Claudia: Remember to pay attention to the pronunciation of –ed endings and the word firefighter. Also you need to work on fluency and thought groups, sometimes it sounds like you are speaking word by word. Pay attention to verb conjugation. For example: “Laura, told about this situation.” It should be: “Laura, tell us about this situation.” In addition, when you said: “Don’t use the cigarette” I think you should change the verb use by smoke. 

Laura: Remember to check the difference between the verbs stay and be. Which sounds better, I stay with Daniela or I’m with Daniela? Also be careful with questions structure. Example, You can tell us what recommendation…? It should be Can you tell us what recommendations…? Pay attention to verb forms, remember after a preposition the verb goes with –ing. Example: For avoiding.

Daniela: Remember to pay attention to fluency and thought groups, you usually elongate syllables and fill the pauses with eh…. Also pay attention to the words you choose. Example: “It’s very danger and pollution for us.” It should be, it’s very dangerous for us. In addition, check the pronunciation of lighted and pollute.