https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny en-us 2018-09-17 20:21:29 UTC 2023-12-18 02:00:19 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/312346251 Mia- The Brain Pop video helped me learn all the kinds of dialogue, that you have to make dialogue realistic, and mainly how dialogue's set up.]]> 2018-12-07 18:01:01 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/312346251 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/312356659 The brainpop video helped me understand the format of dialogue. -Griffin Painter]]> 2018-12-07 18:24:12 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/312356659 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/313965981 Izzy- I learned that when starting a paragraph with dialogue to be careful with what words you use. Also, I learned how to make characters seem real while using dialogue.]]> 2018-12-12 17:56:33 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/313965981 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/313972677 The brainpop video helped me understand the format and how you need to space out your dialogue when people are having a conversation. I also learned that dialogue should sound like it came from an actual person and realistic.]]> 2018-12-12 18:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/313972677 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314370949 The brain pop video showed me that you have to use a new paragraph every time that a different character uses dialogue. I also learned that you need to be careful of your word choices and make the characters sound real. ]]> 2018-12-13 17:37:20 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314370949 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314373026 Something I took away from this video is that when you write dialogue it should reveal the characters personality. Another thing I took away was that you need to start a new paragraph when a new character starts talking.

]]> 2018-12-13 17:41:50 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314373026 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314384130 One thing I took away from this video is when a new character speaks you have to start a new paragraph. ]]> 2018-12-13 18:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314384130 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314389301 One take away that you had from the Brain Pop video on dialogue was that you need to say what your character would say. Express you characters feelings by making them say things that is part of their personality.]]> 2018-12-13 18:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314389301 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314390427 I learned that dialogue can affect a story a lot. It said that if you have bad dialogue your text may sound weird or funny.

]]> 2018-12-13 18:13:59 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314390427 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314393148 2018-12-13 18:19:26 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314393148 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314750052 The brain pop video taught to me to make it sound realistic. Also, I learned that you have to make a new paragraph when a new character speaks.]]> 2018-12-14 17:37:32 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314750052 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314751828 The Brainpop video taught me how to sound more detailed in my writings. Just like show, don't tell, it made the writing more realistic and sounded like something that actually happened in real life.]]> 2018-12-14 17:41:33 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314751828 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314758476 The brainpop video taught me not to put in diolauge that people wouldn't say.]]> 2018-12-14 17:57:46 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314758476 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314764797 One takeaway from the video that I learned is to express the character in what they say. When a character says something you should add their personality which helps the reader to know how the other characters feel about the event. That is the main takeaway from the Brain Pop video that will help to improve my writing. ]]> 2018-12-14 18:12:58 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/314764797 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315583185 I learned that dialogue should be realistic. You need to make sure that when someone says something it should give you information about the person who is saying the dialogue.]]> 2018-12-18 16:16:34 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315583185 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315584372 I learned that when you use dialogue you need to show the characters personality and get the reader to know what they are like  ]]> 2018-12-18 16:18:54 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315584372 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315586285 I learned that when you write dialogue you should make the person sound how they would sound as if they were talking in real life. You also have to use wording that they would use in real life like if you were talking to a 4 year old in real life they would not be using big and advanced wording they would be using small words that are easy to say for them. ]]> 2018-12-18 16:22:27 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315586285 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315588173 Braedon]]> 2018-12-18 16:25:57 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315588173 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315590859 Make your dialogue sound natural like something a person would actuallysay. Also make paragraphs when a new person starts speaking.]]> 2018-12-18 16:31:47 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315590859 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315920661 i leard that after anotther person is talking you start a new pragraph.]]> 2018-12-19 16:20:19 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/315920661 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/316234186 I learned when you use dialogue you need to make it seem real. Also, I learned that when you use dialogue it becomes its own paragraph.]]> 2018-12-20 17:31:33 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/316234186 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1084241773 I leaned when using dialogue to make a new paragraph. I also learned that it makes the narrative more realistic by making the reader feel in the moment not only seeing things but hearing them as well.]]> 2021-01-13 17:59:04 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1084241773 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1084273474 I learned that when you use dialogue make a new paragraph and to use better words so the reader has more fun reading and it feels more realistic.

