Writing Task 2 Brainstorm by Thanapha Naovalath

Writing Task 2 Brainstorm by Thanapha Naovalath https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc Advanced en-us 2022-02-13 02:31:44 UTC 2022-02-19 07:07:59 UTC hello@padlet.com Outline tnaovalath12 https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044187080 Body 1:
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Main ideas: The main problem of an increasing number of professionals are leaving their countries to work in others countries is the low income of being work as professional in their own countries.
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Main ideas - To solve the problem of professionals leaving to work in others countries is the government should take action to rise income rate for those professionals.
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]]> 2022-02-13 04:14:04 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044228123 Simon https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044233849 Body 1:
Main ideas - Low income/Welfare
Explanation - the income is not suitable for the position or degree.
Example - In Laos, the teacher who graduated master degree or higher has start salary only 2-3 billions Kip.
Brief Summary - So, many professions move to other country because of this reason.

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Brief Summary - ]]> 2022-02-13 04:29:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044233849 Top https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044244222 I agree with this Statement, plastic beg should be ban from shopping. As a resource reveal that plastic waste is the largest volume in the world.]]> 2022-02-13 04:52:52 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044244222 Top https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044244904 Outline
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Main ideas - The most problem that poor country face is brain drain
Explanation - Many adept people in poor country moving to developed country
Example - In poor country don't have enough medical personnel
Brief Summary - poor country face the problem that many professional in their country moving to developed country

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Main ideas - To fix this problem gov should increase more income to those professional
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Main ideas - More information but many of them are unreliable
Explanation - In social media they are many information for leaning, to follow the news but we can't trust all of them
Example - They are several news that are fake news
Brief Summary - Even if they are many information on internet but we have to beware what we seen.

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Main idea - To get rid of this problem gov should ]]> 2022-02-13 04:54:19 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044244923 Bow (solution essay) https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044245484 In contemporary, it is apparent that there is an increasing number of professionals namely doctors and teachers moving form their hometown to advance their job in developed countries. This easy will analyse the problem regarding this situation of brain drain and evaluate an alleviation strategy.

A number of professors have contributed to advance their employment in better developed countries. One of the main factor may be that professions receive low income. For example,

There is a number of alleviation strategy which could be implemented to address the issue of the brain dian ]]> 2022-02-13 04:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044245484 Phing https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044245838 As we can notice that plastic shopping bags are used around the world as it costs cheaper than other shopping bags. As a consequence, this might cause pollution on land and sea. Thus, this essay will explain the possible pollution impact of using plastic shopping bags.

We can not deny that plastic pollution is one of the main problems nowadays. If we lack management of the used plastic bags both on land and sea, this ability to increase much plastic waste and be critical harm the aquatic animal.

In my point of view, I totally agree to prohibit plastic shopping bags as this might cause pollution to our land and sea. To deal with this kind of pollution, all supermarkets or retrial stores should stop giving plastic bags to their customers as well as they may implement the campaign of using their own cotton shopping bags instead of plastic bags.]]> 2022-02-13 04:56:39 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044245838 solution essay jing https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044246501 as the circumstance of an increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own Less Economically Developed Country. to work in developed countries, there will be some factors that might cause these problems in such ways that people unwanted to work in their own poorer countries, this essay will discuss problems regarding this situation.
firstly, referring to the economics of their own countries may have some problems of the unemployment rate has raised up higher or may lead to professions receive low income than others. for instance, a teacher in Laos earns a salary of approximately $130 per month, although they graduated from qualifiable education, however still receive low salaries. nevertheless, there is always the turbulent politics of its country as Thailand causes plenty of population to become unemployed, therefore, they would likely to move to another country for a better quality workplace.
in these problems, we could undertake with the predicament which to reduce the unemployment rate and create more job for those who are seeking for, provides a suitable salary that professions could receive, this can increase satisfaction for the domestic professional to work in their own countries. plus, the government of the less economically developed countries should be organized well to maintain their own population and politics secured to improve the life expectancy of the population.
in conclusion, whether or not working in abroad and domestic country, both are extremely important, due to valuable of educational experience or any work experience that people should be receiving a suitably feedbacks including with honorable salary to satisfy their needs.]]> 2022-02-13 04:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044246501 tnaovalath12 https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044248392 2022-02-13 05:02:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044248392 discussion essay by jing https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044261242 as the topic said, some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, however, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.

