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      <title>Ask Any Question About Your Hamilton Paper. by RONALD DONN</title>
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         <title>FROM MR. DONN</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>UPDATE:  MLA IN-TEXT CITATION SOURCE!</p><p><a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="https://courses.lumenlearning.com/wm-writingskillslab/chapter/the-conventions-of-citations-and-references/">https://courses.lumenlearning.com/wm-writingskillslab/chapter/the-conventions-of-citations-and-references/</a> </p><p><br/></p><p>Make your question as specific as possible, including the sentence or sentences you wish to ask about. <mark>I simply can't respond to "Will you look at my paper?"</mark> </p><p><br/></p><p>Here are some examples of questions you can leave here:</p><p>--&gt; Does this sentence integrate the quote correctly?</p><p>--&gt; Is this a comma splice? </p><p>--&gt; Is this Thesis narrow enough?</p><p>--&gt; Does this statement make sense?</p><p>--&gt;How do I use parenthetical citation with...[insert source example]</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>Review the Day 1 through Day 7 materials to review and revise you paper before leaving a comment!  </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-02 15:56:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <author>ShokoAsahara</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Am I required to have a title for my paper?</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 15:17:48 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Titling</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>How do I make a title that sums up and engages the reader.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>How do I correctly create a works cited page?</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 15:19:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <author>camrynrodgers</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>What exactly do I need to get a perfect score on this assignment?</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>i need more time for the revision </p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>How is this paper going to better my education in English?</p>]]></description>
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         <author>destinybrown25</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>How long is too long for a thesis?</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 15:32:02 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hamilton</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Is this title appropriate?</p><p>"The Inaccuracy of <em>Hamilton"</em> </p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>could i get an example of a proper works cited page?</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 15:32:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Is this a good title: Is it Ham or Spam?</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>How exactly is the best way to incorporate my given historical sources that don't assist the point of my main point? is it necessary to include even if it takes away from said point? </p>]]></description>
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         <title>Is my thesis a good response to the prompt?</title>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 15:35:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>was it okay to focus on the satire?</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 15:36:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Does my thesis properly connect to the rest of my essay?</title>
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         <title>Is there a limit or requirement for how many secondary sources we can use?</title>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 15:39:46 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Blending Quotes</title>
         <author>emmawillrich</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Would it be bad for you to start a sentence with a quote, even if it is fully blended into the sentence?</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 18:54:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>How do I smooth the transition between two stacked quotes?</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 18:54:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <author>akeelahcole</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Did I cite my sources properly in my Essay after my Evidences? </p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Does my thesis need to be heavy in detail.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>How can i blend my evidence better to cover multiple sources?</p>]]></description>
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         <title>May you provide a good example of a hook sentence?</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Should there be more explaining/expanding after each quote of evidence, or should it be condensed in the analysis section of the paragraphs?</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Is my evidence correctly incorporated? </title>
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         <title>how is the ending for the conclusion. should I change it ?</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>&nbsp;One thing I loved about this musical is how Lin-Manuel Miranda had put his own twist into&nbsp; history made by our forefathers.&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-12 19:00:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>How do i blend my evidence together, if im using more than one source? </p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>How do I create a title that encompasses the paper and interest the reader?</p>]]></description>
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         <author>rebeccagarciaponce</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>We are limited on the number amount of resources to use for our research?</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>how do you quote multiple quotes after another? do you use semicolons or commas to separate them? </p>]]></description>
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         <title>Citing</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>How do you cite a song lyric correctly?</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-13 12:01:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>HELLO!!! so I feel like my paper lacks bigger words and doesn't follow through smoothly how can I fix it.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-13 13:35:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Quotations</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Does using multiple quotes in a sentence count to the citation count required or is just one citation?</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-13 14:27:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>How can I tell if a source is unreliable or false?</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>How do I know if I'm rambling on the same thing in my essay, or making good points?</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Thesis</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Is my thesis good? Thesis: &nbsp;Lin-Manuel Miranda’s <em>Hamilton: An American Musical </em>emphasizes and minimizes traits of Alexander Hamilton to craft an allegorical reflection on personal perception, illustrating how individuals selectively shape identity and legacy based on ambition insecurity, and the desire to control how they are remembered.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Can we use sources outside of the one that you provided? If so, how do we determine if it is a good source?</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Mr Donn about the copy and past thing i lost the original document i typed everything out on is it okay if i retype it or is that against the rules</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Is this an appropriate title? &quot;A Good Story or An Inaccurate Portrayal&quot;</title>
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         <title>Original Documents. </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I read and viewed your comments. You said my writing looks original, but I didn't contain documents with my original writing. I thought my revision history was complete, but you said it wasn't. How can I fix my paper?</p>]]></description>
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