]]> 2021-01-13 18:05:13 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1084273474 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1101542164 I learned that when writing diologe that you need to make the persons sentence something someone would say in real life.]]> 2021-01-19 14:55:28 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1101542164 27istokes https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1102556150 I learned that when using dialogue, you have to put down what you think the character would say, like if I saw a shark I wouldn't just say "it is a shark." No I would say something like "Oh my gosh!! Its a shark dont move!!" ]]> 2021-01-19 17:55:41 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1102556150 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1102581412 I learned that you should make the character say something sensible and something that someone would say in real life.]]> 2021-01-19 18:00:27 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1102581412 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1102614680 I learned that you should make your dialogue sound natural and something that that person would actually say. ]]> 2021-01-19 18:06:34 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1102614680 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1102896816 I learned that you have to make your dialogue sound real not fake also make sure to make a new paragraph after you are done writting with dialogue]]> 2021-01-19 19:00:09 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1102896816 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1126763119 I learned that dialogue should be based on the character's personality. I also learned that in plays the name is supposed to be above the dialogue.]]> 2021-01-26 14:09:15 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1126763119 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1126982900 I learned that diolouge should have meaning and show a characters personality.]]> 2021-01-26 14:48:39 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1126982900 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1127005386 Dialogue should follow how the characters personality is and you should not have boring dialogue like "It is a shark." and instead, make it more complex.]]> 2021-01-26 14:52:34 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1127005386 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1127091682 First off i learned incorporate the character personality in dialogue and second i learn too make the dialogue more complex.

]]> 2021-01-26 15:07:01 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1127091682 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1128412732 I learned that dialogue should sound realistic. If the dialogue doesn't sound realistic the dialogue won't be as good as if you make it sound realistic.]]> 2021-01-26 18:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1128412732 27cturner1 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1128417711 I learned that you need to write what people would actually say and not just what you would say. ]]> 2021-01-26 18:47:15 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1128417711 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1136324319 I learned that when writing dialouge what the characters are saying should show their personality. If the dialouge is very simple and plain the reader will not be able to understand the characters personality. I also learned that when someone else starts to talk, you should start on another line.]]> 2021-01-28 13:52:56 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1136324319 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1136648670 One of the takeaways I had from the video was that you need to write what you think that character would say in this situation. For example in the situation of a 4 year old tripping you would they would not say OW! That hurt my knee cap. They would say OWW. And run away crying.]]> 2021-01-28 14:51:35 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1136648670 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1137798973 One of the takeaways I had from the video is that when your writing dialogue you should write it in a way that matches that characters personality. I also learned that when you put dialogue into a paper you are writing you have to start a new paragraph.]]> 2021-01-28 18:04:34 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1137798973 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1137889680 A takeaway I had from the Brainpop video is that the dialogue should actually be what someone would say, not a boring plain sentence that no one would ever say. Also you want the dialogue to tell something about the person - what he/she says will tell the reader about his/her personality.]]> 2021-01-28 18:20:34 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1137889680 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1138162456 One takeaway I had from the Brain-pop video is that you need to add spice to your dialogue to define characteristics of the people in the story. You don't want them to say something plain and generic, you want it to express the person speaking.]]> 2021-01-28 19:11:55 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1138162456 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1138217242 One thing I learned from the brain pop is that dialogue adds to the characters personality and it helps you imagine what they are like and get a mental picture.]]> 2021-01-28 19:22:30 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1138217242 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1187325467 One take away I had from the Brain Pop was that you need to make your dialogue sound natural and capture their personality and not sound so much of like a robot and not have their personality.]]> 2021-02-10 13:47:41 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1187325467 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1187344755 One takeaway I learned from the brain pop is that when writing a line for a character, add the characteristicsas and their personalities to the line so it seems like something that person would actually say.]]> 2021-02-10 13:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1187344755 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1187675532 One thing that I learned from the Brain pop is that when someone says something it is easier to know who it is if you say there name. Another thing I learned is you want the words to reveal their personality.]]> 2021-02-10 14:48:58 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1187675532 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1188770285 One thing I learned from the brain pop is that dialogue expresses your personalities. It is also easier for you to know how someone is feeling and who is talking.]]