I want to share with you how I helped my friend Karen to find her purse. Last Friday, I walked past by toilet and heard Karen crying. She was down in dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school. After searching high and low, we finally find her purse in the garden. I felt glad that I can help her. It was a good thing to do. Bye for now,</p><p><br/></p><p>Best regards,</p><p>Lucious</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I want to share with you how I helped my friend Karen find her purse. Last Friday, I walked past the toilet and heard Karen crying. She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school. After searching high and low, we finally found her purse in the garden. I felt glad that I could help her. It was a good thing to do. Bye for now.</p><p>Best regards,<br>Lucious</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I want to share with you how I helped my friend, Karen, <strong>find her purse.</strong> Last Friday, I walked past the toilet and heard Karen crying<strong> bitterly</strong> . She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school. After searching high and low<strong> for one hour,</strong> we finally found her purse in the garden. I felt glad that I could help her. It was a good thing to do. Bye for now.</p><p>Best regards,<br>Lucious</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Veann,          </p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped your friend Karen to find her lost purse !</p><p>         Last Friday in doing our recess, she told me she has lost her <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://purse.So">purse. So</a> I decided to help her find around the school. We search high and low, we finally find her purse in the garden. I very glad I could help her. That's all for now. Please write back!</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Kayson Lau</p><p>Corrected</p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped <strong>my friend</strong> ,Karen find her lost purse!</p><p>Last Friday <strong>during recess,</strong> she told me she had lost her purse. So I decided to help her search around the <strong>school compound</strong>. We searched high and low , <strong>Lady Luck was on our side, </strong> we finally found her purse in the garden. I was very glad I could help her. That's all for now. Please write back!</p><p>Regards,<br>Kayson Lau</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:54:52 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Karen,                                                        </p><p> I can't wait to tell you about how I help my friend Karen Last Friday morning ,I passed by school garden and heard Karen was down in the dumps.,I decided to asked what happen.From Karen,I know that Karen purse was lost!Being a good Samaritan,I decided to lend he a helping hand.After searching high and law,we finally found the purse in the science room.I am over moon to be able to helping his.            That's all for now.Write back soon.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend Karen <strong>find her lost purse.</strong><br>Last Friday morning, I passed by the school garden and heard Karen crying <strong>and she was</strong> feeling down in the dumps.<br>I decided to ask what happened.<strong>She told me that she had lost her purse.</strong>Being a good Samaritan, I decided to lend her a helping hand.After searching high and low, we finally found the purse in the science room.<br>I am over the moon to be able<strong> to help her.</strong><br>That's all for now. Please write back soon.</p><p><strong>Regards,</strong></p><p><strong>Jia Xian</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:58:12 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Paris Koh Zi Sum</p><p><br/></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend Karen find her purse. Last Friday morning,I passed by canteen and heard Karen crying.She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her around the school.After searching high and low,we finally found her purse in the school hall.I am over the moon to be able to help her.That's all of naw.Please write back soon.Bye.</p><p><br/></p><p>Rearard,</p><p>Paris Koh</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend<strong>, Karen </strong>find her purse. Last Friday morning, I passed by the canteen and heard Karen crying <strong>as loud as thunder.</strong>She was down in the dumps, so I decided to help her search around the school.After searching high and low<strong> for one hour, </strong>we finally found her purse in the school hall.I am over the moon to be able to help her. That's all for now. Please write back soon. Bye.</p><p>Regards,<br>Paris Koh</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:58:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>To: <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="mailto:karen@gmail.com">karen@gmail.com</a></p><p>Subject: share experience with your cousin</p><p><br/></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p><br/></p><p>     I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend find her lost purse. Last Friday, the school bell rang for recess, I ran as fast my legs could carry me. When I walked past the washroom, I saw my friend, Karen crying bitterly. Being curiosity, I walked towards Karen and asked her what had happened. Karen told me that</p><p> she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, I decided to help her, we search high and low in the school compound. Finally we had found Karen's purse in the garden. I'm very happy because I had done a good deed that day. Karen thank me profusely. Hope to see your reply soon. Bye.</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Hoi Ling</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Veann,</p><p>I can't wait to tell you about how I helped my friend , <strong>Karen </strong>find her lost purse.Last Friday, the school bell rang for recess, and I ran as fast as my legs could carry me.<br>When I walked past the washroom, I saw my friend Karen crying bitterly.Being <strong>curious,</strong> I walked towards Karen and asked her what had happened.Karen told me that she had lost her purse.Being a good Samaritan, I decided to help her. We searched high and low in the school compound.<br>Finally, we found Karen's purse in the garden.I'm very happy because I <strong>did a good deed that day. </strong>Karen thanked me profusely.<br>Hope to see your reply soon. Bye.</p><p> Regards,<br>  Hoi Ling</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-06-11 12:58:49 UTC</pubDate>
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