Persuasive Writing Pt. 2 by https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2 What made this a strong example? What were some of the things that the writer included? What strategies did the writer use? Why was this example easier to follow than the other? en-us 2017-02-04 20:36:56 UTC 2025-11-01 19:20:40 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151859780 2]]> 2017-02-06 15:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151859780 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151859969 I know that with example ]]> 2017-02-06 15:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151859969 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151859976 2]]> 2017-02-06 15:49:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151859976 Because you have to ba more respect to your family https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860013 2017-02-06 15:49:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860013 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860025 Example 2 is. Better because she is nicer in this one but in 1 she says her parents don't care about her]]> 2017-02-06 15:49:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860025 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860030 2 for sure because the daughter is still being respectful to her mother and understanding

]]> 2017-02-06 15:49:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860030 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860072 I think ex 2 because your parents will never let you stay up if u ask like that also ex 2 is positive ]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860072 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860120 2

]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860120 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860169 The 1 was being rude about it and he should be grounded for saying not br rewarded so 2 was better]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860169 Persuasive https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860186 Ex:2 is obviously a better choice it is more descriptive and was a little nicer then calling your parents mean and practacly roasting your parents and it gives better examples . By:natalie]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860186 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860191  I think ]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860191 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860193 It made it a good example because it was not cruel unlike number 1



]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860193 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860206 The girl gave reasonable reasons and she looked at her parents point of view and she had very positive answers and I she tried to compromise with the curfew and the pick up . Ex 2]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860206 She is being nice not rude and telling them she is asking and understands there point of view also because she is useing positive examples like I will let you know where I am that is why https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860208 2017-02-06 15:50:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860208 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860260 I think example 2 is better because it considered the parent's point of view as well as the writer's point of view so there is a good]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860260 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860268 I think that example 2 is the best because it has variety of reasons and has strong explanations]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860268 2 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860270 The reasons are detail and more positive ]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860270 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860283 He was more nicer to his pa wants on ]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860283 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860307 More then your friends


]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860307 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860373 I think 2 because 
1. The grammar is so bad in 1
2. She is so rude in 1 if I talked like that to my parents I would get yelled a]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860373 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860377 My dad just came the ]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860377 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860439 My daddy just said that I was going out at 12:00 tomorrow 

]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860439 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860458 Example 2 is more likely to persuade her mum because the first 1 sounds rude and mean she says her parents hates her they love her they don't want anything to happen to her but example 2 is really detailed and and nice and persuading and the same thing  
By Daniella]]> 2017-02-06 15:50:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860458 More reasons https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860507 2017-02-06 15:51:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860507 Example 2 was better because he or she is asking politely a https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860555 2017-02-06 15:51:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860555 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860559 First one was rude ]]> 2017-02-06 15:51:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860559 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860706 I think 2 was also better because the daughter said she would do things for the mother like wake up early to help around the house I think the daughter was being fair and in my opinion that makes a good persuasive ]]> 2017-02-06 15:51:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860706 Can someone rad https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860885

]]> 2017-02-06 15:51:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860885 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860900 The 2 one had more details and ]]> 2017-02-06 15:51:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151860900 2 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861024 More positive and detailed ]]> 2017-02-06 15:52:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861024 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861455 His mom and dad ]]> 2017-02-06 15:53:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861455 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861456 I think example 2 is the best because it has a compomis]]> 2017-02-06 15:53:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861456 Aye https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861476 2017-02-06 15:53:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861476 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861486 I think]]> 2017-02-06 15:53:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861486 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861630 She is rude e in example 1]]> 2017-02-06 15:53:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861630 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861646 The first one has more detail 
S about why]]> 2017-02-06 15:53:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861646 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861662 It has a more positive st]]> 2017-02-06 15:53:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861662 Example2 is better because he is doing it politely so he has a better chance of getting what he wants and in example 1 he is asking very rudely and just telling them to give him what he wants https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861843 2017-02-06 15:54:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861843 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861881 He said it in a calm way]]> 2017-02-06 15:54:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861881 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861894 2 2 2 number 2!!!!!!
1. Because the grammar is so bad in 1 
2. She is so rude in ]]> 2017-02-06 15:54:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151861894 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862138


]]> 2017-02-06 15:54:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862138 Example 2 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862230 Because she understands her parents point of veiw and she is nicer]]> 2017-02-06 15:54:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862230 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862243 I think example 2 is the best because it has a compromise between the 2 point of views. It has a part of what the parents would like and part of what the writer believes as well]]> 2017-02-06 15:54:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862243 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862261 Number on e sounded like a two year old so I would much Morley prepher  two

]]> 2017-02-06 15:55:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862261 THE FIRST ONE a little rude like a bit annoying so I would say no and make it 1:00 am https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862290 2017-02-06 15:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862290 Lexus https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862458 Ex 1 is positive ]]> 2017-02-06 15:55:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862458 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862589 2017-02-06 15:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862589 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862749 Hi

]]> 2017-02-06 15:56:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/151862749 Example2 is better https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144077 2017-02-07 14:31:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144077 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144285 She is rude in 1 and in 2 she is nicer]]> 2017-02-07 14:32:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144285 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144403 Hi guys

]]> 2017-02-07 14:32:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144403 The 1st one should be grounded she was rude 2 had more details and nicer plus she was bet https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144626 2017-02-07 14:32:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144626 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144867 Yeah not a very good child in ]]> 2017-02-07 14:33:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144867 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144953 The example 2 is more respect

]]> 2017-02-07 14:33:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152144953 Reason why example 2 is better https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145249 Example 2 is better because it is more ]]> 2017-02-07 14:33:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145249 She is acting like a baby is example one and in example two she is acting like a adult https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145275 2017-02-07 14:34:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145275 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145413 Number 1 was harsh and the boy was mean and cruel to his parents so if you are mean your parents they are obviously not going to let you get what you wan]]> 2017-02-07 14:34:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145413 Example 2 is better https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145516 2017-02-07 14:34:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145516 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145716 Her mom should ground her in ]]> 2017-02-07 14:34:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145716 My https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145792 2017-02-07 14:34:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145792 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145817 He is right]]> 2017-02-07 14:35:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145817 2 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145970 2017-02-07 14:35:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152145970 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152146153 The 2nd one was better]]> 2017-02-07 14:35:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152146153 Number 1 is really rude but in the second she comprised with her parent and put various reason why https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152146341 2017-02-07 14:35:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152146341 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152146931 By

]]> 2017-02-07 14:37:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152146931 https://padlet.com/ad10ga/pw2/wish/152147402 Ya her mom should ground her in 

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