https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s Please post at least 1 thing that stays with you as you hear your fellow Writers share their pieces. This could be a single image or idea. You can also pose question for the Writer to consider. en-us 2020-11-12 13:46:40 UTC 2025-12-14 09:42:26 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918242708 It was very upbeat, I like it.]]> 2020-11-12 19:54:58 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918242708 brunsonn2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918245049 I liked the imagery with the leaves and describing the food as an "overcooked lump."]]> 2020-11-12 19:55:34 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918245049 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918247317 i loved the variety of vocabulary and the conversation was flowing well]]> 2020-11-12 19:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918247317 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918253106 Very clear and good descriptions, really added to the story.]]> 2020-11-12 19:57:30 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918253106 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918254145 Love the story, and how you used the words very diferently ]]> 2020-11-12 19:57:46 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918254145 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918256788 I like how all it took was to trip him.]]> 2020-11-12 19:58:21 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918256788 achanaj2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918258350 I liked the imagery and description]]> 2020-11-12 19:58:46 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918258350 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918264392 Chilling! I like how the cultural meal in the crockpot was the children's parents.]]> 2020-11-12 20:00:12 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918264392 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918269920 that was such a plot twist but it was very interesting i think you should just add more specific details.]]> 2020-11-12 20:01:31 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918269920 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918272020 I love the way this built up, right down to the ending. It was very unnerving. ]]> 2020-11-12 20:02:05 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918272020 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918273439 The end had me shooketh lol I really liked it.]]> 2020-11-12 20:02:28 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918273439 brunsonn2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918273667 I like how it took a different turn than it was in the beginning. ]]> 2020-11-12 20:02:32 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918273667 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918273995 I like the story going wrong . ]]> 2020-11-12 20:02:37 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918273995 achanaj2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918277993 i enjoyed the build up and imgery]]> 2020-11-12 20:03:42 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918277993 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918278728 The attempted murder made me laugh. I've never heard of a crockpot as a murder weapon.]]> 2020-11-12 20:03:54 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918278728 brunsonn2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918279025 I love the sibling relationship between the two. It's so realistic.]]> 2020-11-12 20:03:58 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918279025 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918279102 I love the light comedy having a strong hold in the story! It really shows the dynamic of the family.]]> 2020-11-12 20:03:59 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918279102 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918279582 i like the realistic argument between the siblings but i think this could lead to a longer story and understanding why she doesnt like clowns]]> 2020-11-12 20:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918279582 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918289211 The story was very intense, and the dialogue definitely added to it.]]> 2020-11-12 20:06:39 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918289211 achanaj2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918291191 It was interesting and intense]]> 2020-11-12 20:07:13 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918291191 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918294040 i think that was such a specific and unique scene and i liked the exposition leading up to it.]]> 2020-11-12 20:08:00 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918294040 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918294298 What were the odds of two people using the crockpot as a weapon? I loved the description. ]]> 2020-11-12 20:08:04 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918294298 brunsonn2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918295474 I liked the use of the crockpot as the weapon. It reminds me of the short story "Lamb to the Slaughter" where a piece of food was the murder weapon. ]]> 2020-11-12 20:08:23 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918295474 achanaj2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918298244 it was funny, descriptive, a little creepy]]> 2020-11-12 20:09:09 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918298244 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918298488 I love how the detective isn't as disturbed by the crime scene as you think he'd be!]]> 2020-11-12 20:09:13 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918298488 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918305985 The sequencing was a bit confusing, but the chilling reoccurrence of events kept was really freaky. The last sentence made the piece. It shaped the entire story from one thing to another. I like that. ]]> 2020-11-12 20:11:02 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918305985 brunsonn2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918306320 I love how it was a family event with pictures, then there was a creepy clown photobombing them. Well done!]]> 2020-11-12 20:11:07 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918306320 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918308836 I love the instant visual loneliness! Great plot twist!]]> 2020-11-12 20:11:48 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918308836 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918310015 2020-11-12 20:12:07 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918310015 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918314511 I love the story idea ]]> 2020-11-12 20:13:17 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918314511 achanaj2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918314883 i loved the descriptions, imagery and diction]]> 2020-11-12 20:13:22 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918314883 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918314976 I like how the night was going good, everybody was having fun. Then it was just that eerie feeling at the end because nobody noticed the clown figure all night. good work i like this story.]]> 2020-11-12 20:13:24 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918314976 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918315631 The vast amount of descriptions and word choices were wonderful!]]> 2020-11-12 20:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918315631 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918317954 I liked clown as an insult. I thought about using that. Nice job!]]> 2020-11-12 20:14:10 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918317954 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918326028 This story is told very simply, I like it]]> 2020-11-12 20:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918326028 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918330571 it felt nostalgic, it reminded me of my childhood. I like that the siblings were opposites.]]> 2020-11-12 20:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918330571 achanaj2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918331485 I liked when the characters kept calling each other clowns]]> 2020-11-12 20:17:43 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918331485 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918331528 The way you used the word choices was very unique, good job!]]> 2020-11-12 20:17:44 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918331528 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918333313 I liked the description of a bully and his friends as the devil and his disciples. or is that what it was?]]> 2020-11-12 20:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918333313 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918334085 "herd of demons" really stuck with me but i like that you made it easy to feel sympathetic for the narrator ]]> 2020-11-12 20:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918334085 brunsonn2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918335043 I think it's interesting how their names kind of represent the personalities of the characters. ]]> 2020-11-12 20:18:41 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918335043 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918340406 Are the names of the characters nicknames?]]> 2020-11-12 20:20:09 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918340406 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918344397 This was very well done, I felt so bad for the narrator and the tone was very somber.]]> 2020-11-12 20:21:10 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918344397 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918345748  I like the comparison you use in this story especially the strong words. ]]> 2020-11-12 20:21:31 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918345748 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918350460 I like how you word your stories. This was a simple story but your description in it  is so unique and intriguing. Good work! ]]> 2020-11-12 20:22:47 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918350460 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918356261 Very interesting I could see this being an actual book]]> 2020-11-12 20:24:24 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918356261 https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918359853 I like how it was funny but creepy at the same time. ]]> 2020-11-12 20:25:23 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/rinkmpqkdp5myo5s/wish/918359853