this essay will discuss the degree from the university, whether or not receiving a diploma, and getting experience outside of education. here are some reasons different apart from these two statements which people are not having the same opinion.

as my perspective in the first statement has mentioned about getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, in general in our society nowadays, the majority of people will suggest getting qualified higher education, in order to measure with the position level of your future jobs, however, there is always the barriers of time and situation where people will face to it. this barrier is likely to come with financial problems and time management. however, one way to overcome the trouble of financial problems is to be patient and slowly take time when you wanted to get a scholarship that covers everything of education expenses or living expenses. therefore, this will greatly create your portfolio.

however, some people said that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead, as it helps to earn money and experience faster than studying to achieve a diploma. unfortunately, those people who choose to work after graduating from high school found out that always lack of knowledge and waste more time to compete with those people who graduated with a higher degree. for this reason, I suggest that people should get a high achievement from university.

]]> 2022-02-13 05:31:23 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044261242 Mi (Direct question) https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044263127 It is apparent that nowadays the internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. this essay will discuss if the information on the internet is reliable and what could be done to control in formation online.

In my opinion, i don't think all information on internet is reliable, since there's a lot of fake new nowadays on the internet because anyone can publish and share the news on internet without inspections. for instance, in Laos there a lot of fake new on how to cure covid-19 by using traditional medicine and method such as: eat boiled eggs to heal covid-19 which make a lot people believed and follow.

To solve this problem, the government should form special state agency to work on this issue. For example, the state agency should create and develop some kind of system to inspect the new that spreading on the internet and also to detect the fake new, moreover government should make cyber law to protect peoples that become a victim of fake new or false information online also to punish peoples who create and spread fake new as well as to control the amount of fake news. Moreover, government should educate peoples about the cyber law through social media platform.

In conclusion, it is personally believed that not all information on internet are reliable, however, to prevent the fake new and control the information online, the government should take serious action to inspect the information as well as to educate peoples about fake news and cyber law.

]]> 2022-02-13 05:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044263127 Simon task 2 https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044473409 Currently, the internet is an absolute course of information and has opened up chances for people to study all around the world. However, in my view, I think that information on the internet is both reliable and unreliable.
On the internet, we are able to search or learn anything that we need to know. Meanwhile, there is some fake news that we cannot be verifying and is simple to believe. For example, the information on the Covid-19 vaccine which is injected into the body will change the DNA. Therefore, data on the internet cannot be trusted 100%.
Nowadays, some people can not screen out whether the news is true or fake. we need to set up some organization and cooperate with the government in control information online.
In conclusion, I beleive that information on internet can not be trusted because it doen't have good screening fake news system. So, we should have system for checking scam information.]]> 2022-02-13 11:49:30 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044473409 Top (opinion essay) https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044655198 Some people thing that we should stop using the single use plastic bags for shopping because they realized that plastic bags is one of cause that make pollution on the land and sea. As a resource I have plastic waste is the largest volume in the world. So I strongly agree to ban the plastic for shopping.

To illustrate the picture more, let think about a road in Laos. As you can see their is a plastic waste all around the road sides it's doesn't just look dirty, but their plastic waste is also cause an air pollution and all of this waste will be with us for a long time ( about 500 years) if on one pay attention on them.

To ban single use plastic bag in Laos it was difficult to do right away, because in Laos plastic bag it use for every where. To change people to use something else instead of plastic such as cloth bag, paper bag it is something that has to be done gradually. This is what government and conservation groups are trying to do in many years. But still not doing as well as it should.

According to my opinion, I think they do the right thing but there are many reason why it cannot be done like cost increase, other bag are hard to find or people think that use plastic bag is more comfortable. But for me I think use cloth bag is more useful then plastic bag that can use only single time.

]]> 2022-02-13 15:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2044655198 Tuinui opinion essay https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2045524614 Many people believe that plastic shopping bags are considered to be a major problem of pollution to both land and sea.There are numerous reasons why we have come up with a strict idea to limit the use of plastic bags and I totally agree with this. However, some people believe that banning them is not always the final solution for environmental issues.

