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         <title>Nada</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>This essay will describe the endangered animals in the UAE.This animal could be found in UAE (Abudhabi)specially in hot places like inter-dune compact soils.  <br>The animal is:Spiny-tailed lizard, are type of large lizards That can live for up to 80 years and grow to 65cm in length, it has a spiny tail which it will use in its defence. They are able to changes their skin colour!<br><br><strong><mark>Please re-do</mark></strong></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:25:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Dhabia Nasser Alfalasi</title>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:30:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mariam Ahmed</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The following essay will describe the Arabian Leopard that is endangered in the UAE. This animal can be found in Ras Al Khaima in the peak of the mountains in the UAE.<br><mark>you can move on the next paragraph </mark><br><br>The Arabian leopard's fur varies from pale yellow to deep golden, tawny or grey colour and is patterned with rosettes. Males have a head to body length of about 182 cm and weigh about 30 kg; females are 160–192 cm long and weigh around 20 kg.  <mark>(Very good description)<br><br></mark>Main threats to the Arabian leopardare habitat loss and fragmentation is overhunting of its prey species and killing of leopards due to livestock depredation.<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>Rahayef Sultan</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><mark>An</mark> endangered animal which is found in the UAE is the Hawksbill turtle .<mark>The endagered animal is We can found them in Oceans and beach.  there is too much of information.  <br>This animal can be found in Abu Dahbi , Dubai and sharja ( sir Bu nair island)in the UAE.<br><br>They are small to medium sized sea turtle with gorgeous amber colored . Their shell are V-shaped with overlapping thick bony plates they are usually golden brown with layer of orange , red and black . The bottom of the shell is a light yellow. Unique ti hawksbill sea turtles is a pair of claws on each flipper.<br><br>Sea turtle and their habitats are protected by UAE Federal Law No. 23 and 24 of 1999. The UAE </mark></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:32:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alya Mohammed </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>There are lots of endangered animals around the world but I will be writing about the Arabian oryx which is also named as the white oryx, it's found in the westren Uae desert.  <mark>it has medium size body, long sharp straight horns and tall straight tail, it's found in the desert.  This information needs to be in paragraph one. <br>You need to say where the White Oryx is found .<br><br></mark> The Arabian oryx has a medium size body, long sharp straight horns on its head, on both males and females and a long<mark> tail. </mark>it has white fur with dark brown/black markings and brown tall four legs <mark>four tall legs</mark>,  their <mark>there</mark> maximum grow <mark>height </mark> is over three feet at the shoulder and weight up to 150 lbs. <mark>Please write in short sentences.<br><br></mark>They loss thier habitat due to the development that playes a large role in the extinction of the Arabian oryx species. The second reason is the uncontrolled hunting in wild. There are more than 1000 Arabian oryx in the wild, with 6000-7000 held in the captivity worldwide like: zoos, preserves and private collection.<mark><br></mark><br></div>]]></description>
         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:32:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ghala Mhammed </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The following essay will describe in depth the Arabian Leopard, which is an endangered Animal that is found in the UAE. <br><mark>Perfect introduction - please move to the the next paragrapgh<br><br></mark><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:33:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>An Example</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div> The following essay will describe in detail the endangered animal which is found in the UAE.  The endangered animal is ________________.  This animal can be found in certain places in the UAE, more specifically in Al Ain.  </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:35:24 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alyaziya Badir</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>There are a lot of endangered animals in UAE such as Arabian leopard . It can be found in hot places like Jebel Hafeet and AlHajar Mountains . <mark>The Arabian leopard is large and powerful cats and they have yellow to deep golden fur patterned with rosettes .</mark><strong><mark>this needs to be in the next paragraph</mark></strong></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:39:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mariam jasim hassan</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>There are a lot of animals which are suffering from habitat loss which are caused by humans, this essay will be  explaining  in briefly  about the wildlife animal in the UAE which is the Arabian Leopard,  you can find the Arabian Leopard in the <mark>northern</mark> Emirates.<br><br><mark>The</mark> Arabian leopard fur color varies from yellow to deep golden, it <mark>has</mark>  short legs and a long body<mark>. The Arabian leopard    weights from 28-60 kg. T</mark>he Arabian leopard are famous by their color and the spots on their body.They  feed on gazelle,rock hyrax, birds,insects.</div>]]></description>
