https://padlet.com/conell666/rnmdehl8q0hj Made with good vibes en-us 2018-03-12 16:31:28 UTC 2025-10-25 17:07:47 UTC hello@padlet.com conell666 https://padlet.com/conell666/rnmdehl8q0hj/wish/240974972 2018-03-12 16:31:45 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/rnmdehl8q0hj/wish/240974972 https://padlet.com/conell666/rnmdehl8q0hj/wish/241330808 Though I would hire you there are a few things you should add or fix about the cover letter. Though you are a straight forward person you kind of come off to harsh to the person looking to hire. Other than these few mistakes I would hire you. You seem very determine to get down to the bottom of certain issues in the field. I think you portray your skills and motivations very clearly. The cover letter is very clean and organized throughout the whole piece. I think you could potentially add what school you attended I think that would help make decisions. I like how you started with explaining why you want justice and where your purpose is in this job. ]]> 2018-03-13 12:50:14 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/rnmdehl8q0hj/wish/241330808 https://padlet.com/conell666/rnmdehl8q0hj/wish/241484525 Although I believe that this is well written and straight to the point, there are a few things that would need to be fixed before I would consider hiring you. As for grammar, try reading things out loud when you write them; this will help with your choppiness and awkward phrasing. Also, maybe try to state how you can help them with helping their clients; right now, you come across as being harsh and almost demanding. Overall, I believe that you did a good job, and with these easy changes, you can switch the overall feel of the paper from very coarse to refined and confident instead of cocky. ]]> 2018-03-13 16:28:52 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/rnmdehl8q0hj/wish/241484525 https://padlet.com/conell666/rnmdehl8q0hj/wish/241549733 The letter reads well and describes what job you are trying to perform, but it lacks credibility and enthusiasm. You state that you've had articles published and that you were a journalist and reporter, but where? Maybe attach your articles for some reference, and discuss your education experience. Also, you write about what you want to do and how you expect to do it, but you never really say why. It is always important to be passionate about your career, so those looking to hire you know your job will be important to you. ]]> 2018-03-13 18:05:08 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/rnmdehl8q0hj/wish/241549733 https://padlet.com/conell666/rnmdehl8q0hj/wish/241650772 I do not believe that I would hire you. This cover letter almost sounds recited and not original. The letter also seems to be a bit long, but it does provide your qualities. There are also some different grammatical errors throughout it. When you say that you are a straightforward person, that can deter a lot of people. I think that you are very interested in this job, however I do not feel that you are ready just solely based on what I read. ]]> 2018-03-13 22:26:28 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/rnmdehl8q0hj/wish/241650772