https://padlet.com/nasricdac/rl5v518przyefhtd Composition en-us 2022-02-19 03:35:42 UTC 2022-02-26 03:47:59 UTC hello@padlet.com nasricdac https://padlet.com/nasricdac/rl5v518przyefhtd/wish/2067242480 A teacher I will always remember]]> 2022-02-26 03:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nasricdac/rl5v518przyefhtd/wish/2067242480 nasricdac https://padlet.com/nasricdac/rl5v518przyefhtd/wish/2067247977 One of my favourite times was when i was in primary school this teacher and I met my chinese teacher:Mr Tan. He taught me lots of things during his lesson which benefited me in the future.
I want to relate my story about to him as he was my favourite teacher. When i have questions he taught me how to solve them correctly and even taught me this sentence that change my life:'mistakes are a steps to success'. This was how the story started.

Feedback: Two run-on sentences I have corrected so you need to be careful of putting many ideas in a single sentence. That technique when done well is good but it fails when the grammar/punctuation/sentence conjunction is used incorrectly.

In the morning i always have a Chinese lesson period 30 minutes but i cherish them and always pay fulll attention as i was in higher mother toungue.So that day we did a pop quiz and somehow i failed  then i realised i fail because of that one single mistake:a stroke i forgotten to put a stroke when i wrote the word since i failed i had to stay back for an extra 45 minutes after school to revise with the teacher, he taught me how to write words that are extremely hard to me after 1 school term the day came again..another pop quiz this time everything changed all the words tested was familiar

Feedback: There is a longer run-on sentence in the second paragraph, please spot and try to break it up.]]> 2022-02-26 03:43:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nasricdac/rl5v518przyefhtd/wish/2067247977