Video Critiques by Sarah Peterson https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9 Glow and Grow en-us 2018-02-10 21:37:43 UTC 2018-04-21 04:00:53 UTC hello@padlet.com Julia Cassidy sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308191 Glow: Your video has a good flow to it and transitions between different parts of the website smoothly. You also spoke very clearly.
Grow: I think it would have been beneficial to show us the kahoot you used in the group project, which also would have made the video a bit longer]]> 2018-02-10 21:39:37 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308191 Sabrina Decio sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308303 Glow: Her video had a good flow to it and went through every aspect of her website smoothly
Grow: I think it would’ve been better for Sabrina to use the presentation mode in her video.]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308303 Liz Dennis sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308313 Glow: I like how Liz showed the technological tools she used in her lesson plan.
Grow: I think Liz could have explained and talked about her responses to the digital dialogs a bit more]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:44 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308313 Tab LaRocca sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308348 Glow: You do a good job of explaining the different elements of your website in depth.
Grow: I think that clicking the group presentation instead of the lesson plan, when talking about the lesson plan may have been a little confusing

]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308348 Daria Marolla sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308375 Glow: Daria’s narration was very clear and she explained all aspect of her website very well.
Grow: I think if Daria zoomed into the digital dialogs, it would’ve been helpful for us to read along.]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:04 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308375 Katie Mauro sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308386 Glow: Katie's narration was very clear and descriptive.
Grow: I think that it would have been beneficial to show us your Powtoon that you made
  
]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308386 Rachel Mayer sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308395 Glow: I like how you cut straight to the point for your digital dialogs and spent just enough time explaining them.
Grow: I think it would have been beneficial for you to show your Playposit video]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:16 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308395 Milan Montelibano sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308410 Glow: I liked how descriptive your explanations of your Symbaloo was.
Grow: I think taking advantage of being able to pause in the video recording would be good to avoid mistakes

]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:21 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308410 Alexa Morbelli sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308434 Glow: Alexa gives a good description of each program she used on her website.
Grow: I think Alexa could have gone a little bit more in depth with her digital dialogs]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308434 Olivia Nasisi sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308463 Glow: It is clear that Olivia practiced her narration for the video and had a script to follow.
Grow: I think Olivia could have spent less time talking about the digital dialogs]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308463 Adassa Nedd sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308494 Glow: You spoke very clearly in your video and I enjoyed hearing about you personal connections and experiences
Grow: I think it would have been beneficial to see your website during your video so that we could follow along

]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308494 Shannon O'Brien sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308517 Glow: I like how you used multiple technology tools in your lesson plan.
Grow: I think you should have shown more of your Playposit video to us.

]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:57 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308517 Angel Tello sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308528 N/A]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:02 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308528 Hannah Tinney sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308546 Glow: I like how Hannah went into depth about how technology grant an explained its importance.
Grow: I think that Hannah should have showed and talked about her Symbaloo. ]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308546 Delaney Trotter sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308572 Glow: I really like that you gave lengthy explanations and descriptions of each assignment and project we did in class
Grow: I would spend a little less time on the digital dialogs

]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308572 Claudia Valverde sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308579 Glow: I personally liked hearing about your technology grants and how you would improve the classroom with the different tools you wrote about.
Grow: The video seemed a bit lengthy. 

]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308579 Carly Weshner sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308592 Glow: Carly spoke very clearly and was straight to the point in her video.
Grow: Carly could have given more of a description of her lesson plan and group project]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308592 Nikki Phillips sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308607 Glow: I really like how you organized your symbaloo and digital identity into different categories and explained how you did in your video.
Grow: I think it would have been a little more beneficial if you used more of a script for your video.]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308607 Lou Santamaria sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308658 Glow: I like how you included a box in the corner of his recording.
Grow: The video and some explanations seemed to be a bit lengthy

]]> 2018-02-10 21:43:06 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308658 Maria Benevia sarah_peterson4 https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308835 Glow: I think that Maria showed all of the necessary information and spoke very clearly.
Grow: Maria could have given more of a description and explanation on some aspects of her website, which also would have made her video longer.]]> 2018-02-10 21:44:33 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_peterson4/ri7ys17o1as9/wish/230308835