An Anthology of Poems of Commitment by CLAYTON BARTON https://padlet.com/claytonbart/s02dae3c78n4 "Desire is the key to motivation, but it's determination and commitment to an unrelenting pursuit of your goal - a commitment to excellence - that will enable you to attain the success you seek." - Mario Andretti en-us 2017-11-14 18:10:40 UTC 2017-12-13 21:23:13 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Dootheets.png Commitment By: Eyan Desir claytonbart https://padlet.com/claytonbart/s02dae3c78n4/wish/207360685 From earth's furthest corner
To the closest leaves
Love glues the gap between
Two hearts upon a branch

In earth's garden of roses
The sweetest scent lies
Upon the heart of the
Flower in my arms

Darkness kisses our land
The sun opens her eyes
Chapters begin to unfold

And still the softest words
From my heart can not
Express how much I love her

Desires hot as the sun
Has connected two
Into a circle rich in love

Honesty is shared
Hearts can't be separated
From a beautiful bond!

I believe the theme of this poem is romantic love is commitment and trustworthiness.   When you get married its going to be tough.If you stay strong and stay committed I promise you will make it through. Everyday fight for what believe in because I have come along way from whats love a whats fake. Bad love  and good love is two different things. Now this poems is kind of weird in a way because now days love is played like a violin either we get to be played or we are played like fool. Sometimes love can get us trapped and sometimes it lets us free. When it mean "Love glues the gap between" it means with the love thats been broken that the new love sticks together more flowingly. With the commitment of friendship you could start by getting that girl that you wanted to be with since 7th grade. This poem is like the same as my third because it is talking about love. The first two paragraph has the exact number as the second poem of lines. The third one is related because they are expressing how much they would do for each other and love each other.


This image fits my poem because it has a couple together that sticks by each other side forever. This shows love 

]]> 2017-11-15 18:23:23 UTC https://padlet.com/claytonbart/s02dae3c78n4/wish/207360685 Our Commitment Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal claytonbart https://padlet.com/claytonbart/s02dae3c78n4/wish/207784898 It is our commitment
With full positive movement
To bring attention of world
About sufferings untold

We are not averse still
And act with difference
Risk world environment
And create uncertain moments

So we get together
To usher
In new atmosphere
With no virtual fear

We shall sing
The bell shall ring
With words of awareness
To the world and across

We shall show
How brotherhood and respect grows
That has no boundary of hatred
It is only peace, peace and positively led.

I believe the theme of this poem is: If you have friends that are by your side, they are committed to helping you. This poem is included in my collection because of the focus on "awareness" and "togetherness". This poem appeals to me because if you give up on friendship then you will lose trust and maybe more friends if you mess up that bad. Sometimes when we can lose track and time because of the friendship we have with other people goes far. I lost one of my best one's but for a good reason I switched churches. My friends his name is Zak me him hanged out lot but I stopped going there and the last time we talk was last Christmas. This poem differs from my first poem because it deals with general commitment between brotherhood, and my first poem deals with romantic love commitment. This poem is the same as my first poem because they both rhyme.

The below image fits my poem because it has two guys hanging out together. This shows friendship.
]]> 2017-11-16 17:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/claytonbart/s02dae3c78n4/wish/207784898 Commitment - Poem by Kevin Patrick claytonbart https://padlet.com/claytonbart/s02dae3c78n4/wish/213927377 Never is there love, 
Unless there is an inner faith
For faith admits our pain
Lessons learned will be our gain 

A Reasoned hearts a paradox 
Until it reaches anothers equinox 
Two equal spheres will influence
A ravishing melody of subsistence 

If we feel anguish through our walls 
Perhaps it will solidate the long hauls
From this wisdom, that is grace 
we know that hope must be embraced

Fore never can the day 
Exist without the night
We must hold before the storm, 
or become shipwrecked on the mourn 

Sails flung by passions fury 
will be tarnished by the currents
But our commitment down the isle, 
will reward the true golden years

I believe the theme is about keeping your faith with God throughout tough committed marriages. This poems included in my collection because it focuses on " passions and embracing the hope in your marriage." This appeals to me because in the future Im going to get married and sometimes I might lose my faith. I don't want to lose my faith though so I pray I pray and sometimes I ball up in tears down on knees again. Keeping faith with God within your marriage would help me to be more successful and brings me closer to God. My dad and mom split up with when I was even a year old yet. My mom left me for partying and my dad decided  to be a father. See that is one example that Im going to take in the future family.
This poem has five stanzas just like my second poem. The first relates to this one because there are both taking about love or faithful love. The second one is related because they both have 5 stanzas 

This is related to my poem because it shows an couple in love and the quote of faith in God.]]> 2017-12-06 21:43:27 UTC https://padlet.com/claytonbart/s02dae3c78n4/wish/213927377