~Jamie Smolenski

political philosopher

United States was not established yet

American Revolution

Declaration of Independence was not written

You should have discussed that he was the leader of the Sons of Liberty

Stamp Act. It was James Otis who suggested an

intercolonial confrence to agree on a united

course of action.William Ruggles refused to sign

In the end, the widespread boycotts enacted by

individual coinists surley did more to secure the

repeal more than the congress itself.

Who is William Ruggles and why do you mention him? Colonists is spelled wrong. Congress should be capitalized. Surley should be surely.

merely griping - are these your words?

Gillian Gillard

silversmith, who helped organize an

intelligence and alarm system to keep watch

 on the  British military. He is most famous for

alerting the Colonial militia to the approach

 of British Forces before the battles of Lexington

and Concord. Following the war, Revere returned

 to his silversmith trade and used the profits

 from his expanding business to finance his work

 in iron casting, bronze bell and cannon casting,

 and the forging of copper bolts and spikes.

Angelo Bianco

colonial should not be capitalized

Are these your own words?

Patriots needs to be capitalized

Tea Act and Intolerable Acts need to be capitalized

pre independence does not sound like your words

counter mobilization - does not sound like your own words

intense crackdown- does not sound like your own words

Ryan Cabral

payment through the harder, stricter custom's

controls in the thirteen colonies.King George

the 3'rd disliked him and that is why he was

disliked.He attempted to regain favor by

lowering domestic taxes at the expense of the

colonies, introducing the Stamp Act in 1765.

Lincoln Pollock

King George III is the proper way to write his name.

You cannot call him George because you were not his friend.

King George III disliked him and that is why he was disliked is a very weak unimportant statement.

Stephanie Phillips

Cameron Freeman

Stamp Act needs to be capitalized

Townshend Act needs to be capitalized

America needs to be capitalized

The Tea Act really caused the Boston Tea Party

The sentences are very choppy.

The act was one of the four acts released. This is not a complete thought.

time of the Boston Massacre in 1770.

In 1773 he insisted that a shipment of

imported tea be landed before being

given clearance. After the Boston Tea

Party thousand of English soldiers flooded

the city to enforce the rule of law. Hutchinson

was now widely hated in his home town. Six

months later he boarded a ship to England,

where he would finish his life in exile and write

the seminal history of the Colony of Massachusetts

Bay.

Kelly Lambrese

What does the word seminal mean? You must use your own words.

on March 22, 1765 and was the first internal tax levied directly

on American colonists. It was the act for granting and supporting

certain stamp duties and many other duties in the British colonies and

plantations in America, towards further defraying the expenses of

defending, protecting and securing. The act was created to help cover

the cost of maintaining the troops in the colonies.

Katherine Marro

It was the act that granted and supported

What does the word defraying mean?

You must use your own words.

American Revenue Act of 1764 was a revenue-

raising act passed by the Parliament of Great

Britain. The act put taxes on molasses, sugar, wines,

coffee, pimiento, cambric, printed calico, lumber,

and iron, without representing the colonists.

'No Taxation Without Representation.'  This act

was the start of the American Revolution.

Siena Parente

This act was one of the causes of the American Revolution

without representing the colonists is just thrown into the sentence.

The colonists felt the law was unfair because they had not representation in Parliament

Massachusetts. He was also a member

of the Massachusetts provincial assembly.

an a early advocate of the patriot view against

British policy, that lead to the American

Revelation. James Otis also had a catch phrase

that was Taxation without representation is 

tyranny. 

Alec La Fazia

He was a wagoner for General Edward Braddock during

his army's defeat. Danial saved his own life by escaping the

French and Indian ambush.

Caitlin O'Brien

Daniel is spelled wrong. Daniel Boone leaving home on a military expedition is not important enough to be included in this post.

Daniel Boone is best remembered for discovering a route through the Appalachian Mountains called the Cumberland Gap.

having New France demolished and New England reborn. It

also made Indians have all lands west of the Appalachians, but

Colonists couldn't settle in these lands. The King and his Council 

agreed to not have anyone disrupt the Indians no more. The 

Proclamation also established four new Colonies, Quebec, West 

Florida, East Florida, and Grenada which was an island off the Continent.

John Polanco

Anthony DiBiasio

Parliament enacted the writs of assistance because colonists were smuggling goods to avoid paying taxes.

Brandon Casale

King George III was king of Great Britain and Ireland at the time of the American Revolution.

What was his attitude toward the colonists?