Peer feedback for Advert analysis essay by John https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x en-us 2017-06-01 06:02:50 UTC 2017-06-01 06:28:20 UTC hello@padlet.com Esa on max https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746654 Very nice has some linking to target audience and stuff, but you haven't mentioned what will they do after they are attracted and how that will help or maybe influence them and also you haven't talked about the platforms which you should be talking about in detail which you have provided very shallow explanation and detail ]]> 2017-06-01 06:07:23 UTC https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746654 Hana feedback to Romel https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746766 Talks about different platforms

Target
talk about target market


]]> 2017-06-01 06:08:50 UTC https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746766 Leah's feedback to Hana https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746770 - need more description on the front in the poster.
- mention what type of shot and explain the use.
- try to structure your paragraphs more clearly.
- mention what devices and techniques have been used to produce to poster. 

]]> 2017-06-01 06:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746770 Essam by ron https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746848 Rom*

shows how shots have been used to appeal to the audience. Talk about  what audience it's directed to. 
talk about the actors or players in the advert and their fan base and how it would appeal. what platforms have the adverts been displayed on

]]> 2017-06-01 06:10:02 UTC https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746848 Maksim about My dear Chinese friend leahli0701 https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746882 Very impressive analysis of representation and connotations of the actors facial expressions. Talk about different platforms, reconsider the use of colours. Talk about how this particular poster appeals to the target audience ]]> 2017-06-01 06:10:46 UTC https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746882 Maksim about Leah leahli0701 https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746897 2017-06-01 06:11:11 UTC https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174746897 Rom on nax https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174747483 rephrase paragraph about YouTube. Talk about what techniques have been used ]]> 2017-06-01 06:17:58 UTC https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174747483 Leah about Madhu https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174747620 Mention what techniques have been used to produce the poster.
Also, try to mention about the target audience and how will the the product appeal to them.
 ]]> 2017-06-01 06:20:07 UTC https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174747620 Hana's feedback to Essam azzam9982 https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174747720 Talks about Miss-en-scene 
talks about presentation 

mention target audience ]]> 2017-06-01 06:21:25 UTC https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174747720 Hana azzam9982 https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174747734 2017-06-01 06:21:35 UTC https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174747734 Essa feed to the Great Wall https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174747867 So much detail and linking to the codes and conventions target audience 
mentuined and everything , 


Target : talk about the Romeo and Juliet twist in more detail]]> 2017-06-01 06:23:29 UTC https://padlet.com/webberj/rn6u3gzvz25x/wish/174747867