It is an undeniable fact that Plastic bags also affect the environment and human health. When tiny particles of plastic have been found in humans.They enter the food supply because animals are eating them. When people eat meat they are likely getting those plastic bag particles from their food, therefore plastic enters their bodies. Another reason that plastic pollution is such a problem when plastic is the hardest material to decompose .It took more than hundreds years to break down.

Another point to consider that, If we completely baned the use of plastic bags that might come up with some financial problems for companies investing and require consumers to purchase reusable bags which would affect to lower income. Moreover, banning them might not be the right solution for plastic pollution when some people believe that the huge problem is waste management and banning individual materials or specific applications can not solve this challenge.Therefore, functioning waste-disposal systems and responsible, sustainable handling of waste are more important.

In conclusion, it is hard to make all people perspective In the same way, even in the case of the plastic bags should be banned or not. Some people may disagree that it is main reason to destroying our earth. However, I personally think that to limit the use of plastic bags and policy makers should come up with a policy to balances the materials we use when The materials are limited the more we need to recycle is essential.]]> 2022-02-14 06:08:07 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2045524614 Bow (opinion essay) https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2045824812 In recent decades, plastic have been a major cause of environmental pollution. However, plastic bags are polluting the land and water enormously. It has become essential to ban plastic bags before the planet will be ruin. This easy will discuss the problems caused by plastic bags.

Firstly, plastic bags are a huge source of plastic pollution. As they are non-biodegradable, which takes thousands of years to break down and decompose. It remains in the land which contributes to the rising problem of land pollution. Nowadays, the government of various countries has come up with strict measures to limit the use of plastic bags.

Furthermore, it also causes water pollution. Animals and marine creatures unknowingly consume plastic particles along with their food. Research shows that waste plastic bags have been a major reason for untimely animal deaths. For example, sea turtles mistake floating plastic shopping bags for jellyfish, so they are risk extinction partly because of consuming excessive amounts of plastics and this will lead animals to death.

In conclusion, plastic pollution has begun to negatively impact the natural environment and create problems for plants, wildlife, and even human population. In light of this, it is recommended that the use of plastic bags should be banned. ]]> 2022-02-14 09:36:06 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2045824812 tnaovalath12 https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056231883 2022-02-19 04:46:11 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056231883 Phing (Overfishing) https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056246840 These days overfishing is expanding around the world whereas the overfishing harm many species. It is true that there are many causes of this problem which could be addressed. Thus, this essay would probably highlight a simply cause and solution to this regard.

According to many causes of overfishing, the high demand for seafood consumption is one of the problems caused by worldwide overfishing. These days many people tend to have seafood as their meals, and it becomes the flavor dish for the party as well. As an example, most restaurants in Laos will have a seafood dish on the menu and we can generally notice that there is both fresh and frozen seafood sold in the market/supermarket.

To address this problem, it is significant to raise awareness of people regarding the possible obstacle caused by overfishing. ]]> 2022-02-19 05:26:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056246840 jing ( overfishing solution ) https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056246858 some people believe that overfishing of the world's oceans threatens many species with extinction and is putting the livelihood of millions of people around the world at risk. there are various reasons that have caused the problem of overfishing, hence, some solutions that can be done to prevent it from happening.
to begin with the essentials of growing demand for fish worldwide, lots of fishermen can earn a large amount of money to support the companies and government income. another reason of that, the rest is by-catch, unwanted animals that are thrown back dead, thus, it becomes an inferior fish as some part of huge areas of the world's oceans are not protected by environmental laws, due to an ignorance of government may not be able to handle these problems as I have mentioned that it's encouraging to earn income abundantly, however, overfishing could be one of a huge problem needs to be solved appropriately.
a solution that is proving successful in many ways to reduce overfishing could be bringing in-laws to protect fish species and limit fishing, in order to conserve and protect marine animals from their habitation, finally, the government should provide another environmental law of ecosystem protection roughly stability.]]> 2022-02-19 05:26:49 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056246858 MI( Over fishing) https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056246879 In theseday, it is undeniable that overfishing of the World's oceans threatens many species with extinction and is putting the livelihood of millions of people around the world at risk, this essay will discuss the cause of this problem and solution to prevent it from happening.

