https://padlet.com/24afazio/rrhjcrz0h4qp Thanks for leaving me feedback! en-us 2018-12-05 17:54:33 UTC 2018-12-07 18:10:55 UTC hello@padlet.com 24agialanella https://padlet.com/24afazio/rrhjcrz0h4qp/wish/312343097 One thing that I loved in your story Why? was how you had so much figurative language. One example is "Soon enough the sun would bestow its golden rays once again." This is my absolute favorite line in the story! Another thing that you did great was how you had Teagan research about George Phillips, even though she wasn't supposed to. This shows us more of her personality, and this would also show us about George. (If he lied or not.) One thing that I wish you changed in your story, was how Teagan changed throughout the story. In the end Teagan was brave, and fearless, but in the beginning, there wasn't a strong personality trait shining through. If you want Teagan to become brave in the end, in the beginning have her be timid and shy. Other wise, great job! - Alessandra G]]> 2018-12-07 17:54:31 UTC https://padlet.com/24afazio/rrhjcrz0h4qp/wish/312343097