Thomas by Thomas Xue

Adrian

thxue — 2018-11-05 11:37:50 UTC

I like how the pictures are aligned and the colors really compliment each other.
Maybe add a link or make a marquee

Millie

thxue — 2018-11-05 11:39:57 UTC

I like how the table is complex and how you wrote the time.
The background color doesn't match somehow.
Needs pictures.

Nacho

thxue — 2018-11-05 11:40:03 UTC

I like how you changed so many styles and made the table so complex. I can see a lot of growth between the two drafts.
Maybe make the colors compliment each other more

Alex

thxue — 2018-11-05 11:40:23 UTC

I like how the background color represents brownies. The table was also very neat.

Advay Jonary

thxue — 2018-11-05 11:53:16 UTC

I like the pictures and the marquee. The website you used is really helpful.
Maybe try to fill in the spaces with emoji's or emoticons.

Oliver "Kitty" Katz

thxue — 2018-11-08 11:06:41 UTC

I really like the simple design because it is clean and easy to read. It probably needs more . Try to send in the pics next time.

Francisco

thxue — 2018-11-08 11:12:59 UTC

The design is clean and sleek. The colors compliment each other really well. Maybe make the marquee smaller so they pass faster.

H

thxue — 2018-11-08 11:28:25 UTC

I really like how you used the recipe from marshmello. The table is clean and easy to see. Try to make the steps more complex and describe everything.

Nora Kozma

thxue — 2018-11-08 11:36:00 UTC

The colors match the theme. It was complex but also neat at the same time. The recipe is also very detailed.

Ilkan

thxue — 2018-11-08 11:52:04 UTC

The overall idea was ok.
Try to make it more detailed. Not much to say.

Layne

thxue — 2018-11-08 11:56:50 UTC

I like how you expanded the center one by thirty percent. You are the only one to do it like that. Ifeel like you