> 2021-02-10 17:47:39 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1188770285 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1188775541 one thing that i heard is to add more personality to my writing by how they acted when they are saying something.]]> 2021-02-10 17:48:26 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1188775541 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1188789220 one thing i learned from the brain pop is that dialogue can express personalities by how they say whatever they said.]]> 2021-02-10 17:50:48 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1188789220 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1188860076 One thing that I learned is, when using dialogue when people say something it should show what their personalities are.]]> 2021-02-10 18:03:03 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1188860076 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1189152769 One thing I learned from the brainpop is, when using dialogue you should use dialogue that will show their personalities and what someone would realistically say.]]> 2021-02-10 18:53:57 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1189152769 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1189169121 One thing I learned from the brainpop is that your dialogue needs to sound natural with the persons personality.]]> 2021-02-10 18:56:59 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1189169121 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1189173621 One thing that I took away from the brain pop is that when you write how someone feels in a story or book it shows their personality.]]> 2021-02-10 18:57:49 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1189173621 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1189178495 One thing I learned was that it needs to sound more realistic, as if they actually saw a shark, for example, "is....that...a....shark...?"]]> 2021-02-10 18:58:43 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1189178495 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1192283784 One thing that I took away from that is you have to be really realistic about what you say.]]> 2021-02-11 14:02:31 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1192283784 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1192607995 I learned that you should use words that people would actually say or said, not telling us what is happening.]]> 2021-02-11 14:58:20 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1192607995 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1192645182 I learned that you should use words that would make the dialogue more realistic. ]]> 2021-02-11 15:04:49 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1192645182 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1192651511 One thing I learned is that Dialogue should sound natural and sound realilistic. ]]> 2021-02-11 15:05:56 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1192651511 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1192717853 You should make it clear who is saying that by putting their name before, after, or in the middle of the dialog, and start a new paragraph each time someone different speaks.]]> 2021-02-11 15:17:07 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1192717853 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1193821124 One thing I took away from the brainpop is not to make it sound like something a person wouldn't saya and the dialogue should sound flowy and natural and not choppy like instead of "it is a butterfly." it should say. " Oh my goodness, look it's a pretty butterfly!"]]> 2021-02-11 18:18:02 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1193821124 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211175052 I learned that every few pieces of dialog you need to make a new paragraph and also to make things that people say sound realistic and sound like something a person would say]]> 2021-02-17 14:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211175052 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211363632 2021-02-17 14:47:03 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211363632 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211371716  ]]> 2021-02-17 14:48:44 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211371716 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211377654 I learned that when writing dialogue you should make what they are saying sound realistic. AS if they actually said that, not something that is very obvious.]]> 2021-02-17 14:50:08 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211377654 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211397555 I learned that you should use more excitement or emotion in your dialogue. To make it sound more real.]]> 2021-02-17 14:54:27 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211397555 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211433632 One thing I learned is that you should start a new paragraph and that you should also not write something that no on would say. ]]> 2021-02-17 15:02:11 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1211433632 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1212543471   I learned was when you write dialogue it should be by it's self and you put emotion into the dialogue you write. When your writing you make the dialogue sound like something that person would say.

]]> 2021-02-17 18:59:05 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1212543471 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1212559752 One thing I took from that video is that your dialog should sound natural and be something you would actually say.

]]> 2021-02-17 19:02:41 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1212559752 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1212628987 One take away that I have is that you have to make your characters emotions and personality show in what they say and do, sure you could say something boring and something that is used a lot like "She was mad" or you could show that by making the character sound mad like "You are the single most annoying thing in the world!"]]> 2021-02-17 19:18:40 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1212628987 27rpfaff https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1218866857 2021-02-19 14:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1218866857 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1219082850 One take away from the brainpop video is that you have to start a new paragraph when a new person starts talking.]]> 2021-02-19 14:59:55 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1219082850 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1220043220 One take away was that you have to start a new paragraph and that dialogue should be something that you would say that expresses how you are.]]> 2021-02-19 18:58:43 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1220043220 27erader https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1220046632 I learned that when someone else starts to talk that you should start a another paragraph.