         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:39:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sara jasim </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div> This  essay will describe in detail about the endangered animal which is found in the UAE, in AbuDhabi  desert. One of the  endangered animal in AbuDhabi desert is poor rare ruble fox.  (<mark>Please re-start the intro)<br></mark>The rare ruble fox fur color varies from pale yellow to tawny or grey color it also has a dark front legs that look like little opera gloves.They also can be tricky,female rare foxes give birth to 2-12 pups.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:43:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Maitha Ibrahim</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Living in the UAE with the very hot desert climate can definitely cause a lot of deaths of living things either plants of animals , and that can cause  animals to become endangered <mark>(incorrect grammar)</mark> animals (sp)on the lands of the UAE ,  the following essay will be describing the <br>Arabian Tahr .<br><br>The Arabian Tahr <mark>it's </mark>a goat like mammals that lives in the Hajar Mountains and Jabal Hafeet in Al Ain , there are only 15 left of them in the UAE ,its the smallest type of in the Tahr family , it lives in small groups that is all about a female , male and a kid , the Arabian Tahr have a stocky build with a backward arching horn with both female and males . Males are much more stronger then females  , there coats consists  of a long reddish brown hair along with a dark stripe along the back .<br><br>Unfortunately the Arabian Tahr population is decreasing day by day but why ? due to many factors such as hunting illegally , predation ( preying on other animals ) , climate and global changes this all was the cause of only having 15 Arabian tahrs left in the world .<br><br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:46:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aisha Abdulla</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>There are lots of endangered animals which<mark> will </mark> be found in the UAE wildlife.<br>The following essay well be more describe the endangered animals.<br><br>Arabian leopard is a Critically endangered animal,The Arabian leopard's fur varies from pale yellow to deep golden, tawny or gray and is patterned with rosettes, The Arabian leopard is smaller than both African and Persian leopards.It is however the largest cat in the Arabian Peninsula.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:54:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sharifa ali</title>
         <author>2013201391</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The following essay will describe an endangered animal in the UAE, which is Hawksbill Turtle.<mark> (good intro)</mark><br><br>The name Hawksbills is given </div><div>to their narrow, pointed beak. </div><div>They also have a distinctive pattern on their shells </div><div>of overlapping scales that form a serrated-look on the edges. (<mark>Good description)</mark></div><div><br></div><div><mark>These colored and patterned shells make them highly </mark></div><div><mark>desirable and widely advertised in markets as "tortoiseshell." (this is still part of paragraph 1</mark></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:56:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Abrar khalid </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The Hawksbill turtle is ___type of sea turtle which is endangered, it  can be found in Arabian Gulf specifically in Abu Dhabi in Saadiyat Beach. <br><br><mark>its  Start with a capital letter </mark>greenish brown turtle that have overlapping scutes and have a sharp plates, and it may reach up to 3 feet in length and weigh up to 300 pounds<mark>  (end with a full stop)</mark></div><div><br></div><div>The problem they facing is nesting ,they <mark>are not having space to nest because</mark> the rising  temperature is killing the coral reefs that they rely on for food , and also <mark>predoutors</mark> eat the turtles eggs so they don't have the chance to reproduce , and another problem is that there is still people are poaching and over- exploitation them for there skin , meat ,shell because it worth lots of money.  <mark>Please write in sentences.</mark></div>]]></description>
         <pubDate>2020-10-18 08:03:10 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ayaa Mohammad</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>There are a lot of endangered animal in United Arab Eremites,  and one of them it is a Falcon.</strong></div><div><strong>Falcon is a the national bird of UAE and is a symbol of force and courage in Arab tradition and culture.</strong></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 08:05:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Shahad Ahmed</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>There are many endangered animals in the UAE and one of them is the Spiny-tailed lizard, locally known as the “Dhub”. They live up to 80 years in deserts and bushes. </div><div><br></div><div>Spinal-tailed lizards can tolerate intense temperatures and they use their sharp spines on their their tails to defend themselves from predators. They can also change their colors according to their body temperatures. In the morning when they’re cold, they turn dark grey, it helps absorb the heat, warming the lizards up and then it turns them into a sandy beige color which prevents from overheating and camouflage. </div><div><br></div><div>Sadly, the lizard are under a threat and endangered now because of loss of habitat, unsustainable collection for food and dune bashing and pet trading.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 08:11:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Moza Abdulla</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The following essay will describe an endangered animal. Specifically a black rhino.  (W<strong><mark>here is this rhino found?)<br></mark></strong><br><em>The Black Rhinoceros is on the verge of extinction and is listed as critically endangered.They are 1.4-1.8 m tall and about 800-1400 kg in weight. they usually have a pointed upper lip, and two horns that grow up to 1.5 m long and they're mostly gray, not black. To defend their young, females use their horns while males use theirs to strike. </em><em><mark>In Central and Southern Africa, 98 percent of the total Black </mark></em></div><div><em><mark>Rhinoceros population is found in countries such as South Africa, Namibia, Zimibia. The question states that you need to write about an animal in the UAE - off topic</mark></em></div><div><br></div><div><em><br></em><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 08:14:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Amna hussain </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The following essay will be talking about falcons, which are endangered and they’re found in the UAE. <br><br>The falcon is one of the most endangered species  in Abu Dhabi ,so now a company undertakes monitoring of this species to understand how it acts and what are it’s trends to know how to take action when it’s declined.<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-20 05:13:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Meera Muneer</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>  Endangered animals are animals that are found in almost all the countries  around the world. The following essay will describe one of many endangered animals which is the Arabian Tahr which is often found in the mountains of northern UAE.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-20 08:04:57 UTC</pubDate>
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