What I Need for an Exemplary Essay by Yameka Meriweathers https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec Made with an open mind en-us 2022-03-22 17:05:57 UTC 2022-05-05 17:29:41 UTC hello@padlet.com pros and cons about the 7/7 essay. jzavalet5840 https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108034591 con* In the underlined part of the essay, his statement is still not really convincing enuff, but it will convince you.

pro* It gives you good reasoning.

con(if it was being read on the internet)* It is a long essay.

pro* Gets straight to the point.

con* On pg 4 it states"since they can
change their shape and squeeze through the rubble of a collapsed
building using camera eyes” not robots do that yet. so they lied.]]> 2022-03-22 17:18:34 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108034591 I think that it was a good essay because the reasons were listed very clearly and the conclusion was different from the introduction while stating the same information. The essay also stated where they got their information from, making it a great essay. -J Smith. https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108037745 2022-03-22 17:20:10 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108037745 jshaw2673 https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108041138 The passage was amazingly written. Also they had all the requirements (wrongly spelt) and we could understand what were they talking about. I like the informative passage but it was kinda boring. I love ROOOOOBOOOTS]]> 2022-03-22 17:21:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108041138 I think it was a good essay because its not hard to understand the story and they put everything like reasonss and information was right there so we wont have to think hard. it was amazing -j.forrest https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108044414 2022-03-22 17:23:36 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108044414 Pros https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108045237 I like how they used their punctuation, and their point is clearly stated. 
N.T.]]> 2022-03-22 17:24:03 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108045237 I think it was a good essay because it has good spelling and punctuation also good capitalization. Joshua s https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108045245 2022-03-22 17:24:03 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108045245 Matthew https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108045379 I think that the essay is very excellent because it had great punctuation, a good hook, a good conclusion, and  has more than 1 paragraph.]]> 2022-03-22 17:24:07 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108045379 Jacorey lee https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108045399 I think it was a 7/7 essay because they listed the details, the information. Also they underlined what introduces the topic. And they had proper grammar. ]]> 2022-03-22 17:24:08 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108045399 Mells https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108046031 I think that this was a good essay and they had perfect punctuation placement, and I was able to understand what they did in the essay.]]> 2022-03-22 17:24:29 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108046031 Jarius washington https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108049432 I believe  it's a good essay  because there point about robots are good.]]> 2022-03-22 17:25:54 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108049432 Destyni Parham (What's good about the Exemplary Essay) dparham1542 https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108049652 It was a good essay because it had:
. Good Hook (It made me wanna read more)
. Good Capitalization (They put capital letters in every sentence or when they mentioned something specific)
. Stayed on task (They kept the idea on robots and didn't go off task in their essay)
.Good Punctuation (They put periods and exclamation points at the end of every sentence.
. Good Transition (They had good transition words and they told me when they were starting a new idea)
.]]> 2022-03-22 17:26:00 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108049652 I think that in the hook they could have used a different attention grabber because it seems very scripted and awkward. I also think that they could have pulled more evidence. -J Smith https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108049828 2022-03-22 17:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108049828 https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108050182 This was a great essay. It had excellent punctuation. It also had a very good hook and the gave you a lot of information.]]> 2022-03-22 17:26:17 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108050182 Jayden Johnson https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108051573 The passage met a criteria. Inside it the topic was clearly introduced to the readers, it has good punctuation, and clean transitions. ]]> 2022-03-22 17:27:03 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108051573 https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108053240 I think that  it was a good essay, because they stayed on topic and did not go off topic.Because they had good punctuation and capitalization. -J Watson]]> 2022-03-22 17:27:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2108053240 https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2171815497 pros good and I can understand it and it's a good reason

cons well I think it was good 7/7 but it just needs more its not  convening
-shakir]]> 2022-05-05 17:29:36 UTC https://padlet.com/yamekameriweathe/ru9ewxnd0e5saaec/wish/2171815497