 ]]> 2021-02-19 18:59:37 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1220046632 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1227803492 I learned that when someone would say something you can make it sound more loud or more seriously.]]> 2021-02-22 17:48:07 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1227803492 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1227993358 I learned basic rules to dialogue like that you need to start a new paragraph when there is dialogue. Most importantly though, Moby says beep. ]]> 2021-02-22 18:21:29 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1227993358 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1228091845 I learned that when you write you always have to add a new paragraph every time someone starts talking.]]> 2021-02-22 18:38:52 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1228091845 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1228123093 I learned that when someone talks you should make it sound like something that person would say]]> 2021-02-22 18:44:31 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1228123093 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1228294780 I learned that you have to not only put quotation marks after people speak and also to make it sound realistic.]]> 2021-02-22 19:16:24 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1228294780 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1228330423 I learned that even if it's grammaticly correct it might not be how they would say it.]]> 2021-02-22 19:23:12 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1228330423 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232705751 2021-02-23 17:35:30 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232705751 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232761394 You can tell who the characters are and you can know more about them.]]> 2021-02-23 17:44:59 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232761394 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232780212 I learned that you have to revile the character's thoughts and feelings in the dialogue.]]> 2021-02-23 17:48:13 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232780212 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232892468 One thing I learned is that the dialogue you use should reflect the characters personality, and that you should start a new paragraph when someone new starts talking.]]> 2021-02-23 18:07:30 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232892468 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232928183 I learned that you shouldn't just put a dialogue on whatever. You should use a certain dialogue if that is what someone would say in real life. Also let their dialogue connect with the characters personality and add emotion. ]]> 2021-02-23 18:13:51 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232928183 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232969373 I learned that dialogue is supposed develope a character and supposed to sound like something the character would say.]]> 2021-02-23 18:21:07 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1232969373 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1233249803 When a new character starts talking you need to start a new paragraph.]]> 2021-02-23 19:10:18 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1233249803 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1237525458 You could said what it is like when Tim said "It is a shark" you could say the and "Was that fin huge". ]]> 2021-02-24 17:33:31 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1237525458 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1237627362 one thing I toke away was that your word]]> 2021-02-24 17:51:59 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1237627362 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1237866472 one thing I took away is that you have to express the persons feeling through the dialogue ]]> 2021-02-24 18:36:43 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1237866472 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1237896571 one thing I took away is that every character will react different.]]> 2021-02-24 18:42:13 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1237896571 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1238125952 You need the tell the reader when someone different is talking]]> 2021-02-24 19:27:07 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1238125952 27bceol https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1242346371 Something that i took away from the Brain Pop Is that when a character says something like "Its a shark". You have to make the character say things the way their personality is. So instead you could say "Wasn't that fin huge"!]]> 2021-02-25 17:47:55 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1242346371 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1242639085 2021-02-25 18:41:21 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1242639085 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1254489805 Something I took away from the brainpop that to add dialogue you need to start a new paragraph.]]> 2021-03-01 17:41:35 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1254489805 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1254496766 Something that I took away from the brainpop video was, that you need to put dialogue in quotation marks. Lastly you need to make it sound like something the character would say.]]> 2021-03-01 17:42:47 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1254496766 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1254858139 You should try to make the people sound more alive.]]> 2021-03-01 18:44:00 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1254858139 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1254883408 One take away I had is that the dialogue should reveal the personality of the speaker. The dialogue should help the reader learn more about the character.]]> 2021-03-01 18:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1254883408 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1255035015 One thing I took away was that when you write down a word your saying to someone or saying to yourself you should make it like the mood the character is in. The dialogue should tell the reader how the character is acting at that time.]]> 2021-03-01 19:16:07 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1255035015 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1255049830 One thing i took away was that if your dialogue is chopie people wont want to read it and it wont sound real]]> 2021-03-01 19:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1255049830 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1258344621 You should add more detail so that the reader knows what going on.]]