Nearly half a dozen western british forts were destroyed

The british finally defeated Pontiac's forces in early august at a battle near fort pitt

Sean Conley

What area?

British should be British

No periods at the end of sentences

The British finally defeated Pontiac's forces in early August at a battle near Fort Pitt.

Nathan Smulling

Boston Tea Party

English tea.

and he served as a legislature of Massachusetts 

from 1765 to 1774. After Samuel Adams was the 

state legislature,  he served as a delegate 

to the continental congress. He was also against the 

Stamp Act and Sugar Act and played a huge roles

in planning the Boston Tea Party.

Sophia Montanaro

Taxation should not be capitalized

legislator not legislaure

legislator he served in the Continental Congress

role not roles

of  the Exchequer (Treasurer). These laws placed new taxes on 

 glass, lead, paints, paper, and tea.  The colonists reaction was the same

as the Sugar Act and Stamp Act. Britain repealed all taxes except the one

on Tea.

patriots.

He was a lawyer fighting against the

acts, trying to find a legal way to get rid of the acts.

Otis was the one that started the quote

"no taxation without representation".

-Sarkis Avakyan

Patriots

What acts are you talking about?

What speech did he use that quote in?

Andrew Dumas

It created an imaginary line along the of the crest of the Appalachian Mountains that indicated how far west the settlers could live.

The title should be capitalized

Stamp bill

February 6th of what year?

Grenville rose into Parliament? Where was he?

Parliament not Parlaiment

The first word in a sentence should capitalized.

The sentence does not make sense.

The picture is too small.

issued by superior provincial courts to assist the British government in enforcing trade and navigation laws.

Such warrents authorized custom house officers to search any house for smuggled goods without specifying

 either the house or the goods. Despite an eloquent attack the writs were continued.

Sarah Cardinal

Eloquent is not one of your words. You can not take someone else's words

These sentences do not flow very well.

Mariela Calabro

You cannot call him George

The last sentence does not make sense.

Tried to lower domestic taxes at the colonies he introduced the Stamp Act in 1765. America protested and it eventually turned into the War of Independence.

Justin Irwin

This is in the wrong font.

He tried to lower domestic taxes..

You left out that he was a British prime minister.

Jake Drohen

You didn't finish his name

what colony?

hated by the people

end at the tea taxes

You keep repeating the same phrase about widely hated

the British soldiers involved in the Boston Massacre in

1770. During 1770-1774 John Adams served in the

Massachusetts legislature and was elected a member

of the Continental congress. John Adams, Benjamin

Franklin, and John Jay created the Treaty of Paris

officially ending the American Revolution.

congress should be Congress

Jenna Izzi

Introduced the Stamp Act in 1765. America Protested and it

Eventually led to The War of Independence.

Justin Irwin

He became famous because of his amazing explorations.

Daniel Boone was the founder of Kentucky. 

He started exploring Kentucky in 1767.

While he was exploring, he went threw the wilderness road, the Appalachian Mountains, and the Cumberland Gap.

Boone also fought in the Revolutionary war.

Adriana Aceto

The sentences are choppy. They should flow smoothly when they are read.

Wilderness Road

These are the type of peoplee it affected the most: businessmen, merchants, journalists, lawyers, and other powerful persons. Among these were Samuel Adams, Christopher Gadsden, Patrick Henry, John Dickinson, John Lamb, Joseph Warren, and Paul Revere

Tyler Lopez Blue 8-b

peoplee should be people

A revenue law passed by the British Parliament

The first widely known act of the Sons of Liberty took place on August , 14 1765 when an effigy of Andrew Olliver(who was commisioned distrubutor of stamps in Massuchusetts was found hanging on Newbury street along with a large boot near his foot with a devil crawling out of it.

Their most popular objective was to force stamp distrubutors in the colony to resign

The two men that could generate public attention for the hanging were Benjamin Edes and John Gill

Steven Grenier

The first sentence does not make sense. Do you mean that they called themselves the Sons of Liberty?

Newbury Street

You did not put a period at the end of any of the sentences.

Matthew Battista

The play that you were supposed to write about was called The Blockheads.

You need to use spell check. Click on the words that are underlined.

The British forced the colonist to accept it the Quartering act because they were protecting the French from the colonist

The Quartering act was passed on June 2, 1765 against

Devin Hassett

Required colonists not colonies to provide barracks

do not include it in the sentence

Act must be capitalized

protecting the French from the colonists?

no periods