Per 4 - Week 5 - Day 5 - 03/12 - Story 3 "Safe Haven" - Section 4 - Events after the Fall by Montana_Kanyuk World

Saidmalik Abbosov

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

The title “After” is the another part of a story, that is related to events that happen after Noah lost his family dur the effects of the fall.

Cindy Remache

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

The tittle before reflects on what had happened before things got bad for Noah. And how he felt before the Fall. The after talks about how Noah feels with all that has occur, and it relates on how things are changing with the climate. Since people haven't been taking care of the Earth.

Sizhen Li

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

The story titles "before" and "after" reflect and relate to real life that we live, because before and after is a process of every event that in our real life.

Bun Bun

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

The title before and after reflect and relate to real life that we live by in the real life we living a normal life but we have warn not to use so to manny fossil fuels and after the world become to hot so people can’t go outside

tauh8742 — 2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

It was January 21, 2040, when Noah came out of the cave to get some water. Five months had passed or so he thought had passed because he lost track of time as there was no space on the rock. Noah remains alone who takes shelter in a cave-like underground shelter close to where his neighborhood was before it was destroyed.

Sizhen Li

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

After the Fall, the river and the water is got contaminated become to red water. " With the straw in his hand, he bent over and stuck the tube into the river, whose water flow was significantly smaller and redder than when he first arrived five months ago. Lovely, he thought, it floods enough to wipe out my entire town, but the little water for me to drink is contaminated."

Lina Chen

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

After the fall the river and the water compared to when it arrived just five months ago, the current is smaller and redder. The whole town is polluted so the water chage to red "He took in a breath of cool, crisp air. Inhaling, he replayed everything that had happened: the day at the river, seeing the water coming fast, yelling but no one hearing him, realizing it was too late. He breathed out his chest sinking, but still tight. The tightness had been with Noah since The Fall. He hadn’t been able to breathe right since. Noah looked into his beaten down drawstring bag for his water filtering straw. He had found one laying on the streets of his neighborhood, while he was looking for any other Fall survivors. There was nothing left but this straw. He had taken it as a reminder of his home, but soon discovered its use. With the straw in his hand, he bent over and stuck the tube into the river, whose water flow was significantly smaller and redder than when he first arrived five months ago. Lovely, he thought, it floods enough to wipe out my entire town, but the little water for me to drink is contaminated. He rolled his eyes as the water moved through the filters and into his mouth, replenishing his cracked lips and dry throat. Noah closes his eyes, thinking."

Bun Bun

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

After the fall the water and river was all bond together

Saidmalik Abbosov

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

The water level after the fall went high, and became dirty. As Noah states, it because mostly red and dusty. So he is using a straw to drink.

Jiayao Li

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

After The Fall the river and water was redder and smaller. "With the straw in his hand, he bent over and stuck the tube into the river, whose water flow was significantly smaller and redder than when he first arrived five months ago." The water will taste like dirt or a rotten egg. The water became

Cindy Remache

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

It has been five months since the Fall happened. Noah stayed in the opposite side of the Saka Haphong mountains.

Lina Chen

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

the fall at 5 months before Noah is in the Mountain top "Five months. That’s how long had passed since Noah last saw his family since he last saw any human being." "Candice would’ve loved this, Noah thought, thinking of the 5 a.m. morning hikes his girlfriend had dragged him to simply see the sunrise at the peak. "

Sizhen Li

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

The time when the Fall happen is Augest 21, 2039 because that is before five months. Now, Noah are living in Saka Haphong mountains. "The sun was beginning its daily journey up from behind the Saka Haphong mountains. While the opposite side of where Noah stood..."

JiaYao Li

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

The Fall happened five months ago. Noah is at the Saka Haphong mountains. "At least, he thought it was five months, he had run out of room on his rock to keep track of the passing time."

Saidmalik Abbosov

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

It’s been five months since the Fall happened in the story. Noah ran out of room to keep track of time, he escaped the rock where he stood at. The evidence from the text is “At least, he thought it was five months, he had run out of room on his rock to keep track of the passing time.” This evidence tells us that Noah had to Kobe on after his family drowned in water and look for survivors.

Bun Bun

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

Noah is now living in the streets, the fall happen 9years later after they had predicted.

"The Fall" happened five months ago, and Noah now lives in the vicinity of Saka Haphong Mountain.

fang5852 — 2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

Daniela Grande

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

the titles tell me that the story is going to change and maybe something good will happen

Lina Chen

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

section 1 title is before and section 4 is after section 1 tell as what happened before the fall and section 4 tell as what happened after the fall

Jiayao Li

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

The title "After" tells me what happen to Noah after The Fall and "Before" The Fall didn't occur

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

Junda
I think the story title is after mean now story is talking about things after the Fall.

