https://padlet.com/macdonalds4/rlpusoi64mkz en-us 2017-01-18 05:38:21 UTC 2017-01-20 02:35:59 UTC hello@padlet.com macdonalds4 https://padlet.com/macdonalds4/rlpusoi64mkz/wish/147729007 Ms Mac thinks...


Sojiro - I think we need you to be visible - sitting at the front with a torch perhaps?Think about the way you speak your words - VOICE

Blackout for eating and gunshot - leave this to the audiences imagination!

Character - voice! Posture! Exaggerated gestures!

Think about the placing of the chairs - diagonal to the audience. 
Turn to face the audience when you pull the pistol and make your actions deliberate. 

]]> 2017-01-18 05:53:17 UTC https://padlet.com/macdonalds4/rlpusoi64mkz/wish/147729007 macdonalds4 https://padlet.com/macdonalds4/rlpusoi64mkz/wish/147729776 Ms Mac thinks...


Issey - why do you have a script? 
Colin - good narration - make sure your voice is consistent though. I like the idea of hiding in the box. 

Beni - knock from the side so your back isn't to the audience until you blow.

Issey - more actions when the wolf is blowing you away.

Music or sound effect in between scene changes. 

Beni - perform to us - the audience!

]]> 2017-01-18 06:12:43 UTC https://padlet.com/macdonalds4/rlpusoi64mkz/wish/147729776 macdonalds4 https://padlet.com/macdonalds4/rlpusoi64mkz/wish/147730186 Ms Mac thinks...


Amelia - you need to use your voice to make it eciting for the audience! LEARN THE LINES. You need to have one place you sit at - like Sojiro!

Taiga - your body is facing the back of the stage and we couldn't see it. ..


'Hang on a tick' sound effect? Too late. have them ready without delay.


Alvin - where are you running to? Suggest - you run through the audience

Vince - your body needs to face the front

Whack off the head? How will you show this? Blackout? Sound effect? Staying in character?

Convention???]]> 2017-01-18 06:21:20 UTC https://padlet.com/macdonalds4/rlpusoi64mkz/wish/147730186 macdonalds4 https://padlet.com/macdonalds4/rlpusoi64mkz/wish/147731494 Ms Mac says...

Good voice acting and actions!

You chump?

Beating sound effect?

Music for scene change (too noisy!!!) for bean growing!!

Can we get some green to cover the boxes? A green scarf maybe?

Taka - can we have taka appearing from the back and LEARN THE LINES!!!

Climbing the tree? 

YOU NEED TO LEARN THE LINES - IF YOU DON'T KNOW THEM - LET THE NARRATOR DO IT FOR YOU. 

Scene change - you just need a place for the bath in the corner already in place or have the music 

I can't smell anyone? - make this really important and emphasise. ]]> 2017-01-18 06:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/macdonalds4/rlpusoi64mkz/wish/147731494