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3- address a serious problem with very good sourced information and advice.

2-Not to say the word bulling as much also the spelling and grammar of the presentation document.

1-Alerting other about this serious problem and being able to research and have good information on this topic with a very good presentation peice.

3- good statistics, comparison to other sport, and slides to go along with presentation

2- run on sentences and spelling

1- picked a topic that he really cared about

Why only a phone...could this be for other things?

Spelling

Why different fonts on each page?

3- good research, took time on the project, is very meaningful and important to her

2- punctuation/ spacing 

1- it meant something to her

3-good graphics and links, excellent presentation style, supported answer to essential question with research

2-specific wording in essential question, proper grammer in sentences

1-chose a very meaningful and interesting topic relevant to his life

3- Good Visuals, Very Helpful and lots of information.

2- More words instead of just pictures, Just a little more information.

1-Added his own personal experience.

3-how he described t he process, solution, good photograph

2-little more evidence, Caps

1-topic is really good(big football fans)

3- Had central question, good information had solid facts, had bullet points instead of long paragraphs.

2- Didn't understand the topic, and didn't really end the presentation

1. I thought it was an interesting topic did, you were very entertaining and

3-learned different types of code, who uses these codes and great presentation

2-a little more information and more animation

1-great job presenting. I loved hearing you tell me about it. I could tell you took some time and you found it interesting.