Brianna :)

borj2415 — 2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

I think the titles were like that because it was what happened before the fall and what happened after I mean what noah experienced before and after

aylin(°_°)

2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

this title let me think that something is going to happen after climax for the story. I mean definitely conflict is gonna be after the climax.

The title tells us whether "The Fall" has happened. The title before the 4 section is "Before", which means that "The Fall" has not happened yet, and the title after the 4 section is "After", which means " The Fall" has already happened.

fang5852 — 2021-03-12 03:51:12 UTC

tauh8742 — 2021-03-12 16:19:58 UTC

"With the straw in his hand, he bent over and stuck the tube into the river, whose water flow was significantly smaller and redder than when he first arrived five months ago." The flood wiped out all fresh water sources and made them contaminated. Noah had to use a filtering straw to drink water. The color of the water had also changed to a more reddish kind of color.

Junda Li

2021-03-12 16:25:44 UTC

after the fall , the The river has become smaller and redder than when he first arrived five months ago

Sizhen Li

2021-03-12 16:26:41 UTC

After the Fall, the water become to redder I think that the water is red becuase the entire town got wipe out. So the people are die, the blood come into the water become redder and the taste is bloody.

Saidmalik Abbosov

2021-03-12 16:26:53 UTC

The fall made the river and the water become contaminated and reddish, so it’s mixed with ground and tastes like dirt.

After "The Fall", the river mixed with the soil and became very dirty.

fang5852 — 2021-03-12 16:27:23 UTC

Nozimjon Utkirov

2021-03-12 16:30:32 UTC

The water level after the fall went high and it was contaminated. Noah states the water was mostly red and dusty. So he used a straw to drink.

SIzhen Li

2021-03-12 16:55:57 UTC

The flashback in paragraph 28 is Noah replayed the everything during the Fall that Noah yelling but no one heard, and after the Fall Noah are feel tightness. "he replayed everything that had happened: the day at the river, seeing the water coming fast, yelling but no one hearing him, realizing it was too late. He breathed out his chest sinking, but still tight. The tightness had been with Noah since The Fall."

Jose Gonzalez

2021-03-12 16:57:22 UTC

The flashback in paragraph 28 that Noah took in a breath of cool crisp air. Inhaling - when he inhales, he remembers everything again <--this is flashback

Brianna :(

borj2415 — 2021-03-12 16:59:15 UTC

I only see a flashback in paragraph 27 where noah says that candice would like to see the sunset

Saidmalik Abbosov

2021-03-12 17:02:17 UTC

The author used a flashback in paragraph 28, “Inhaling, he replayed everything that had happened: the day at the river, seeing the water coming fast, yelling but no one hearing him, realizing it was too late.”. This evidence shares the flashback idea with us because Noah is tragically reminiscing events that happened when Noah lost his family due to The Fall effects.

Lina Chen

2021-03-12 17:14:40 UTC

i think the irony in the story are when noah are

Sizhen Li

2021-03-12 17:16:28 UTC

The irony in the story is the flood wipe out the entire town but his water got contaminated by the flood so he was

Saidmalik Abbosov

2021-03-12 17:16:46 UTC

The author uses irony in paragraph 27, “Never thought how much I’d kill to be doing that right now, he smiled sadly, a single tear sliding down his cheek, starting in the eye and dissolving at his dry lips, leaving the smallest hint of salt behind.”. In this evidence, the key word is “never thought” because this points us to expectations. Noah expected a different reaction, and didn’t think that he would literally give up everything to throw back. But reality is different, everything is changed and that's impossible now.

Jiayao Li

2021-03-12 17:17:19 UTC

The irony is when Noah

Sizhen Li

2021-03-12 17:21:23 UTC

tauh8742 — 2021-03-12 17:21:28 UTC

After the Fall Noah's neighborhood looks like ancient ruins with contaminated water everywhere. There remain mud and dirt everywhere mixed with the water giving it a reddish color.

Daniela

2021-03-12 17:21:38 UTC

montanakanyuk — 2021-03-12 17:22:12 UTC

Lina Chen

2021-03-12 17:22:43 UTC

Saidmalik Abbosov

2021-03-12 17:24:11 UTC

Jiayao Li

2021-03-12 17:25:31 UTC