https://padlet.com/23jabate/rhh91x7u67rz Welcome to my Padlet, leave a comment (I need fans) en-us 2018-02-01 14:15:39 UTC 2026-02-26 20:32:39 UTC hello@padlet.com 23zchung https://padlet.com/23jabate/rhh91x7u67rz/wish/237392762 Star: I like how you compared and contrasted the two essays since the information you had presented was really good at comparing the two articles even though they were very similar.
Star: I also like how you had made the warrants and data based off your claims very clear. 
Wish: In the future, I suggest that you use more transition phrases/words since it would make your essay flow a lot better and smoothly.
-Zach C]]> 2018-03-02 14:06:02 UTC https://padlet.com/23jabate/rhh91x7u67rz/wish/237392762 23rdamania https://padlet.com/23jabate/rhh91x7u67rz/wish/237447288 Star: I liked how you had so many similes. It made your writing piece really descriptive. 
Star: I like how you added a unique voice to John.
Wish: In the future you should watch out for which "tense" you are in. I noticed that at one point you used present tense when you should have used past tense.
-Rushil D.]]> 2018-03-02 15:35:26 UTC https://padlet.com/23jabate/rhh91x7u67rz/wish/237447288 23rhall https://padlet.com/23jabate/rhh91x7u67rz/wish/246879266 Hey Jason! I really liked your article, it was really funny and exciting.If I had any wish for you, it would be that you made a little more punctuation errors, otherwise good job and I can't wait to read more.]]> 2018-03-28 13:17:31 UTC https://padlet.com/23jabate/rhh91x7u67rz/wish/246879266