Week 9 Session 1 by Usic https://padlet.com/usictech/rnfdmei2ji0tfxax What is the mark you give for each section of the sample report and what are your recommendations for the report improvement? en-us 2020-11-24 10:58:51 UTC 2020-11-24 11:42:40 UTC hello@padlet.com Group 3 Marks :4 Mistake: 1.The sentence is too long.2.There is no APA reference.3.There is no market share and market position in the introduction. https://padlet.com/usictech/rnfdmei2ji0tfxax/wish/955782334 2020-11-24 11:33:30 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/rnfdmei2ji0tfxax/wish/955782334 Group 1 https://padlet.com/usictech/rnfdmei2ji0tfxax/wish/955784499 Mark: 5
1.supplement market share and market position.
2.citation needed
3.try to be more concise]]> 2020-11-24 11:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/rnfdmei2ji0tfxax/wish/955784499 Group 3 Political factor: The evidence is incomplete. https://padlet.com/usictech/rnfdmei2ji0tfxax/wish/955798938 2020-11-24 11:41:19 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/rnfdmei2ji0tfxax/wish/955798938 Group 1 https://padlet.com/usictech/rnfdmei2ji0tfxax/wish/955801356 Citation needed]]> 2020-11-24 11:42:33 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/rnfdmei2ji0tfxax/wish/955801356