https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50 en-us 2022-01-17 05:53:43 UTC 2022-01-17 10:29:56 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995350911 single people usually wants to be with their friends becuse they dont want to be alone. they want to live with their friends. loneless has a bad effect for their mental health (It is not clear what type of essay this is. Is it cause? cause and effect? Also what is the topic? Is it loneliness?)]]> 2022-01-17 08:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995350911 https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995352102 Most of couple want to live together nowadays. There are several reason of this action such as sharing the rent,getting to know each other better and meeting more easily. I think this is easier way. (Remember, we don't use "I" in introductions! Also, this is a cause and effect essay, you should say this in your thesis statement)]]> 2022-01-17 08:06:05 UTC https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995352102 https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995357137 Most people prefer  live together  before they get married. They choose that way for their relationships and life. Therefore, there are various causes and effects of  live(ing) together. (good!)]]> 2022-01-17 08:09:08 UTC https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995357137 https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995380317 Living together before marriage has become quite common this days.The reasons they do this are , get to know each other better and increase trust.That's why they choose this way.  (The last sentence should be the most specific! Because this is a cause and effect essay, it should tell me this.)]]> 2022-01-17 08:22:11 UTC https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995380317 https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995384536 Many people think the couples are living together before marriage. They contact with each other. The most natural state of people is at home.they learn what they like or dislike (The last sentence of your paragraph needs to be the most specific. This means you need to state the topic, type of essay and (if there are) controlling ideas. An example would be: Living together before marriage has some causes and effects.)]]> 2022-01-17 08:24:34 UTC https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995384536 https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995388823 Many people usually have a lot of stress in their life. There are sometimes in their work life , in their family life or in their relationships. The stress has a lot of causes and effects. (good!) ]]> 2022-01-17 08:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995388823 https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995393869 Have you wondered why couples want to live together before marriage? Marriage is a union between individual people.There are three main reasons why couples wants to live together before marrige. (Very good! If you are writing a cause essay, you need to list the controlling ideas in the thesis statement) To conclude, the three main reasons why couples want to live together before marriage are getting to know the person better, prevent divorces and seeing their lifestyle at homeiI think every couple should live together before marriage with the gelp of that people can decide if they want to be together and get a healthier relationship. (Again, very good)]]> 2022-01-17 08:29:40 UTC https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995393869 https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995414055 Trouble sleeping, overthinking and anxiety are some of the consequences of stress.  (If this is your thesis statement, very good! I need a conclusion paragraph too.)

Beyza]]> 2022-01-17 08:41:58 UTC https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995414055 https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995440550 To sum up, stress has a lot of causes and effects. I think people should try something and find recipes before they do not have the stress. And actually they should throw stress’s reasons from their life. ]]> 2022-01-17 08:57:57 UTC https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995440550 https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995442020 All in all, living before marriage requires causes and effects. I think it would be a good choice for their relationship. (good! Aim for minimum 3 sentences)]]> 2022-01-17 08:58:52 UTC https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995442020 https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995509845 Nowadays, many people want to live together. People prefer live together because  they don't want to be alone and they want to improve their relationship. There are two reasons why people want to live together. (If you are writing a cause essay, you need one more controlling idea (one more reason)) I also need a conclusion paragraph from you.]]> 2022-01-17 09:40:34 UTC https://padlet.com/melisamc0/rxzttb9t308ziz50/wish/1995509845