> 2021-03-02 13:59:55 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1258344621 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1258355542 The most important thing in dialogue is to make sure it sounds natural. ]]> 2021-03-02 14:01:42 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1258355542 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1258880681 Express what the person that is tallking, is feeling, instead of just saying that they are bored or mad.]]> 2021-03-02 15:25:19 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1258880681 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1260208337 the thing that is most important to me is to give the character's personality. ex- "Look at the lion" to "the lions are so cool!"]]> 2021-03-02 19:05:09 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1260208337 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1263678117 in the brainpop was to make it sound real and interesting to listen to.]]> 2021-03-03 13:47:29 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1263678117 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1263698387 I learned that when a new person is talking you start a new sentence.]]> 2021-03-03 13:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1263698387 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1265152774 One thing that I took away from the BrainPop video is that you should make dialogue sound like the person would actually say that.]]> 2021-03-03 17:53:30 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1265152774 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1265161096 The best thing that i took away from the video was to make your dialogue sound as natural as possible. ]]> 2021-03-03 17:54:52 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1265161096 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1265201312 i learned you should put some dialogue and make it sound real or it does not work]]> 2021-03-03 18:02:12 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1265201312 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1265600741 One takeaway I had from the brainpop is that you should make your dialogue sound natural and something that person would say realistically. For example, instead of saying, "I am sad." You can say, "Tears ran down my face while I sat alone on the bench during recess." or something like that. ]]> 2021-03-03 19:13:27 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1265600741 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1269073804 I learned that dialogue helps your story sound real.]]> 2021-03-04 14:12:09 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1269073804 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1270402426 I learned to start a new paragraph every times someone new is talking]]> 2021-03-04 17:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1270402426 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1270452957 I learned that the most important thing is to make dialog seem natural.]]> 2021-03-04 18:01:26 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1270452957 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1270795935 One thing that i took away from the brainpop was to make what the characters say more natural and seem like actually talking instead of the just plain narrating.And i also learned how to make dialogue grammatically correct.  ]]> 2021-03-04 19:01:55 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1270795935 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1273585237 One take away I had from the Brain Pop video is that make characters say what they would say in real-life.]]> 2021-03-05 13:50:42 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1273585237 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1273683505 One thing i learn from the brain pop is that you should make the people who are talking say what they would actually say in that situation.]]> 2021-03-05 14:12:33 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1273683505 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1275092461 Something, I learned from the Brain Pop Video was Dialogue makes your story seem more detailed and to make it seem more natural
.]]> 2021-03-05 18:51:12 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1275092461 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1275093906 to make dialogue seem real ]]> 2021-03-05 18:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1275093906 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1282057187 to make sound more like someone and to make it sound real]]> 2021-03-08 13:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1282057187 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1282191997 2021-03-08 14:18:50 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1282191997 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1282500206 What i took away from the video is that when you make dialogue you have to make a new paragraph and you have to make the character feel more excited and realistic.]]> 2021-03-08 15:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1282500206 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1283966943 I learned that you have to be more energetic like taking that was a huge shak fin to that was a realy bid shark or we need to leave NOW]]> 2021-03-08 19:06:29 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1283966943 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1288019796 I learned to be more energetic with my writing.]]> 2021-03-09 15:15:44 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1288019796 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1297925037 I learned that you should only say dialogue like somebody would say it. Instead of saying this, "Look, Its a shark." 
Instead, say this, "Oh my god! It's a shark! Get out of the water! NOW!" ]]> 2021-03-11 13:41:37 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1297925037 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1297963754 I learned that I need to add feeling and emotion to my writing.]]> 2021-03-11 13:48:53 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1297963754 https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1299743673 what i took away that you can take talking and make it more complex in you paragraph ]]> 2021-03-11 19:00:38 UTC https://padlet.com/madonna_wheeler/rjfwnugbndny/wish/1299743673