https://padlet.com/23bdavey/rwje9uhccd0k Hello and welcome to my padlet. Thank you for reading my writing pieces. I look forward to your feedback and comments. en-us 2018-02-01 17:40:32 UTC 2026-03-15 02:18:44 UTC hello@padlet.com 23nsaeheng https://padlet.com/23bdavey/rwje9uhccd0k/wish/237380835 Star: I liked how thought out your warrants were. It felt like you put a lot of thought into it, instead of rushing through.

Wish: Maybe you could revise just a little bit more, because I did noticed some minor mistakes. 

Star: Your data was well selected, it fit the claims well. ]]> 2018-03-02 13:39:13 UTC https://padlet.com/23bdavey/rwje9uhccd0k/wish/237380835 23ggerminder https://padlet.com/23bdavey/rwje9uhccd0k/wish/246985930 I thought you did a very good job on bringing humor into this piece. In this piece espeically I think its important to get a good laugh out of it since it is a funnier topic turned into a artice. For example tying in the foot cream or the mom with pizza hut gave the piece the element it needed why still sounding just like a reporter. This was a great strength and allowed me to really enjoy your piece. One thing i think you could improve on is G.U.M.S. While reading, I noticed there were a few common mistakes. Two of them were throwing in to many extra words like is or it. Since these extra words were added in it made the sentences run ons with unnessasary words. Overall, your piece was very strong but to improve your pieces in the future I would work on double checking your grammar.]]> 2018-03-28 16:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/23bdavey/rwje9uhccd0k/wish/246985930