https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz Choose one group response to respond to. 1. What is one thing you liked? 2. What is one criticism you have? 3. What is one question you have for the group? en-us 2016-09-01 12:46:34 UTC 2016-09-02 12:54:52 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121302837 Very good detail!! The explanation of  your topic was clearly stated

Some word and phrases were used multiple times, including the explanations which seemed to be mentioned more than once or twice ]]> 2016-09-02 12:38:01 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121302837 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121302842 2016-09-02 12:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121302842 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303011 Lots of information! Some good details from the text and the topic was explained well. I would make sure to not repeat as many wordss]]> 2016-09-02 12:38:50 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303011 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303112 I thought your conclusion was very well written and wrapped up the response nicely. One thing I thought u could improve on is making your two main paragraphs more easy to follow.]]> 2016-09-02 12:39:17 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303112 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303177 I agree with your explanation. You used good quotes to decribe your interpretation of the message of the poem.]]> 2016-09-02 12:39:36 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303177 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303211 You explained the fact that the capital letters reinforces equality and other themes well. But, many phrases were said multiple times. ]]> 2016-09-02 12:39:45 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303211 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303358 the response is good but the information needs to go further so the reader is able to understand what point youre trying to make. also there are some slight grammar issues that need to be fixed. if you ]]> 2016-09-02 12:40:27 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303358 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303396 I liked the points you made about how the signifigance of the capital letters and how they related to the quotes. You should elaborate more and add some examples and more details. ]]> 2016-09-02 12:40:35 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303396 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303551
I really liked how detailed you were and how you used the details and quotes from the poem to back up your response.  The grammar was a little rusty ("and amazing country"), so maybe another read through would have been beneficial. I was wondering how ]]> 2016-09-02 12:41:11 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303551 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303666 I enjoyed reading both explanations of how the poem related to events or figures from history. It was very helpful that you put two different events because some might not understand one of the events. I think you could have shorten]]> 2016-09-02 12:41:42 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303666 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303710 I liked how you pointed out each stanza that was important. It was kind of confusing when]]> 2016-09-02 12:41:54 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303710 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303757 2016-09-02 12:42:07 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303757 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303777 I agree with your group's opinion. Your response contains strong details and reasoning. Although you should explain the message behind the poem. ]]> 2016-09-02 12:42:14 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303777 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303804 It was very detailed and descriptive. Also the hand writing was very neat. I ]]> 2016-09-02 12:42:23 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303804 cmanz https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303857 Really liked how they explained everything in detail. It was a bit repetitive ]]> 2016-09-02 12:42:41 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303857 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303862 There is a lot of good supporting details 
But you need to explain what the plow is not just the meaning of the song]]> 2016-09-02 12:42:42 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303862 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303872 I really liked your use of the imagery in the poem, for example the hand analogy. ]]> 2016-09-02 12:42:45 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303872 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303878 Praise: t's very detailed and answered the question of what was the audience well. It included many quotes from the text to prove their point. 
Critism: It had very poor grammar and at some points didn't make sne]]> 2016-09-02 12:42:47 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303878 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303887 I was confused with the answer to the first question. But I thought you gave good evidence as had a great ending statement]]> 2016-09-02 12:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303887 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303897 It was very good but it also had some bad in it but all and all it was]]> 2016-09-02 12:42:51 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121303897 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304030 The essay was clear and concise, by using direct quotes from the poem and having multiple details to back your point about what the plow represented. However, I feel that you could elaborate on your response when using quotations from the text. ]]> 2016-09-02 12:43:29 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304030 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304041 if you were to add more information on the topic the outlook and the information quality would be better. you made some good points but it was almost hard to understand]]> 2016-09-02 12:43:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304041 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304101 It had some very good details and good choices for excerpts. ]]> 2016-09-02 12:43:50 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304101 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304113 It was detailed and descriptive and whoever wrote it had good handwriting and had some good details in it ]]> 2016-09-02 12:43:53 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304113 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304122 points are supported with clear evidence from the text.it has exact quotes from the text and relates them to real life history and situations ]]> 2016-09-02 12:43:56 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304122 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304126 Many strong details about the plow and how it connected to freedom. ]]> 2016-09-02 12:43:57 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304126 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304177 I agree with the points and idea but u need to explain more about the plow and u need to have more examples than just the plow.]]> 2016-09-02 12:44:10 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304177 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304267 I agree with the points made and I thought that it was explained nicely. However, one thing that I noticed was that paragraph one was a bit long and it could have been shortened. Other than that, I thought it was really good.]]> 2016-09-02 12:44:39 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304267 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304289 They have good details and quotes from the poem, and includes lots of helpful information.]]> 2016-09-02 12:44:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304289 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304305 I liked how you put in the important stanzas. It was confusing about what the first paragraph was talking about.]]> 2016-09-02 12:44:54 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304305 cmanz https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304314 points are clear and well developed and i liked the exact quotes]]> 2016-09-02 12:44:57 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304314 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304456 I like how you gave
a lot of reasoning. But some of the word]]> 2016-09-02 12:45:39 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304456 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304542 The essay was clear and concise, by using direct quotes from the poem and having multiple details to back your point about what the plow represented. However, I feel that you could elaborate on your response when using quotations from the text.]]> 2016-09-02 12:46:07 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304542 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304551 Praise: it was very detailed and answered the question very well. They added many quotes that helped prove ]]> 2016-09-02 12:46:08 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304551 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304555 I like how the essay had supporting details about the Cold War and how it relates to th poem. But I think you could have used shorter quotes, or cut up the long one you wrote]]> 2016-09-02 12:46:09 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304555 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304597 the essay was very good and informational but some parts of it were a bit repetetive and when there are supporting details you should try to list them to help the reader really understand what you are saying about the supporting deat]]> 2016-09-02 12:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304597 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304599 I agree with your answer and you also contain good supporting details. ]]> 2016-09-02 12:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304599 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304619 I thought your response was very well written. I feel that you used words that really helped the reader understand what you were trying to convey. One thing I thought u could improve on is really answering the question you were given. I feel you kinda went off topic a little bit but overall very good job!]]> 2016-09-02 12:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304619 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304640 The essay was clear and concise, by using direct quotes from the poem and having multiple details to back your point about what the plow represented. However, I feel that you could elaborate on your response when using quotations from the text. What would be another example of the freedom plow symbolism from the text.]]> 2016-09-02 12:46:29 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304640 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304656 Good detail and includes supporting details]]> 2016-09-02 12:46:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304656 cmanz https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304699 i thought  that  the response  itself was good because you put alot of details but you didnt really talk about who the intended audience was.   ]]> 2016-09-02 12:46:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304699 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304719 Reasoning was clear and precise. I think you could have shortened some of the quotes. Details went very into depth and really helped the readers understand the situation! Awesome job! ]]> 2016-09-02 12:46:47 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304719 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304780 I loved in the beginning you used the word "reinforced" an that hit the nail right on the head. And how you said this poem was o encourage people and I agree with that very much. And I think overall you had a great response.]]> 2016-09-02 12:47:02 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304780 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304881 Praise: it was very detailed and answered the question very well. They also added many quotes ]]> 2016-09-02 12:47:22 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304881 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304952 You explained the question very well and you had good details 

]]> 2016-09-02 12:47:42 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121304952 https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121305086 you have very good supporting details but ]]> 2016-09-02 12:48:25 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/rebzkzrf5zfz/wish/121305086