https://padlet.com/27bbouverot/rnu1mnl65siicjbm Give Feedback on my writing en-us 2022-01-31 17:41:35 UTC 2022-02-01 18:11:11 UTC hello@padlet.com 27sdhanantwari https://padlet.com/27bbouverot/rnu1mnl65siicjbm/wish/2023433856 I really like your essay! Your counter argument is really strong and convinces me! Your essay really brings out the point you are trying to convey! One wish I have is your call to action. It’s really good. But try making it a little stronger. Overall, a very good essay. :)]]> 2022-02-01 14:31:11 UTC https://padlet.com/27bbouverot/rnu1mnl65siicjbm/wish/2023433856 27mkarp https://padlet.com/27bbouverot/rnu1mnl65siicjbm/wish/2023962966 I really liked how simplistic but exciting your intro was. It was short but I treated me. The only thing that I would wish with your essay would be a conclusion that focuses mostly on the thesis than the body’s of the essay. Great work!]]> 2022-02-01 18:11:11 UTC https://padlet.com/27bbouverot/rnu1mnl65siicjbm/wish/2023962966