There are few main reasons that are a root cause for this issue, firstly is that there are growing of demand for fish worldwide, second is factory fishing make huge catches too easy, however, they do not use the proper technologies and method to catch for instance , most of them use bycatch method and most of the time they catch not only the fish but other animals that they do not want as well such as turtles, dolphins, seabird etc. In addition, there are not so many laws to control on fishing.

To prevent this problem, government should bring in law to protect animals species as well as limited fishing area and fishing quota. furthermore, they should take serious action on the punishment and penalty for peoples or companies who do illegal fishing as well as to put taxes on fishing which make it less attractive to companies. Another things is that to raise public awarness thoughts various social media platform and other channels to ensure that the messages are reach out to citizen as much as possible.

In conclusion, it is my firm belief that government and citizen should work together to prevent the extinction of animals species as well as to limited overfishing problem by raising more public awareness through social media and other platform. on other hand, government should issued the proper policy and rule to limited the illegal fishing activities as well as to protect the animals species and Environmental.]]> 2022-02-19 05:26:52 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056246879 Simon Solution essay https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056247057 Nowadays, overfishing of the world's ocean intimidates large number of species with extinction and is bringing the livelihood of millions of people around the world at risk. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.
To begin with, there are many companies or factories fishing easily without limit control. In addition, several ocean in the world are not protected by environment laws. As an example, Japan is a country that eats a lot of fish, so news has emerged that some specie will endemic. Thus, the research show that those main cause that makes this problem can occur.
Even though, in my personally believe that the state should have a defense or campaign that decrease for this particular problem.

]]> 2022-02-19 05:27:26 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056247057 Top task2 day2 https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056247155 It is universally accepted that overfishing cause the big problem to the oceans, many aquatic are extinct and become food for the whole world.

It is true that now a day we make a huge catches too easy by using technology such as fishing vessel, radar, fishing net. Fishing vessels deploy 1.4billion hooks a year which is slice of fish hanging from them as bait. There also use the fishing with an opening of up to 23.000meters squared which is big enough to hold 13 jumbo jets or generally more than 500tons of fish and in 500tons of fish there usually throw the marine creatures that there don't want back overboard.

In addition this kind of fishing is support by big company and government because there provides a quick return to them. Thus, how can we stop overfishing? to prevent extinction from overfishing government might bring in laws to protect fish species and limit fishing or put taxes on fishing which make it less attractive to companies.

However it is not enough to stop overfishing because illegal fishing is difficult to police and the problem dose not get enough publicity. To solve this problem companies have to limit there fishing, expand more public awareness though the media.

To conclude overfishing are destroying the marine ecosystem. Companies and Government have to fine the way to stop overfishing if not than many marine species might extinct.

]]> 2022-02-19 05:27:39 UTC https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056247155 Tuinui solution essay https://padlet.com/tnaovalath12/rok6qyr608413lqc/wish/2056248350 Overfishing causes large damages to many different kinds of animals who live in the oceans with the danger of being extinct. There are several reasons why fishermen repeatedly break the balance of the ecosystem.This essay will discuss the reasons for this issue and consider what practical solutions are available.

Nowadays, fish is being consumed by people around the world. Moreover, the demand for fish is high every year. The high demand causes overfishing which will put the majority of sea creatures in danger. Another point to consider is the technology of fishing equipment.The high technology of fishing makes it too easy to catch a huge number of fish at the same time. However, This problem does not only kill a lot of fish, but also other ocean species such as dolphins, starfishes, etc. It will easily destroy the sea environment which is hard to recover.

There are numerous ways for this solution in this issue. Firstly,Governments should put more consideration into strict regulations and laws to protect fish species and limit fishing.the policy should increase tax for huge fishing companies so that they will reduce fishing.On the other hand, a possible solution could be to raise public awareness through media or curriculums in schools.Therefore, It would be a better way to make more people realize the vulnerable of ocean species and learn how to protect them.

In conclusion,overfishing is a huge issue to concern, regulation must take urgent awareness to this negative impact.

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