https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b PRAISE and POLISH en-us 2018-02-09 15:28:17 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:38 UTC hello@padlet.com nguyezoe000 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077386 Praise:she seems very confident , the book is super cute and the drawings were A1
Polish: she should kind of be a bit louder but overall it was great]]> 2018-02-09 16:00:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077386 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077420 The drawings were good

]]> 2018-02-09 16:00:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077420 RoshinSam https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077433 Praise: I love your ideas and the art is very creative

]]> 2018-02-09 16:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077433 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077471 Praise: I like the 3D drawings, they are a nice touch
Polish: None]]> 2018-02-09 16:00:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077471 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077472 Praise: I like the pretty pictures! They're very colorful!
Polish: I think that maybe you should've read the book with more pizzaz!]]> 2018-02-09 16:00:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077472 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077509 -I love the colors in your creative project 
-i would have just read it over:) ]]> 2018-02-09 16:00:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077509 smithsky002 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077515 Praise// I feel like you put a lot of work into this, and I thought the drawings and storyline were great
Polish// Just fix any grammar problems that you had.]]> 2018-02-09 16:00:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077515 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077550 Praise : she did really good drawing the slides. 


Polish: try a little more emotion, but over all it was great ]]> 2018-02-09 16:00:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077550 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077636 Praise: the art is absolutely A1
Polish: work on emotion in your voice to math the story]]> 2018-02-09 16:01:04 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077636 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077671 Praise : I love that you chose this topic because it is a very real life topic. Like it’s so important and not a lot of peop,e talk about it in a good way.
Polish : maybe just fix the sentences but it was still very great]]> 2018-02-09 16:01:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077671 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077675 She had a very good message for everyone to understand the meaning of her book.]]> 2018-02-09 16:01:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077675 edekojos000 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077878 Colorful art
Short and easy to read]]> 2018-02-09 16:01:33 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230077878 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230078261 Praise: very colorful good story
Polish:  more details]]> 2018-02-09 16:02:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230078261 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230078274 Praise: The books illustrations are very pleasing to look at and are well drawn.

Polish: The book could have been a little more detailed in the story line. ]]> 2018-02-09 16:02:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230078274 villamar002 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230078327 Praise: nice pictures and really good story 
Polish: maybe add more detail ]]> 2018-02-09 16:02:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230078327 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230078397 Creative

]]> 2018-02-09 16:02:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230078397 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230079010 Very creative and not something you see everyday in a children’s book. ]]> 2018-02-09 16:03:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230079010 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230079147 Praise- very informative
Polish- some grammar mistakes]]> 2018-02-09 16:03:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230079147 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230079213 Praise- good images

Polish- maybe go into a little more detail in the story]]> 2018-02-09 16:04:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230079213 https://padlet.com/elsong/rxp69g2az51b/wish/230079354 Great story 
Could be louder 

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