Revising and Editing Sentences by Savana Croley https://padlet.com/savanacroley/rs8j6ys5cvoi17ov In the space provided, rewrite sentence the sentence in a clear and effective way. en-us 2024-01-08 19:31:28 UTC 2024-02-13 17:33:59 UTC hello@padlet.com Gigi and his friends walked all day. The friends were new. They were still deep in the forest when evening came. savanacroley https://padlet.com/savanacroley/rs8j6ys5cvoi17ov/wish/2852309565 2024-01-17 18:23:18 UTC https://padlet.com/savanacroley/rs8j6ys5cvoi17ov/wish/2852309565 Ad https://padlet.com/savanacroley/rs8j6ys5cvoi17ov/wish/2852428289 Gigi and his new friends walked all day, they were still deep in the forest when evening came.

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