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         <title>Xavier &amp; Daniel </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Many Australians believe that the time of the invasion is not worth celebrating. <del>However, celebration with thousands of others on January 26 has a quite different reason  </del><mark>However, thousands of others celebrate January 26 as they feel </mark>that Australia is a great country to live in. According to Robert Isaacs who is an Aboriginal elder, Australia Day brings the community together. It brings <del>the </del>Australians together and celebrates the welfare this country has provided. Some argue that Australia Day is not so great for many aborigines. It is true that this should never be forgotten. However, protesting about the date <del>and</del> <mark>of Australia</mark> Day will not provide support for these aborigines most in need. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-12-03 23:25:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Steven &amp; Blake</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Although what happened on invasion day is not <mark>considered by many</mark> worth celebrating, there are a considerable number of reasons <mark>for celebrating Australia Day. </mark>One is to retain this traditional festival due to the fact that Australia is a great country to reside <mark>in.</mark> According to Isaacs, Australia Day unifies communities and citizens as well as<del> is</del>  <mark>being</mark> the day for appreciating what this country has <del>offered</del><mark>. to offer. </mark>It could be argued that this day leads to the aborigines' painful memories. However, this protest is unrelated to the protection of<mark> the </mark>original inhabitants.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-12-03 23:25:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Calvin, Celia </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Opponents argue that the national day <del>of invasion</del> is unworthy to celebrate <mark>as it is Invasion Day,</mark> while proponents cliam<mark>(sp)</mark> that thousands of Australians are willing to celebrate on January 26 due to this desirable country.  Isaacs states that the national day provides an opportunity for residents to gather together and celebrate the benefits which <mark>are </mark>offered by Australia. Although Australia is a multicultural country, it is <mark>not suitable???</mark> for Aboriginal people <del>living</del>, which has become a serious concern in Australian society.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-12-03 23:26:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mike &amp; Peter</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><del>As</del>  <mark>While </mark>what happened during the invasion is unworthy to celebrate<mark> for some,</mark> there are several <del>factors that contribute to celebrate</del> <mark> reasons for celebrating the </mark>National Day on January 26 with others. According to Robert <mark>Isaacs</mark>, <mark>the </mark>National Day brings a great opportunity for Australians to  celebrate together <del>for benefits provides </del><mark> the benefits provided</mark> by this country. Some argue that this invasion might be a nightmare for aboriginal people. However, the protest for the date and Australia Day<mark> may not support native people. ???</mark></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-12-03 23:26:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Richard &amp; Cassie</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Although Invasion Day is not a cause for celebration for many, thousands of citizens celebrate together on January 26 for a quite different reason<mark>, which is</mark> that Australia is a great country to live in. Robert Isaacs who is an Aboriginal elder claims that Australia Day brings the community and Australian residents together and<del> it</del> celebrates the benefits this country has provided for the public. Some argue that it is not great for a considerable number of Aboriginal inhabitants. However,<del> </del><mark><del>Tt</del></mark>here is not a direct link between protesting about the date and assisting those Aboriginal dwellers in need.  <mark>Good job!</mark></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-12-03 23:26:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Cecilia &amp; Jin</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Many argue that it is unworthy to celebrate on <mark>In</mark>vasion<del> day,</del>  <mark>Day; h</mark>owever, there are several reasons to maintain the national day. This is due to the fact that Australia is a multicultural country and <mark>the</mark> national day may bring the community together ( Robert Isaacs). It is true that it could have <mark>an </mark>adverse impact on aborigines and invasion day should never be forgotten. However, protesting about the date may not have <mark>a </mark>significant effect on supporting aborigines.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-12-03 23:26:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Boyce&amp;Emi</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Although the critics warn that it is cruel  to celebrate <del>the</del> January 26 as a national<br>day for aborigines，<mark> there are a number of reasons supporting to keep it based on Australia is a great country. ?? confusing sentence structure</mark> Firstly, according to Robert Isaacs, it provides a social communication platform to gather citizens together and share the benefits <del>from</del>  of the country. Some opponents claim that it is not appropriate for everyone to <br> </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-12-03 23:26:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Allen &amp; Kevin</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>As <mark>January 26, 1788,</mark> <mark> represents</mark> the time of invasion, <del>most  </del><mark>many </mark>consider that Australia Day <mark>does </mark>not deserve to be celebrated. However, there are a number of reasons for <del>proponents to keep</del>  <mark>celebrating </mark>this date due to the fact that Australia is a <mark>comfortable ?</mark>country to live in.  Robert Isaac states that Australia Day brings community and individuals together and provides considerable benefits to the public. <mark>Although the critics believe that it has some adverse impacts on the Aboriginal people. (half a sentence)</mark></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-12-03 23:27:12 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ray &amp; Dave</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is clear that <mark>some</mark> citizens consider the time of invasion as unworthy of celebration. However<del>, they</del> <mark>many</mark> celebrate on January 26 as Australia is a multicultural country.<del> It</del> <mark>This</mark> is evidenced by Isaacs who indicates that this festival brings the community and <del>the</del> residents together and celebrates the benefits that this country provides. Nevertheless, some critics argue that it is unfriendly<mark>??</mark> to <mark>the</mark> original inhabitants. In spite of the distressing experience for the aborigines that should be remembered, there are several beneficial functions for these citizens to retain the festival.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-12-03 23:49:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <pubDate>2019-12-11 01:43:23 UTC</pubDate>
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